I'm His Friend ft DQ

by **Emadyville** » Dec 3rd, '08, 12:08

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Only my lyrics, when I get DelinQuents I'll edit this.

This is last before my album, yeah my final rap,
I guess this is one hell of a vital rap.
I’m about to rock the mic like I’m in spinal tap,
Shit I’ll rock the mic like Phelps in his final lap,
I’ll rock the mic like Jordan trying to get his title back,
It’s all or nothing so it’s for survival act,
Like it’s life or death for me a suicidal pact,
Everyone left the game like where my rivals at?
It’s just easier to find where all my disciples at,
Cause I’m the best period! Where’s the midol at?
I guess I should never try-all that,
But Shady’s been gone wheres my idol at?
Did he pull a Mase, join the church and get his bible back?
Did he pull Lee Harvey get his rifle back?
I’m trying to sued so where’s the goddamn libel at?
Forget what I just said I ain’t liable for that…
And I got the mic-all ready so where’s Michael at?

NO HUGS!
Tell me secrets when I'm drunk,
I’m back into recording shit,
I morphed a bit, stayed true never extorted it,
(Distorted it) yeah that’s what I meant I explore a bit,
To see if the listener even listens to more of it,
I absorb in it, I’m sore from the storm of it,
And taking it to levels beyond the norm of it,
Because the core of it has me ready to sport a bit,
I pour this shit out like I can’t even hold a piss,
(Hold a piss?) yeah what line is more bold than this,
(Keep this off your album or you won’t have sold a disc)
You’d say no to this? What do you even know of this,
(I know this won’t sell if you up and fold and quit)
Wait there’s no legit way to say you don’t know the shit,
(Can you stop this verse?) Good idea I have to go and shit…

This whole song is cracked up,
Everyone just packed up,
Let’s back up, build our cred and stack up,
New rhymes to last us for years cause that’s us,
Rap’s just been blued and blacked up,
You can tell it has me smacked up,
I’ve gone nuts and lack just,
Everything I need to last us,
The facts just passed us,
So let’s build it back up,
Let’s be real not act tough,
Let it appeal and rap rough,
Why did you just slap me?

by **Jay-19** » Dec 3rd, '08, 13:15

Well, going to be perfectly honest, I did not like this that much.
The flow is not my cup of tea, too choppy. I want a more even flow all through the track.
But this track didn't have that even flow.
But still I think Emady did better than DQ flow wise, and lyric wise. It's cool that you rhymed on the same words throughout the whole first verse.
DQ sounds a bit low compared to you, maybe should raise his volume up a little.
Beat is pretty cool, sounds like something T.I. would use.

Overall, not my cup of tea.
Flow is not good and delivery needs to jump up some notches, especially DQ's delivery.

Keep dropping dudes! :y:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Dec 3rd, '08, 16:30

i kinda agree wit jay 19....dont enjoy this track and cant feel it
......altho the talkin b4 the 3rd verse was funny :y:

by **Emadyville** » Dec 3rd, '08, 16:32

Ha damn everyone else who heard this tracked loved it, o well, we tried something different we never did before, tried to make a track to make everyone laugh, anyway thanks again to both of you for feeding both songs I appreciate it.

by **mcZu** » Dec 3rd, '08, 18:14

I have to say that it's quite funny, lyrics are not bad, flow was unique on this one.
Kinda liked the flow, delivery was ok, you both did a great job.
Overall a nice song, not bad at all :y:

Keep 'em comming :b:

by **Emadyville** » Dec 3rd, '08, 18:26

mcZu wrote:I have to say that it's quite funny, lyrics are not bad, flow was unique on this one.
Kinda liked the flow, delivery was ok, you both did a great job.
Overall a nice song, not bad at all
Keep 'em comming

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Glad you found it funny, thanks for the feed

by **randomghost** » Dec 3rd, '08, 19:45

i disagree wid everyone...this track is great....i loved the word play here...lyrics is hot..flow is awesome....ur gettin better each song....keep doin what ya doin....am expecting more tight flows and lyrics next tracks...keep it up :y:

by **Ka0t1c** » Dec 3rd, '08, 22:24

i thought it was a good attempt, i def. thought it had some good humor in it, i see this could be improved both flow wise and beat wise, i didnt like the sound for it.

by **DrRapid** » Dec 3rd, '08, 22:24

I couldn't get to listen to the actual song but judging by the lyrics I liked it. The first verse was my favorite. Good stuff :y:

by **Emadyville** » Dec 4th, '08, 20:19

Here's the song for anyone who couldn't listen

http://www.zshare.net/audio/52255623acace167/

by **Slim Zaddy** » Dec 11th, '08, 15:49

i love it

by **Emadyville** » Dec 11th, '08, 17:00

z_em wrote:i love it

Why did you love it?

by **Slim Zaddy** » Dec 11th, '08, 18:14

Emadyville wrote:
z_em wrote:i love it

Why did you love it?

cuz it awesome ,, lyrics were to the point ,, rhymes as well , beat was annoying a little bit .. but it was cool .. i like the way you flow through it 2 ,, i guess it was pretty amazing, and ya your firend who is featuring , he was good 2 .. ...... so keep droppin ,,, .. :y:

by **Emadyville** » Dec 11th, '08, 20:39

Thanks for the real feed :y:

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