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Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 7th, '08, 21:45

the megalomaniacal reliable illusions of viable power
is injected to these rappers who think their styles like pliable hours
when I freestyle you cower, ingenious when I write this thesis
my style will be bit to pieces, and I'll attack them like I fight diseases
cause' they are leeches, biting with glass jaws in glass halls
shatter their last calls with punchline 'boxing' like bath stalls
spit inferno till they covered in wrath's walls, and that's all
killing them, now it's hats off for a person who's that small
fuck all of that, I'll bury them in two hundred gallons of ether
massacring feeble people for pleasure like Stalin when he hurt
you don't see dirt, just ill flows that still glow and will go
to the point of no return, and come back when the kills grow
then we'll know who's the supreme verbalist in this business
my consensus is solidified within the eyes of these lyricists
typical materialists rhyming for the money and fame
they are just the dummies in pain transformed into the dummies with no name.

LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by Emadyville » Dec 7th, '08, 23:35

Wow, even though you used an incredible vocab, that still flowed nicccee. Yet again I am extrememly impressed. :worship:

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by Requiem » Dec 8th, '08, 01:43

damn, that stalin line pwned. incredible flow, and rhymes. loved it man. most complicated artist on Tr. no lie

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 01:47

Thanks dudes! and IceKilla, wow! that's a great compliment =D :flower:

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by Ka0t1c » Dec 8th, '08, 03:21

it's a good flow but i wasn't completely feeling it, still a nice drop from ya tho :y:

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oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 04:56

thanks dudes! :y:

:y:

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by James R. » Dec 8th, '08, 04:57

How in the fuck are we supposed to give feed when you keep dropping gems? Asshole lol

I agree though. Most complex by a long shot.

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 04:59

James R. wrote:How in the fuck are we supposed to give feed when you keep dropping gems? Asshole lol

I agree though. Most complex by a long shot.

Lmaoo! Thanks bro. :y:

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by Slim Zaddy » Dec 8th, '08, 20:04

nobody is going to fuck with you mc .. really u're so damn good writer. .. keep it up bro :y:

:y:

.. i liked this

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 20:58

z_em wrote:nobody is going to fuck with you mc .. really u're so damn good writer. .. keep it up bro .. i liked this

Thanks bro, :y:

:y:

Glad you enjoyed.

LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by mcZu » Dec 8th, '08, 21:12

great piece, it flowed nice, great vocab as usual :y:

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Enjoyed reading it :b:

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Re: Don't fuck with me

by MC Anonymous » Dec 8th, '08, 21:12

mcZu wrote:great piece, it flowed nice, great vocab as usual
Enjoyed reading it

Thanks bro :y:

:y:

LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..

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