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L.I.F.E

Postby mista slimy » Nov 28th, '08, 21:26

sup yo :) here ya got new rhymes i did this day :)

i remember the time when i was young
me and ma friends on the playground
passin' the ball and havin' some fun
not thinkin' about " how is it goin' to be a man ? "
now the time is lil' bit different, i'm not a small boy
they treat me as a grown-up, now the life is not only joy
now i need to see some things i didn't see ever before
tryna act like an eater to survive and get some more
sometimes i need to play agressive but not on the pitch
to see them all ass fakaz layin' in the ditch
it's not cuz of nothin', there is some shitty reason
to boot'em fuckers up to be on the top in the upcomin' season
sometimes i have ta act like a fuckin' sly fellow
to spend the rest of my life in the colours of mellow
playin' dumb as much as i can
cuz there couldn't be anotha great "PrisonBreak" plan
it ain't easy fo' me to lead my life in a good way
seein' what the fuck is goin' on on the world today
hey, i'm not gonna live wit an eye patch
cuz it's simple way to be dispatched
life is a bitch, don't you know that?
today you are here, tomorra ya're on the edge
come here for anotha bad news
Dwayne Wade iz in TV wit his brand new shoes
come here again for a double happiness
Brit's new album has been leaked - ohh what a mess!
we're gettin' excited by shit that happens to millions
seein' some things we can't have there's an envy that costs us billions...
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Re: L.I.F.E

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 29th, '08, 15:20

it's good man ,, i liked it .. it flow well to me ,, rhymes were good 2 .. keep it up :y:
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Re: L.I.F.E

Postby mista slimy » Nov 30th, '08, 13:51

z_em wrote:it's good man ,, i liked it .. it flow well to me ,, rhymes were good 2 .. keep it up :y:


thanx a lot z_em :)
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