Nice Guys Finish Last NEW SONG

[Emadyville]

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Lyrics:
I am everything I’ve ever said in every rhyme I’ve spit,
What better time is it to set it all in line and get,
The truth out in the booth now I’m unconscious,
I’m just sick and tired of the bullshit it’s nonsense,
Why do you put me through this it’s wrong-lets,
Cut the bullshit and get right as this song-gets,
Too sad to write as I fight with the content,
My life’s in these words there’s courage in the context,
Because I’m sick of it now the gloves are off,
Love was lost so what I’ve been shoved across,
This path before, I can’t think of the loss,
What was at stake, think too soft then cross,
My own path this wrath has me in the moment,
To condone it would be letting my opponent,
Win in the battle, and right now I’m alone-it,
Feels like shit but this is my pain I own-it,

I have had girls before, and girls to date,
Girls I’d give the world for and girls I hate,
Girls I’d give my life for that I could never date,
Why are girls always the cause of my distaste,
I could open every door, be a true gentleman,
The guy you’d take home and be ready to settle then,
They play me, and you wonder why I question,
Why I’m stressing over this it’s just a lesson,
I learned the hard way, been filled with dark days,
So when we depart ways always my heart strays,
So now I start days always at a loss,
I’ve been the nice guy and I’ve paid the cost,
I’ve paid my dues wasted time with yous,
And you still place the noose like I’m just to use,
There’s no just abuse, I’ll never rush I do’s,
The only plus to you is when I [?????]….

Nice guys don’t finish last they don’t even qualify,
Should I not be myself and make a solid-try,
To change my demeanor be meaner and modify,
Call a girl I’m chasing a bitch and not apologize,
Show no respect and look at her with hollowed-eyes,
Or don’t even date just find girls that swallow-guys,
That might be better since I wrecked myself,
Can I respect them when they don’t respect themselves,
They don’t care how they act and to me it’s all scripted,
Looks like this nice guy took this subject and flipped it,
This nice guy might lie but believe I’ve been it,
Every female is the same and I’ve been in it,
I’ve stepped on some too and my feet leave traces,
But new girls give their happy to meet me faces,
Doesn’t change, it’s the same on a weekly basis,
So I pull out of it when they’re deeply spacious…

[Jay-19]

Beat is fire!!!
Intro is pretty cool I guess, builds it up good before you start to rap.
Some tight lyrics, mostly in the first verse. Good meaning of the track!
Hook could be better with some effects and better mixing in my opinion, but still enjoyable.

Overall, good track, 7/10!
Good job man!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

dude i can so relate to the lyrics at this point of my life..anywayz
flow was very sick man..just one time when u slipped and chased after the flow lol..but the beat was weird and it felt like u wasnt really on-beat...
umm....lyrics as i said..good job
delievery was decent...

[Emadyville]

Thanks to both of you guys for feeding. Funny how Killah loved the beat and chris didn't, all is good, I appreciate you checking and feeding. And yeah I def slipped up that one time but, I'm getting better.

[Jay-19]

Thanks to both of you guys for feeding. Funny how Killah loved the beat and chris didn't, all is good, I appreciate you checking and feeding. And yeah I def slipped up that one time but, I'm getting better.

Yeah, you're def improving man! Keep dropping tracks!

[mcZu]

I loved the beat, really suited the topic you had.
Lyrics were great, loved the meaning
Flow was nice, delivery could be a bit better
The intro was sick, chorus was not bad
Overall a great song, nice job

[Emadyville]

I loved the beat, really suited the topic you had.
Lyrics were great, loved the meaning
Flow was nice, delivery could be a bit better
The intro was sick, chorus was not bad
Overall a great song, nice job

Thanks for the feed, and yes delivery is one thing I'm def trying to focus on when I hit the studio next, thanks for feeding.

[Emadyville]

Pretty good imo. Lyrics were on spot, beat was great and flow was decent. I would work mainly on flow, but it seems that you're improving at a great rate.

Also, try to improve delivery. It wasn't BAD, but it could be better... isn't a hard thing to work on, just practice A LOT before you spit the actual track.

Yeah this beat threw me off a little, but I hear what you're saying, and glad you're noticing my improvement, thanks for checking and feeding, always enjoy your opinion.

[Kez]

@ you PMing me

You don't think that if i could i would be feeding everything? I don't have sound

[Emadyville]

:laughing: @ you PMing me

You don't think that if i could i would be feeding everything? I don't have sound

Calm down Kez, and why don't you have sound?

[Kez]

:laughing: @ you PMing me

You don't think that if i could i would be feeding everything? I don't have sound

Calm down Kez, and why don't you have sound?

It won't work for some reason, pretty fuckin annoying

Means i can't feed or make my own shit

[randomghost]

beat is fucking amazing...flow is tight....lyrics is good....i didnt really like te hook...too much effects...intro was ok.....ma fav. part of the song is this ( I have had girls before, and girls to date,
Girls I’d give the world for and girls I hate,Girls I’d give my life for that I could never date,
Why are girls always the cause of my distaste) nice shit man...gud lyrics.. lookin forward to hear more

[theJFKshow]

Pretty good.

You really need to improve on flowing with the beat. It seemed like you were off a lot. You need some rhythm.

[Emadyville]

Pretty good.

You really need to improve on flowing with the beat. It seemed like you were off a lot. You need some rhythm.

Yeah this beat was tough cause I was coming off a lot of fast songs, o well, hopefully the lyrics and content was good?

[theJFKshow]

Yeah lyrics were good, you just need to step your delivery up.