Sincerely Yours-Mixtape

by **Tornado** » Nov 22nd, '08, 16:34

Ill download this (Braces himself for autotune)..proper feedback on monday

by **dbeauluvswomen** » Nov 22nd, '08, 18:35

im gonna check this out

by **DelinQuent** » Nov 23rd, '08, 01:05

the autotune is very tasteful in my opinion, i didnt use it to sound trendy or to do a club song. so you might find it good, or you can hate it lmfao

thanks for those who said they'll be feeding, i'm looking forward to it.

by **Xray** » Nov 23rd, '08, 09:23

Intro - Flow is choppy as hell man, you stop like every 2 seconds, shits annoying. And the tremble is maximized, my fucking ears are hurting man, its way to much tremble. If mixed better this would have sound alil better, but still the flow is really really choppy. Lyrics are alright, delivery wasn't bad, but yeah the mixing.

Dear World - Hahahaha at the singing, sounds like some play school shit lmfao, and holy shit when that sample chorus pops in, crazy. Fuck man I'm in love with that sample chorus. Deep lyrics, and concept, and I found out why your flow sounds choppy, its because you have breathing problems. I suggest you either do some "expand your lung capacity things" or shorten your lines so you can spit them without hesitation. Delivery and emotion is deep, but the mixing is bad, very bad. When you increase the tremble in a vocal, the deepness disappears so this is really disappointing because if you mix these tracks better they would be a lot better. (Just creamed my pants listening to that sample chorus again) :zipped:

Good song though, loving the concept and the beat. Replay material.

It Gets So Hard I couldn't agree more, I mean listening to your love songs makes me extremely horny. (already left feedback for this song)

Dear Girl - Intro is awesome man, loving that shit, gave me chills at start cause I was like damn this is gonna be crazy, then the lyrics got dumber and I was like damn. You tried to do something different and I respect that, cause the delivery is something different to what you normally do, cause it sounds sort of darkish and loving (as in love type tracks not me loving lmfao) you know? Won't listen to this song again.

Love Me Too - Sample chorus is wack and gay for my liking. Lyrics are ridiculous, your also using the word "love" when clearly the chorus says it's a love song, lol so bad mistake. Lyrics should have been better, it's way to basic. "Fell in love, you can love me too, I'm so smooth it's what I do, what I do is I like you, wish you'd like me, cause you might be, the prettiest thing that I've ever seen" what more can I say but lol wack. Not feeling this song at all, it's weak in most aspects, lyrics, lack of creativity, beat. Won't listen to this song EVER again.

Bad Girl - Lmfao at you getting a boner at your voice being autotuned in the intro hahah. What's more disappointing than that is, the beat sounded so good at the start and now it's turning into some major homo shit. "Bad Girl" come on man, that title is played it by far. If you wanna do something for the girls at least try to impress the guys by creativity, cause the lyrics are fucking weird. Not as simple as your past track, but definitely weirder, fucked up song. Won't play this song again.

Michael - Lmfao at this song, it's weak as fuck. "Put some bandanna's on, red hat like Santa Clause" hahaha ridiculously wack. Here we go again, choppy flow and bad mixing. Won't play this song again.

Kill Me - I would be more than delighted to, lol. Beat is weird as fuck, don't like it one bit, verses aren't hot, not feeling it (once again chop chop choppaaay flow) Won't play this song again.

Scarred - Cool lyrics, and I like the idea of the spitting, but the volume of the beat is so fucking low this track sounds dead. But good emotion and delivery, might play this song again.

Feel The Rain - Wanna feel my fists? lol fuck you for using autotune. Hated this song with a passion, sounds cocky and gay as fuck, and the lyrics are just ridiculous. I'm ashamed to even hearing that chorus coming from a rapper, and an underground rapper too. Damn puts me down to be honest, cause I always thought we underground rappers are better but you flip that statement and make it the opposite. Won't play this song ever, EVER, ever, EVER again.

Realest Rapper - First off, the vocals are distorted, and the tremble is fucking killing me. "Not Souljah Boy, but I can get silly" hahahaha that's gotta be the gayest shit I've ever heard. You sound very bitchy on this song man, corny as fuck. And saying your all lyrics and shit but it's not true, and that's annoying, claiming something your not. I have to admit you ruined a good beat. Won't play this song again, actually maybe I would not sure.

Leavin - Man this is fucking annoying, I'M NOT A FUCKING GIRL YOU KNOW!?! I WANT RAW MATERIAL NOT GIRLY SHIT GEEZ. Hate this song, your delivery got me frustrated and that HOMOSEXUAL TO THE EXTREME beat makes me want to commit suicide. Won't play this shit EVER FUCKING AGAIN!

