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Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 2nd, '08, 03:49

This track is from a little mixtape I'm working on called "All the Way to Sydney" mixtape, will be of around 10-12 tracks or sometin like that... diferent stuff of what I've been doing
I made the beat for this track, and fucking proud of it, if anyone wants to use it, hit me up

so here

ARTIST: Big Ax-D
TITLE: Where I Belong
PRODUCED BY: Big Ax-D
MIXED BY: Drk
DOWNLOAD LINK:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/jf7jy9
(btw: zshare keeps freezing on me, so i had to use sendspace, so if anyone can upload it to zshare it will be greatly appreciated)

LYRICS:

(Verse 1)
You see where I belong, is the city of sin
and how I grew up, don't believe what you see
and from this city I won't chase a dream
beacuse in here.... what I've been?
get assaulted, the coppers watchin
one man for himself, they keep laughin
whats the reason of bein so selfish
get a gun, you don't need no help here
citizens pay taxes for them guns
the same guns that are used to rob our sons
but fuck that talkin, government shit
I'm here to tell you how I'm leaving this bitch
no more mexico for ya boy Ax-D
18 years, and can't walk the street
young enough to be the cash
this criminals got their minds in their ass

(Hook) x4
Where I belong... Mexico
where's the freedom, where'd it go?

(Verse 2)
the life as a rapper here is bullshit
you don't do banguers... then you just don't do shit
the music's abused, I jsut got used to it
I'm kinda fond of it, But I still don't push it
the limit's far away from our hands
until that, I still behave as a Free man
I'll do autotune till the day its illegal
I'll do things you hate, just to get my freedom
Where I belong... we call that freedom
where you belong... this shit's a demon
I'm takin new destinations strangely
Belive me playa, this shit ain't fakin
they don't believe me, shit, I don't care
maybe true lies for a millionaire
but I'm broke as fuck, still I gotta eat
but in mexico... ha, I'll just take my seat

(Hook)x4
Where I belong... Mexico
where's the freedom, where'd it go?

(Verse 3)
This weird society makes you do
things you never imagined you could do
thats why I love it, home sweet home
and still I will represent mexico
I love my city, but I gotta go
Destination Melbourne, and that I know
my choice is done, I'm leaving home
thank God for that... will I miss that? NO
but I will miss my dawgs, them niggaz true
and to my sweet girl, I love you too
but its not for me, no support for me
(a musician?? thats what you wanna be?)
hell yeah man, I'm loyal to that
Hip Hop's my life, take it good or bad
I still enjoy all my disrespect
see, thats a shot of power injected

(Hook)x4
Where I belong... Mexico
where's the freedom, where'd it go?
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Robbie G » Dec 2nd, '08, 03:56

Zshare Link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/521323860fcab166/

That was hot man. Your flow fit the beat perfectly. The second verse was some lyrical shit. :worship:

Can't wait for the mixtape.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Solace » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:23

:worship: Great man. Loved the intro too, nice addition. Very emotional, simple yet effective hook :y: 9/10 as Maybe said. Flow, lyrics, beat, all great.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:29

i loved this track. love seeing you do more personal songs.

are you really going to melbourne? if so, why?

loved the beat, the female sample didnt do anything for me tho.

overall 9/10, loved the delivery on the verses. rhyming was good, flow was good too.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:35

@ Shady Babie: Thanks a lot for the zshare link :worship: :worship: :worship: thanks alot for chekin, glad you liked it

@ Mc Maybe: word, thanks a lot for chekin man, greatly appreciated :y: :y: :y: btw: your sign made crack my pants literally, funny shit :worship: ... thanks for chekin

@ Shadymademe: thanks a lot for chekin,glad you liked it :wave: :whistle: :flower: big appreciated

@ DQ: word man, everything new I'm workin on its more personal stuff, I'm gonna lay low on the bangin shit for a while and focus on more personal topics, n yup, I'm goin to melbourne to study my career and I've always wanted to go to australia so... yup... haha, thanks a lot for chekin man, greatly appreciated

@ Chet: thanks a trillion bro, glad you liked it, bout the beat, well errbody gots diferent likes haha, thanks a lot bro, thanks for chekin :y:

remember, anyone wants to use the beat let me know, I want to see people rip this masterpiece :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:38

fuck... are you going to college or something out there?
i wanna go to Australia...
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:44

Pretty deep shit man, loved the flow for it. Pretty unique beat, along with the samples, but I think it suited your style nicely. Rhymes were alright, you've done better, but the flow is what stood out for me.

