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New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Vettori » Nov 27th, '08, 23:09

http://www.myspace.com/pmtnefarious

http://www.zshare.net/audio/51937049740f965c/

Was just a song lyin around that he felt like recording. Sounds good aside the quality >.<

Feed would be appreciated :y:

If i told you, just a secret, and it hit you by surprise.
Would you keep it, leak it, sneak it, just to sumone, in your eyes.
Who you'd think would, treat it, deep within agreement, but disquised.
Behind, another person, theres a different, set of lies.
Bet you thought, the people, that you trusted, had your back, before you knew it.
Now you, got a couple guys, asking, when an where'd you do it.
Tryna trap ya, into schemes, they'll be there when you pursue it.
They can stare, from over there, i quite aware, you're lookin stupid.
Goof troop, knouse looped, hung and then your threw bitch.
Who snooped, loose hoop, tug and make your crew snitch.
News scoop, found dead, underneath the ground bed.
Graves where your headed, last night i paint the town red.
Brave but regretted, flash light and look around spread.
Out through the darkness to find remains.
But my raps they contain the most blindest rage.
Use the claps from the audience to find the stage.

Fuckin with lyrical warlords you fearin the four swords.
We force hordes, erie when we enter through floor boards.
I've probably been in already crept in insted.
I popped a window open, flip the matress slept in ur bed.
Im not a living creature how the fuck i rest if im dead.
I float around a phantom words are only left in my head.
I'll be usin every thought, to plot a massive abduction.
Losin anyone who's faught, across my path to destruction.

The people i hate, are all of these ignorant assholes.
I'll be leavin you inprisoned, in the dugeon's of castles.
Hard to handle the hastles, hit a point to the peak.
You should be lucky that im gettin to the point.
When i speak, the real shit, never gotta deal with.
Jelous little mother fuckers who aint, got to feel this.
I can listen to your tracks you are, not the realist.
Such a bitch'll never last, juggernauts are fearless.
Better watch your fuckin front, strikin steady in attack mode.
You aint even ready, fightin deadly when i smack hoe's.
Who you think you talkin to, i've listened to your wack flows.
You and me are walkin through, different places the back roads.
Depression i've far passed, and anger is what i chose.
Aggression is war masked, im hangin up all my foes.
He's strangling and he knows, just dangling so his toes.
Have froze, impressed, yes, i guess the rest shows.
Last edited by Vettori on Dec 4th, '08, 03:33, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fearless -Nef

Postby mcZu » Nov 27th, '08, 23:28

Liked your rhyme pattern, your flow is great.
It seems like you rhymed a bit to fast, this beat is kinda slow compared with your flow
Or it's because of the low quality..still a sick song though :y:
Enjoyed listening to it :b:
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Re: Fearless -Nef

Postby Vettori » Nov 27th, '08, 23:52

Thanks appreciate the feed :b:
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Re: Fearless -Nef

Postby Solace » Nov 28th, '08, 00:35

Thought that shit was great! I think the quality wasnt THAT bad, better than what i can acheive. The flow is great, and the beat is tight. I liked listening to it, Nef is good :y:

Vettori, you got any new songs coming out soon? I wanna listen to more of you :(
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Vettori » Dec 4th, '08, 03:39

Thanks i should be doing more soon i've just been lazy..
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Tash8 » Dec 4th, '08, 03:45

good song man, loved your flow.. hook wasn't really catchy but i dont think that was it's purpose... felt mixing was on the iffy side and quality was awful! you really need a new mic or a new computer... but better than most recent songs posted on here.
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby randomghost » Dec 4th, '08, 10:29

lol...i was about to use the same beat 4 ma album :8) .....ur delivery is really great wid the beat :y: flow and lyrics are hot :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: i know its kinda hard to do hook here...need a FT. or soem...overall...nice song....ma fav. is the 2nd verse.... :y:
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 4th, '08, 15:22

flow in the 1st verse was fuckin awesome...loved the 1st verse.....rhyme pattern flow everything
as other said...hook didnt flow to well...
2nd verse was a lil step down to the 1st verse IMO...but still excellent :y:
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 17:47

Sounds to me like he's just rhyming to rhyme. I listened to it without the lyrics and couldn't really catch what he was saying or what he meant. Then I read lyrics like "eerie when we enter the floor boards" and it turns me off.

So... Concept is garbage. But flow and delivery were both amazing.
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Vettori » Dec 4th, '08, 19:49

Well i wasnt really tryng to make a concept this song started by me writing the 2nd verse on this beat i wrote the 1st verse on a completely different beat and i wrote the chorus on another beat so it was kinda a frankenstien song, only thing i disagree with is, i do rhyme alot but you just need to listen more its called multi's lol -Nef
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 4th, '08, 21:20

your verses were sick... no denying that.

"Fuckin with lyrical warlords you fearin the four swords.
We force hordes, erie when we enter through floor boards.
I've probably been in already crept in insted."

i just dont understand the meaning of those lines... they seem random.
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Boston » Dec 7th, '08, 05:01

flow was sick (cuz of the multie's you were using and the amount you were using)
lyrics were good, but did only make sense at some point and even if you do hate to admit it some words were there just to rhyme
quality is like you said

edit: i did re listen and a lot does make sense, this shit grows on you, majority makes sense, but not all of it.
i heard way better from you though, but i still dont think this is a bad track.
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Vettori » Dec 8th, '08, 06:08

-Nef-

Yeah i kinda like the way you approached the situation but i still dont just rhyme to rhyme like sumtimes you just write sumthing that u want to keep so bad that you need to make a line that makes sense and you only have a certain ammount of words to work with i just use what i have in my vocabulary to rap how i feel or whatever the concept is about in this case it was a bunch of different things because i put this song together on 1 beat from three different writtens. and i agree this isnt one off my best tracks but its more up to date and my lyrics get better everyday and i do have some new stuff i've written like 10 new songs and i should release a couple soon lol i appreciate the feedback tho. :wave:
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Boston » Dec 8th, '08, 12:37

lol trust me i know what you mean
keep it up
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 01:53

impressive
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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