Not Mine (Untouched Remix) - "Your not my girlfriend" thank fucking god for that, cause listening to these tracks makes me wonder, "Am I Gay?". Fuck man this is getting very irritating, I feel like a vagina with a thrush, with no cream to stop the itching. Won't play this song ever again.

White Boy - Judging from all those love songs -_- this statement: "It's that white boy" should be changed to "It's that white boy who makes trashy love songs". Seriously stop using these beats, there fucking wack and ridiculous. What's worse than the title of this song is the track lol FUCKING WHITE BOY!

Hands Tied - "Sincerely Yours, mixtape of the year I hope" Riiiiight. Okay this song is pretty good, the flow is cool and the lyrics actually mean something (BIG FUCKING SMH) and the beat is fucked up, but it matches your voice. Good laid back song, might play this song again.

Something Feat. Big Ax-D - OMFG! I never thought I'd see this day come, EVER. Two autotuners on the same track

holy shit, should of warned me at least so I could step my hating game up. I disagree with the title, this song is "NOTHING". Wack as fuck, won't play this song ever again.

Dying Feat. D-Dubs - This song is definitely more alive than the others, at least the beat doesn't make me feel sleepy. I've already left feed for this song (I think) so I won't go into more detail.

Sincerely Yours - Your first and last song minus the Intro and Outro is the better ones on the tape. Beat felt deep and so did the lyrics, concept was cool too. Definitely would play this song again, even though it has very poor mixing. But still good.

Outro - I've never in my life felt so glad that a tape is at it's end ever before. Just saying that this tape was trash. Thank god for this song being good, it actually has some replay value, but most of the other tracks, damn step your fucking game up.

Overall - Your beat choice is very bad, your mixing is horrible, all I hear is tremble, and weirdly even your beats sound trembly, bad mixing man very bad. AutoTune couldn't stand it, I don't appreciate someone acting hard with a singing ability that doesn't exist you know? it sounds fake. Flow is choppy you already know, you really really need to work on your breathing, that's a major problem for tracks. A very boring tape, with no exciting tracks whatsoever.

Sincerely Yours Xray

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Nov 23rd, '08, 14:55

wont leave depth feed just overall....
its was an okay tape...sumthin like a 6 - 8/10.....all flows were pretty mastered....concepts....they were well chosen ...and sumtimes i had the feeling that couple lines came a bit random lol....
about ur delievery.....u got this weird delievery in my opinion...doesnt sound natural most of the time....(exceptions: scarred,releast rapper)
as i said the good flow made up a lot....good listen.... :y:

but imma be honest and tell u that i wont listen to it again and again....like Maybe would lol.....just not my cup of tea
objectiv view: Maybe may be right (lol)....some tracks have replay value...but honestly the reasons ( to 70%) are the sampled hooks...
as i said...ur tape is sumwhere between 6 - 8 /10
was nuttin special...and wasnt wack...

by **DelinQuent** » Nov 24th, '08, 01:27

sajjad-thanks for the COMPLETE honesty.

i think you have the idea of me. im not an 'underground' rapper. never claimed to be. never will be. im only underground because im not famous, but i do not follow the 'underground' style/genre.

as for my 'choppy' flow, thats my style, thats exactly how i write, i write with the breaks and pauses planned in.

as for "Not Mine" if you'd listen, it's not a love song... at all.

and "White Boy" is me mocking the song "White Girl" by Young Jeezy and USDA.

and as for track 10, that wasnt me thinking i was good at singing, that was me getting very personal on the track and i felt the only way to do that was to sing. i felt like maybe my bad singing could help more people connect to me, and feel like me.

basically, if you thought i was gonna come on some 'underground' shit, i'm sorry your disappointed.

but seriously, BIG thanks for being completely honest.

by **Xray** » Nov 24th, '08, 02:22

Aight cool man, yeah you've never posted a tape here, but now I know your style, and I will still check your shit and give you my input, even if I don't enjoy it that much. Yeah there's no reason giving false feedback, don't feel bad though, if I was to feed my own shit, I'd be doing the same shit. So all good, I'm sure a lot of people on here enjoy love type music. :y:

by **B.A.D.** » Nov 24th, '08, 03:50

here ya go, I may not be very deep into everytrack, but here it goes anyway

1.-Intro,
nice idea of using the beat, nice intro, at the start the flow is not matched well with the beat, I dunno... its cool anyways

2.-Dear World
wow!!... amazing singing at the begining, autotune excelent, the sample is AMAZING, i fucking love this track, damn, great great song, I loved the concept, and the lyrics, :y:

3.-It Gets So hard
smh... u filthy ma fucka.... hahahah j/k... already revied this, amazing track

4.-Dear Girl
I fucking love the start, and the beat, excelent idea for a track, I loved it, flow is perfect, mixing is perfect, concept is perfect, genious track... the lyrics are a masterpiece... the hook is great
my fav so far

