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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 00:37

http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquent
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/52217409dd9f692f/

New song, basically it's about the recent attention me and Pik have had with a few A&R reps. basically, i felt like it was time to stop fucking around, start taking the music a bit more serious. at the end of the second verse i say "I should go with the flow, i mean it's all i got/ and fuck it in the end, it could be my only shot" 2 meanings... one is go with the flow as in my flow when i rap, the other meaning is go with the flow when speaking with A&R.



Chorus-sometimes i ask, should i quit right now?/
got A&R callin, but it's so played out/
so ima say fuck it, and do what im about/
ima make em love me, make em smile with a frown/

VERSE 1:
there's nothin left for me to lose, so say my name like beetlejuice/
is there much for me to prove? i'll just fuckin beat em bru-/
tally till the end, so say the name and i'll/
appear, out of fear, you outta here, round the year i come/
with shit, what it's for? im done, with this, time to take it serious/
clear the list, im smearin shit, slay the beast with slander/
you can hate but take a gander, what you facin is impatitence/
what you hatin is a man that, is feelin like a maniac/

Chorus x2

VERSE 2:
should i quit, split and fold it up, i just feel like no one does/
suck a dick and hold deese nuts, and wake up like a folgers cup/
cause my flow is 'oh my god' now feel the pause/
you feel me dog? im on, my mark, start to spark a fire/
so stop do not deny me, i can feel these guys behind me/
under scope, gonna blow? no one knows, i suppose/
i should go with the flow, i mean it's all i got/
fuck it in the end, it could be my only shot/
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Postby yoshi » Dec 4th, '08, 00:46

catchy chorus. nice beat. i liked the 2nd verse more, sounded more fluently to me. overall it was cool, liked it. :y:
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

Chet wrote:Fuck House. If I wanted to watch a sarcastic person in the medical field, I would stalk Yoshi :8)
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 01:44

thanks for taking the time to listen :y:
whats the deal with yoshi invading the audio stage? lol
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Postby yoshi » Dec 4th, '08, 01:48

i wanna socialise more. :shifty:


iono, i just thought i'ma drop by and see wut's new. :y:
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 01:51

well thank you for dropping by and leaving your opinion. i appreciate it :y:
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Postby randomghost » Dec 4th, '08, 10:33

nice beat....loved the cocept.....nice hook...all verses are crazy....loved the flow and lyrics...nice shit....but the vocal need to be more powerful...like put more effort in ur delivery....but gud shit though :y: lookin forward to hear more :8)
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Postby Jay-19 » Dec 4th, '08, 14:02

Damn bro!
That's the best flow I've heard from you, the flow is great!
Also really good concept, I like these kind of tracks a lot.
Some really good rhyming, especially in the second verse, had more multies.
Too bad the song wasn't longer than it is, I would love to hear a longer version 'cuase this is by far your best track man!
I love it! :worship:
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 14:35

Worrrrrrrd. Thanks for the feed guys. As for my delivery, I wanted a more laid back approach to go along with the song.

I really appreciate you guys listening and giving your feedback :y:
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Postby Vettori » Dec 4th, '08, 19:57

From Nefarious- I didnt like it and this is a personal choice, i'd appreciate if you dont give feed on my tracks i can take bad feed but not unexperienced feed.... :o LOL
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 21:16

wow... very mature...
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 23:08

LMFAO

happy and sad at the same time? that must be a first lol

thanks for listening chet! :y:
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Postby Xray » Dec 7th, '08, 04:26

Vettori wrote:From Nefarious- I didnt like it and this is a personal choice, i'd appreciate if you dont give feed on my tracks i can take bad feed but not unexperienced feed.... :o LOL


Shut the fuck up, you can't even take feed.
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Re: Quit

Postby Boston » Dec 7th, '08, 05:02

ill feed it tomorrow but to sum it up now i don't like it sorry, i think people are exaggerating in this thread. but ill bbl.
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Postby B.A.D. » Dec 7th, '08, 20:12

hmm, I thought I already fed this track, cuz I already listened to this... still listened again

the hook is good but I know you do waaayy better hooks, still nice

nice flow domination, great topic, I loved it... verses a bit too short but they do the work real good

I like this track, only thing I would change is the beat, You did it amazing on it, but still I dunno if it matches the topic

still great song :y:
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Postby DelinQuent » Dec 9th, '08, 14:31

big thanks for feeding ax :y:
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