Keep it up man!
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Tash8 » Dec 2nd, '08, 04:48

the beat is great besides the snare, it just doesn't fit...

mixing is bad imo, u need to lower the volume and this type of song i felt u needed to overlays ur whole verse.. hook is pretty bad, it's mix badly, not catchy and not that great of a hook overall...

the veres lyrics have great meaning and flow is awesome.. my fav verse is the third one

btw why are you leaving?
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Xray » Dec 2nd, '08, 06:33

See now your thinking straight, by that I mean thats the type of shit people want to hear. That piano plays a huge role in this song, great job on the melody. But the drums are amatuer, not the pattern of the drums or snare, but the actuall sound of the snare that didn't interest me. could of been mixed better. But don't think I didn't enjoy the beat, cause I did a lot.

The way you mix your acapellas makes the tremble, hissing and reverb rise like a motherfucker. So should use less reverb, but having said that, I think you dynamic your acapella twice, cause its the same thing I used to do and get the same sort of sound. Might want to lower the hissing & tremble next time to, definitely should look into Eqing your work more.

Lyrics are deep, good enough to express your thoughts on a subject like this. I liked your verses a lot because it was real, and I respect real shit. The flow is good, the delivery is on point to, in a good way not a beginner way. The intro was a cool idea but the mixing on it wasn't good enough, but the chorus was dope as hell. Suits the beat 100%. This track > The Secret Album.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby randomghost » Dec 2nd, '08, 13:31

loved the beat....nice production....nice mixing,,...good flow...nice lyircs :y: :y: hot shit.....
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 2nd, '08, 16:14

flow is smooth as hell....pronouncation was shaky tho...
and sorry but the hook annoyed the hell out of me xD
but good work on flow and lyrics :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby mart85 » Dec 2nd, '08, 16:34

real nice track, I liked the lyrics, real inspirational like Maybe said... I would agree with xray and tash about the snare/ and the mixing, but other than that the track is sick :y: good job
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 2nd, '08, 22:40

@ DQ: nope, university... you should haha

@ Steve Spag: thanks a lot for chekin man, really appreciate you chekin this track :y: :flower:

@ Tash: thanks a lot for the feed, very usefull for the beat, ama try a better way to bend the snare in, thing is, I'm still an amateur producer so I just gotta keep tryn, thanks for the feed... and I'm leavin cuz I'm takin university on australia

@ Sajjad: wow, that is some real feed, thanks a lot for the feed, same thing on the beat, I gotta keep practicing on that, also on the mixin I need to learn how to use the plug ins you sent me, thanks a lot for feeding the track man, :y: :y: , still, I don't think its better than The Secret... thanks a lot for chekin man, greatly appreciated :worship:

@ Random Ghost: Worrdddd, thanks a lot bruh!!! waitin to hear more shit from ya :worship:

@ C-Riz: thanks bro', really appreciated, glad you liked it, but yeah my major flaw ever is still pronunciation hahah, gotta keep practicing words haha, thansk a lot for chekin :y: :happy:

@ Mart: damnz, thanks bro, greatly apreciated, but yeah, need to work on productions haha, thanks a million for chekin bruh :y: :worship: :flower:

THANKS A LOT TO ERRBODY!
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby Nu Syd » Dec 3rd, '08, 02:16

damn, love this beat , flow and lyrics on point, vocal quality needs improvement, but who cares bout that shit right now , still hear it clearly, lyrically this is probably your best song I have heard from you, this track is very deep,hook is catchy to, fits in perfect, putting this on my ipod right now! :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Where I Belong (new)

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 3rd, '08, 02:33

wooordd man

thanks a lot for that, Greatly appreciated man :worship: :y: :y: glad u liked it

still gotta work on my mixin :y:

thanks a lot man
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