5.-Love Me Too
Epik tha dawwwwn hahahaha.... hmm I didn't liked the singin at all, too corny.. hmm, dunno, didn't enjoyed this track. its good tho'... but hook sucks hahaha

6.-Bad Girl
all the beats you chose sound the same lmao... but well, its your style so I respect it.
you sound excelent on the autotune at the begining... oh shit, correction about the beat, its a piece of art, real nice, and you defo ripped it... damn, this song is crazy too :worship:

... hook is amazing
defo liking the tape so far

7.-Michael
the flow isn't workin well on here, didn't enjoyed bcuz of that, but the concept is a masterpiece, and the hook also didn't liked it... lyrics are amazing, deep n hard stuff, defo got balls for this track, I like that, but not my fav.

8.-Kill Me
Gangsta shit, the intro is kool, the beat is also great, flow is very well done here, I like this track, defo Big big replay value, only thing I didn't liked was the mixing, vocals were too loud... other than that, good good track

9.-Scarred
beat is too low, u should turn up the volume there.
hmm... ahh can't enjoy it bcuz of that... anyway, lyrics are amazing, youre a genious for love songs.
and the hook sample is a masterpiece!!... fix the mixing of this song.. its a great track

10.-Feel The Rain
wow, beat is great, fuckin lovin it
nice singing, I like this kind of tracks, something diferent, I like it... although is too slow, but the rythm is amazing, also the hook is genious... defo liked this track, great great job

11.-Leavin
hmm again beat volume is too low...
beat is werid, easy to flow to, nice choice, and the hook is genious hahahaha I love it
hmm, but I dunno, not of my top likes

12.-Not Mine
lol, too many girl songs hahahha... but hmm, nah... didn't liked this track, also flow is not 100% accurate, but well... I could listen to this again, there are some very nice lines on this.... filthy bastard hahahaha

13.-White Boy
OOOHHH I love that beat... white girl, USDA in da buildin'!!!
hahahaha
hmm the white girl original track is untopable hahaha... but nice try

14.-Hands Tied
deep lyrics but, hmm again this is like the only lil'wayne track that I originally like hahaha
but the flow is great here... its an amazing track if you pay close attention to the lyrics, but very very good job

15.-Something (featuring Me)
lol.... WORD.... great idea to put the track in the mixtape
:worship:

16.-Dying
already fed this... beat is a masterpiece... I like this track a lot

17.-Sincerely Yours
only one word: MASTERPIECE
this is the best track of the whole tape... I loved it... great work

18.-Outro
where do you get this beats man??
great outro, excelent talk to finish the tape... big replay value for an outro :y:

Overall:
good: you kept your style 100% without being affected by others comments, you should always do what you want to do. nice that its a long tape, many things to listen too, some very good ideas, excelent beat choice... I loved it... 10/10 easy... you putted your heart on this, so that counts more than anything else

bad: lack of topics, bad mixings, too repetitive

last words: great job :worship:

by **DelinQuent** » Nov 24th, '08, 04:26

Xray wrote:Aight cool man, yeah you've never posted a tape here, but now I know your style, and I will still check your shit and give you my input, even if I don't enjoy it that much. Yeah there's no reason giving false feedback, don't feel bad though, if I was to feed my own shit, I'd be doing the same shit. So all good, I'm sure a lot of people on here enjoy love type music.

no i completely understand where youre coming from :y:

thats why i shouted you out in the original post, you always give me complete no holds barred opinions. thanks again man, i really appreciate that you took the time to listen. :y:

Ax- glad you liked it :y:

track 17 was a song i did for a close friend of mine, his girlfriend of 3 years broke up with him so thats where the inspiration came from.

chris-thanks for taking the time out to listen and give some feedback :y:

i completely agree that there is a lack of topics which makes it a little repetitive at times.
bad mixing... well im working on that with every song lmfao.

by the way track 16, Dying, is a different version than the one emadyville posted, in the one he posted im on the middle verse and he has 2 verses. on the tape he has the middle verse and i have 2 verses.

THANKS for anyone who even bothered to listen. it means a lot to me.
BIG THANKS, to anyone who left any sort of feedback, it means a lot more to me.

by **DelinQuent** » Nov 24th, '08, 04:54

actually the entire first verse of White Boy directly coincides with jeezy's. so yes, i did it on purpose lol.

and as for changing my note on Feel The Rain... i cant sing, i cant change my pitch lmfao.

Leavin uses the exact same beat and chorus as Jesse McCartney's song titled the same thing.

good to see everyone enjoyed the outro, thats also one of my personal favorites, meant a lot to me.

HUGE thanks for finishing the feedback CHET* :y: