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Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 06:31

The time has come for me to release the much antisapated single from me new album "Grunge Rapz"

this song is called Hate Me, it describes the hatred that I get everywhere...

please tell me what you guys think


http://www.zshare.net/audio/517736208dd08662/

http://www.myspace.com/sticcyz08

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dont get wrong, i once had dreams,
but now broke with no job, and deathly sick as it seems,
i mean how was i to know id be a white rappa and broke,
whos losin his flow, and the pills are stutin my growth,
im a fish who cant float, im sinkin to the bottom,
cant afford new clothes, the ones i got are rotton,
i aint stoppin, ya cant stop whats done stoped
i got put in the shop, installed a new brain to rot,
put the kids in the corner, i see em in a miniute,
gotta finish, the espesode of scubs that im missin,
now there cryin, babys momma pregnant with brayens,
i feel like submirane, while everone else is high flyin,
there goin fast forward, while im in rewind,
like whatchin the same movie, 15 times,
rip off your favorite rapper, and rhyme with these lines,
smoke dope pop pills, commit felony crimes,

(chorus)
im a spirlin disaster, cant nobody save me,
everone is shootin, join in and hate me,
serious tried, got yall debating,
ridin in my hurse, man it dont even phase me,
depression is fun, the shrinks love me too,
im the soldier of th few, and my brain is blew,
came to spew, hate me, hate me you,
killer is the reaper, i had nothin to do,


so low down and dirty, if ya never heard of me,
i robbed an old man, an stole all his stuff from him,
a recylcing hate ball, seelin 8 balls,
the perfect of example, that life aint a cakewalk,
its nitemire to most, get the speed to coast,
so icey ya froze, like me at a show,
it aint funny, being broke wid no money,
im losin my voice, and my nose is runny,
my looks aint stunning, my chest aint cunning,
i didnt get the bunny, i got the freeeak,
she makes me skiit, and sings me to sleep,
number 1 out cast, number 1 of the kreeps,
double zero is my number, and wear it proud,
neva lookin up, cuzz im travlin down,
makin noise wid no sound, lost and neva found,
lets face it yall, hate makes the world go round



i got the public persona, of a dead beat father,
who eats cheetos all day, and sings covers of nirvana,
prolly a bank robber, lets just throw in the lava,
take him to the coppers, they need study him at havard
well its not all fact, tho i am wreck,
and if i dont get signed, ill shoot label excet,
kidnap his whole family, and blow up there private jet,
take all there money to chet, and will buy the internet,
im the blacksheep of the hurd, always shoutin my words,
speak shit you neva hurd, and flip grandma the bird,
teach ya kids curse, make ya son perverse,
make you girl wear no shirt, nope there aint no worse,
i see hatred of people, everywhere i go,
shoutin insults, most are lowblows,
the boat that cant row, done lost my soul,
like alice in chains, man im down in a hole,
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 24th, '08, 07:03

Haha I have this single I've been saving for over a year called Hate Me, that's funny, lol.

Not really feelin' the voice on it to be honest, when you say grunge I picture something deeper or darker you know?

Flow is pretty cool, suits the beat nicely. I'm diggin' the beat 'cause it's different, and it's pretty catchy, lol.

Rhymes are alright, liked some of the punchlines in there, keep shovin' them out, haha.
I think the end of the first verse was kinda Eminemish though imo.

Keep it up man!
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 07:16

Steve Spag wrote:Haha I have this single I've been saving for over a year called Hate Me, that's funny, lol.

Not really feelin' the voice on it to be honest, when you say grunge I picture something deeper or darker you know?

Flow is pretty cool, suits the beat nicely. I'm diggin' the beat 'cause it's different, and it's pretty catchy, lol.

Rhymes are alright, liked some of the punchlines in there, keep shovin' them out, haha.
I think the end of the first verse was kinda Eminemish though imo.

