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Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

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Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby J Roc » Dec 7th, '08, 19:30

Uh Ohh .... Tha Punchline Champ Yup Yup... i'll something LIGHT!!!!

look ock im finished..whoops dawg im fibbin Cause look ya'll i'm spittin
Who say he For tha 'Cash'? he Always Need ah "Quarter Back" like Football positions
Say Something Thats New, Bitch Cause I Ain't Feeling Nothing That You Spit
no wonder he useless he carry that "Tech? No!" he was just Bumpin some music!!!! (Omg!)
'Raining' Weather Only Way Ladies "wetter" He Just Mad Cause J Be Better
It's RainTime?? Naw Even If You Don't Have tha Class Its Still "After Math" Like Shady Records!!
you wanna hear more lines? iight then
he only started using punchlines when i did (Lmao! Swagger Jacker! i noticed....)
Like Scott Steiner I'll "Pop Ah Pump" Though he Lost His Lungs I'll Put Some Air In Him Too!
I'm ah Parent To You U Just Me Seed That Alway's Gave Me "Feed Back" Like we Sharing Some Food
(Dudes Loves My Shit! hahaaa)
Ill Shoot Tha For Till Duke Is Sore.. Gee, Roc Leave "Defeats Hot" Like Ya Shoes Is Worn!(Da feet)
& His Texting Rhymes Is Like "Jedi Minds" How They Use Tha "Force"!!!!!

Yaawwwnnn
you aint worth more!!... honestly get more lyrical... you nothing but multies & weaaakk punches :o !!

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as
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killa season!!
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby James R. » Dec 7th, '08, 19:37

Better than your last diss, not better than his to you. But that's just my humble, yet so ill and experienced opinion. I'm glad you cut that caps lock shit out and the punches in this were much better. You attempted some personals, but I noticed that most of them talked about how he copied you. That's cool and all but try to be more diverse. The more shit you can bring up about him the better your shit will be because it'll hit harder. Good job though, keep it up man. This back and forth shit has been pretty amusing thus far.
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 7th, '08, 20:59

James R. wrote:Better than your last diss, not better than his to you. But that's just my humble, yet so ill and experienced opinion. I'm glad you cut that caps lock shit out and the punches in this were much better. You attempted some personals, but I noticed that most of them talked about how he copied you. That's cool and all but try to be more diverse. The more shit you can bring up about him the better your shit will be because it'll hit harder. Good job though, keep it up man. This back and forth shit has been pretty amusing thus far.

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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 8th, '08, 03:33

yeah, this is pretty good but u need personals so that it actually does hit hard
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 8th, '08, 03:37

wasnt feelin this at all...

you didnt have much word play...the flow sucked...and sometimes you didnt even rhyme :n:
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby James R. » Dec 8th, '08, 03:37

I gotta ask. What's with all the parenthetical shit? Is that your posse cosigning on what you're saying or what? Not really necessary for a text diss.
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby J Roc » Dec 8th, '08, 04:43

@ sticcy.. every bar except 1 had at least 1 peice or wordplay... tha flow sucked cause this isnt my style of writing ..... & it ALWAYS rhymed... maybe just ah different accent

@ James... thanks for peeping again lol .. i always respected your oppiniun .... n i used tha quotation marks so show part of the punch ..... its ah style everybody does on some of tha sites i go on so its my style ..... Ex "quarter back" ... referring to ah football position ... or asking for they change back ... that's why ... i dropped ah cypher ah few days ago without them n im garanteed some things went over peoples heads

lol n thanks for peeping kaotic n anonymous... appreciate it guys
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 8th, '08, 04:44

@ sticcy.. every bar except 1 had at least 1 peice or wordplay... tha flow sucked cause this isnt my style of writing ..... & it ALWAYS rhymed... maybe just ah different accent

such denial lol...

dude why dont you just do audio
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby J Roc » Dec 8th, '08, 04:46

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
@ sticcy.. every bar except 1 had at least 1 peice or wordplay... tha flow sucked cause this isnt my style of writing ..... & it ALWAYS rhymed... maybe just ah different accent

such denial lol...

dude why dont you just do audio


lol... & i was thinking of trying it out i just need ah mic to record on first... never got around to buying 1 lol
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby James R. » Dec 8th, '08, 04:52

J roc wrote:@ James... thanks for peeping again lol .. i always respected your oppiniun .... n i used tha quotation marks so show part of the punch ..... its ah style everybody does on some of tha sites i go on so its my style ..... Ex "quarter back" ... referring to ah football position ... or asking for they change back ... that's why ... i dropped ah cypher ah few days ago without them n im garanteed some things went over peoples heads

Naw I mean the parenthesis

J roc wrote:no wonder he useless he carry that "Tech? No!" he was just Bumpin some music!!!! (Omg!)

he only started using punchlines when i did (Lmao! Swagger Jacker! i noticed....)

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What's with that?
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby J Roc » Dec 8th, '08, 05:18

no reason really ... just some note's i added lol
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Re: Eye Of the Storm ( Rain Matrix Diss )

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 8th, '08, 20:05

it was nice dropp from ya man ,, but it was hard to read .. if u can just fix the structure it will be hot .. anyway keep it up :y:
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