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Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 20th, '08, 00:28

just a verse that i did about 3 months ago...and a hook im not on the hook tho

http://www.zshare.net/audio/51565290fe8053a5/

feed is really appriciated

btw i was to lazy to mix the shit good...but it sounds fine...i think i added some shit to i cant remember...
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 20th, '08, 03:11

bump? :angry: lmfao
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Postby Solace » Nov 20th, '08, 03:21

Mixing was okay, lyrics were good, something not bad to bump to. I thought the beat could have been better but it wasnt bad. Keep it up, your doing well :y:
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 20th, '08, 03:29

shadymademe wrote:Mixing was okay, lyrics were good, something not bad to bump to. I thought the beat could have been better but it wasnt bad. Keep it up, your doing well :y:

there really was no mixing...i think i might have but a little reverb in it ... and naa this was also me experimenting, just to see if i could rap to this type of song ya know?
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 20th, '08, 12:59

First of all, love your voice man! Think I've said it before.
Think you did well on this beat. And for the fact that there was no mixing, I think it's sounds fire man!
Flow was nice.
Can't complain about the delivery at all.
And the lyrics were fine, nothing special, but still good.

Overall, enjoyable track. Good work man!
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Postby Tornado » Nov 21st, '08, 23:06

umm no second or third verse but chorus? unless your planning for extra verses.
realy didnt care for it to be honest, you sounded ok on it, nothing special and of course i dont care for the type of beat on it or song but mix sounds ok
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Postby Solace » Nov 21st, '08, 23:39

KillahGoat wrote:First of all, love your voice man! Think I've said it before.


Forgot to mention that, i like Sticcys voice too :flower:
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby KDEWolf » Nov 22nd, '08, 05:17

did anyone notice that the beat was from cassies "Me & You"....

Anyways u need to enunciate on the hook. its a bit messy.
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 22nd, '08, 06:59

KDEWolf wrote:did anyone notice that the beat was from cassies "Me & You"....

Anyways u need to enunciate on the hook. its a bit messy.

that wasnt me on the hook buddy
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Postby Tash8 » Nov 22nd, '08, 07:00

not bad, but work on your pronunciation, that seems to be your main problem.
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby DelinQuent » Nov 22nd, '08, 07:17

you sound so southern on this.

flow is good.

as you said the mixing is a bit odd. overlays are weird.

rhymes are good.

overall, verse was pretty dope. couldnt understand half of what you were saying due to the odd accent you used in this, but i enjoyed this.
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 22nd, '08, 07:27

DelinQuent wrote:you sound so southern on this.

flow is good.

as you said the mixing is a bit odd. overlays are weird.

rhymes are good.

overall, verse was pretty dope. couldnt understand half of what you were saying due to the odd accent you used in this, but i enjoyed this.

i am southern dude lol
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Postby DelinQuent » Nov 22nd, '08, 08:13

wtf? i always thought, for some reason, that you were from ohio lmfao

where you from?
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 22nd, '08, 08:22

DelinQuent wrote:wtf? i always thought, for some reason, that you were from ohio lmfao

where you from?

Florida...
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Re: Stiiccy - travel her body

Postby Robbie G » Nov 23rd, '08, 00:30

I liked this sticcy, you had a good voice on it. To be honest though I don't think i understood just about any of it. So pronunciation could be better.

Other than that pretty dope. :y:
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