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Synchronized Rhyme

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 5th, '08, 03:45

I spit agony with the tapestry in back of me
smackin' need to the side to attack the greed
crack and weed are not needed to get this high
as you look above you see me, forget the sky
flames turn wet to dry, as I regain composure
slices to the heart numbs until the pain is over
formulating magical lyrics with the sorcerers ring
as the maniacal torturer brings the coroners in
the orchestra sings melodies with violin strings
silence stings as it comes before what violence brings
clever lyrical letters connects to lines as they fit together
stop rhyming? never, I will continue to spit forever
physical protection does not shield mental depression
and I harden fake emotions like a sentimental erection
a selection to chose what deciding battles I'll fight
you wanted beef? now watch me slaughter this cattle tonight.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby James R. » Dec 5th, '08, 03:57

What more can I say? Dope. Love it. Love your drops. Always.
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby Solace » Dec 5th, '08, 04:01

Yeah i hate that your drops are always consistent and great, it makes me feel so little of myself D:

Great drop man, your doing great with the multies & the ill vocab. Keep it up :y:
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby lilrossy » Dec 5th, '08, 04:19

shadymademe wrote:Yeah i hate that your drops are always consistent and great, it makes me feel so little of myself D::y:

Haha, thats wat i a was thinkin when i read it.
this is a great drop man (as always). really liked the flow and the vocab, crazy man. keep it up :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby Emadyville » Dec 5th, '08, 04:31

Absolutely sick :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 5th, '08, 13:26

Thanks guys for the feed, always appreciated ;)
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby Urban Punk » Dec 5th, '08, 16:22

formulating magical lyrics with the sorcerers ring
as the maniacal torturer brings the coroners in
the orchestra sings melodies with violin strings
silence stings as it comes before what violence brings


That was tight... I loved these line's... pure dope dude keep it up
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 5th, '08, 19:25

that was pretty good man, sick shit
keep it up
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Synchronized Rhyme

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 6th, '08, 17:54

nice, just the word "chose" threw me off, it should be "choose"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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