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New Song ( Just lyrics)

Postby Vettori » Nov 28th, '05, 03:01

Pointless End

(Intro)

Ok, Look, Be honest with yourself,Has there been times,
when you look up at the sky, and wonder,
How much farther does this shit go,
Like Beyond the universe itself, What was before it,
For me I've thought about it,
But I always get "Fuckin Lost"

(Chorus)

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would never Find Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "I dunno"

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would never Find Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "Who Knows"

(Verse 1)

I'm so sick of getting lost, I'm sick of following up,
I'm sick of Trying to think Past why were all Growin up
Havn't you ever wondered What life would be like without you,
Hasn't it crossed your mind, Don't lie cmon be true,
There isn't anything to lose, Nothing to gain,
Just a minute of sittin there tryin to think,
Over dead lost memories, and tears of rejoice,
All the thoughts of the young men, girls, Woman and boys,
All that i ask of you now, Please take me into your hearts,
Theres No time to finish, But theres Time to restart,
And so Our...

(Chorus)

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would neverFind Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "I dunno"

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would never Find Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "Who Knows"

(Verse 2)

It's Not always Fair, Why do people always treat us liek shit,
When I say us, I mean everyone, We don't gotta be like this,
We can try to change and try to make everything right,
Or Are You Mutha Fuckin Pussies To scared To Up and Fight,
Shit I was Right, You all too fuckin Hopless and lame,
To stand up and fight what the Government calls a game,
Tell us everything we wanna know, and we aint gonna stop,
Till you understand the concepts,This is what we got, Fuck the cops,
Fuck the Police, Man I wanna reach the fame,
Like Tupac shakur sayd, "I'm Loyal To The Game"
And so Our...

(Chorus)

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would neverFind Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "I dunno"

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would never Find Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "Who Knows"

(Verse 3)

Well shit, Now that thats off my Mind, Lets Intertwine,
Lets Try and help These kids Let us all be remind-ed
On how Hard it was Being a fuckin Sidedish,Behind this,
Behind me, There is more then can be seen, self esteem,
It's a reckless act of Probation, also known, Not a pretty scene,
Grimey and green, Selfishness evolves into Greed,
And from Greed Nothing better then You them and me,
We are all the same type of people at that,
Fuckin scandals Fakers and "I wanna be bigger, I wanna rap"
Well shit Lemme inform you about the facts,
Truth Hurts and same with the people who stab you in the back
And Those are the people Who think there all that
And so Our...

(Chorus)

Thoughts That Get stopped upon the lookback, We could dig and dig, and we would never Find Crap, As hard and long as are search may Go, How the fuck Does the universe Unfold, "Who Knows"

(Outro)

Hey, How much is that Gun,
"Thats exactly $599..With tax comes too..
Shit man, Don't worry about that yo, heres a Grand..
Keep the change, You got bullets for this?
"Yes here"
(Click) Thanx.....(Bang)
(Sound Of Body Dropping)

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Postby Trigger » Nov 28th, '05, 04:53

nice outro...thats about all i can say pce!
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Ayo

Postby Vettori » Nov 29th, '05, 05:56

Well I'm Glad "some" of you liked it lmao, I didn't expect it to get to many responses, But meh, I did what i did, Peace all

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Ayo

Postby Vettori » Nov 29th, '05, 21:17

Thanx All, "Thanx Alyssa", I Hate actually thinking of it, cause it actually gets me lost LMAO, How wierd eh, Like What came before earth, what was before the universe, Then farther out, How did it start....LIKE, WOW i'm lost as we speek LMAO, meh, anyways I hope you all enjoyed it,
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 29th, '05, 21:40

Good outro. Love it.
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Postby detroit_prince313 » Dec 3rd, '05, 20:27

yo dis is tight!!!!
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nice shit

Postby em16 » Dec 16th, '05, 10:45

nice song man..!
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 20:47

...do you know how to count bars? because if you want to record this song, you need either 8 for a group song or 16 bars. no in betweens.
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Ayo

Postby Vettori » Dec 30th, '05, 20:52

Ok This was Royal Shit lmao, But,
Pelkey myself, and are boi JReyez, Are Recording a song today, So me or pelkey will put it up
And yea thanx dragonz edge, The beat I was listnin to for this was really short, so i was limited to bars, It's changed now/......:P
Get ready

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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 30th, '05, 20:59

no matter how short the beat, its still 8 or 16 unless your beat is fucked up. on the song you got 11 bars for the first and second verse and 13 for the third.
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yeye

Postby Vettori » Dec 30th, '05, 21:02

The beat was fucked, Just trust me it was some pre-school shit LMFAO
Just wait tho, For my audio...It's done accuratly
It's really good quility, and The flow's really good
I think you all will like it
But yea thanx for pointing that out bro...
I liked ur spit to Tigger by the way, It's Obvius some people can't drop the beef even tho it's like 3 weeks old LMAO....Peace Dragonzedge

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Postby xariuss » Dec 31st, '05, 02:50

lmfao outro sucked... if ur so rich why r u rapping

in my opinion it just sounded like a half hearted atempt of being cool.. but that's just me

the rest was aiight

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Postby Vettori » Jan 1st, '06, 23:56

Your a very mouthy Mutha fucker, Gotta prob deal with it, I'm Actually doin really good now, If you wanna check out the audio, me and my Boy's did, In audio section...Oh bye the way, That audio your gonna hear is our very first attempt with a real studio....so HAHA good luck comparing yur shit to mine...Peace

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