Keep it up man!
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thx man..and well this was the first single so i tried to make it have that poppy feel to it
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Xray » Nov 24th, '08, 09:10

The idea of the song is pretty cool, the voice works with the beat. Flow and delivery works perfecto to. Good shit to chill to, lyrics were cool (hardly can hear what your saying though), fun to listen to. New type of song from you, it was pretty cool, except the mixing was too wet sounding.

Cause your voice is high pitched as fuck on this one so would of been cool if the vocals had some deepness in them (lil more bass or some shit). You should definitely consider buying a preamp, cause no matter how loud you spit in the mic, it's all same volume and it never peaks. So it's something really important to have. Good song 8/10, pretty enjoyable.
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 09:11

thanks sajjad...really appriciate it bro
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 24th, '08, 12:08

Funny shit man!

I like this a lot. It's nice to hear something different from the usual rap.
You really pulled off that crazy ass voice and this jazzy beat perfectly!
Though the mixing could be a little better i think, but that's not a big deal, at least not to me.

And like Steve Spag said, some of it were kinda Eminemish, especially in the first and last verse. But that's coll since you said that about "ripping off your favorite rapper" or something.

The hook is insane and it works well for this kind of track.

But still I like your "serious" songs a lot more. You have the perfect voice for that kind of stuff you know.


But still, really good job man! :y:
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Robbie G » Nov 24th, '08, 12:47

It was alright, but to be honest I can't stand the voice. :sweating:
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 14:19

Shady Babie wrote:It was alright, but to be honest I can't stand the voice. :sweating:

see all the hatred :(

haha but anywho

thanks for the feed yall...and yeah killah i enjoy my serious songs more also...but hey it would get old if i did the same ole shit lol..
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby SajN » Nov 24th, '08, 14:46

Cool track.

Didn't understand much of what you were saying, but the lyrics were the so it's all cool.
It was a different track, but good. Flow was good and same was the delivery.

Your voice didn't bother me :)

I lol'd when the beat started :p but it was different in a positive way.

It was an ok track :y:
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 24th, '08, 15:14

thanks man...
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Postby Solace » Nov 24th, '08, 22:05

First off, the beat was nice. Your voice was a little annoying but i could listen through it. The lyrics were nice too, the mixing was good too. Your flow was good, i liked the chorus when you said "the shinks love me too". Keep it up, ill be checking out Grunge Rapz when its out man :flower:

LOL @ the chet line btw :p
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 25th, '08, 00:11

shadymademe wrote:First off, the beat was nice. Your voice was a little annoying but i could listen through it. The lyrics were nice too, the mixing was good too. Your flow was good, i liked the chorus when you said "the shinks love me too". Keep it up, ill be checking out Grunge Rapz when its out man :flower:

LOL @ the chet line btw :p

thanks bro!!!!...and yeah it should be out preety soon
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 25th, '08, 00:55

sticcy = :worship: :worship: :worship:

this is str8 genious shit

first, the beat is a masterpiece, where you got that??... amazing choice

lyrics are great, you managed to make it very enjoyable, made me pay double attention, and many many creative lines, excelent work

the mixing sucked dick, you need to ask someone for help on that area, but still pretti nice

hook is a masterpiece, I would've made it more catchy tho'

but yeah, excelent work, excelent choice of beat, excelent new style, my fav. track from you by far

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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 25th, '08, 02:15

Ax ur the shit thanks homie...!!!

you prolly know more about REAL music than anyone here...so for that :worship:
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Re: Hate Me - Sticcy Z FIRST SINGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Nov 25th, '08, 04:49

wow this fuckin hilarous... seriously i did not expect this.. .and i'm not one to dickride anyone but I gotta say this is one of the fewest songs here that put a smile on my face... i like it and it def has replay value... great choice for a first single... make it catchy but has meaning to it...

pretty great man, DEF ur best song i've heard from you.. flow is a bit choppy sometimes but who cares i think u meant it like that ya know?

lyrics were pretty funny and entertaining not too complex but they didnt need to be and i like the few multis i saw in there..

great job, will be listening to this more.
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