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Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 20th, '08, 00:47

whether it's me writing or spitting on this site i'm submitting
inside i'm not kidding cuz i'm ready to fight
the fire i light will be getting wider that's right
and there's no time for forfeiting
i'm not tired, my might inspires those sitting
to climb higher to heights that requires not quitting
stop cryin, egnite, supply what you're fitting
by replyin, it's time to unite and find the guidance, forget being
silent, decide it tonight cuz your script is arrivin so sign on the line
if you're wise you'll survive while the wicked are dying
denial declines, then quick into a rival you'll rise cuz your wisdom won't widen
you're picking a ride which violence to victims recides, the horizon should guide
like does a pilot, your life style plus mine
after awhile that's really the trial you'll find
unless nothing matters from miles of climbin ladders and vines
to your final chapter, don't stand in a line
try lookin for answers, some kind of a sign
cuz i like the laughter, the smiles and also sunshine
rather than the battles, the vile and the awful grime:
the patterns we're dialed to, to better our crime


*pretty much means find what you love and know who you truly are rather than follow the wrong crowd
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Dec 6th, '08, 20:42, edited 2 times in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: inspire

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 20th, '08, 00:50

So uplifting! I enjoyed this very much.... it really means a lot to me seeing I've felt like quitting also...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: inspire

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 20th, '08, 00:52

thanx man, i'm glad you got something out of this one.
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Re: inspire

Postby jigglinj » Nov 20th, '08, 04:35

Cool, good vork! :y:
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Re: inspire

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 20th, '08, 06:53

THAT WAS PRETTY DOPE MAN,
altho concept was a lil old, rhymes were sick
wiked stuff
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: inspire

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 20th, '08, 14:47

well even if it's old, it can still remind people to focus on what's most important to them
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