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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 22:53

J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.


lollll.... its hard to beleive someone can have ah girl over tha net?? ... me = more of ah life then you .... i aint been on this site for soooooooooo long until recently .... its been like, 19 months ... n i aint got 500 posts .... what about u? ..... & u lame as hell if u can't beleive guys cant talk to girls girls loll ... says sumit about ur relationship status :o

He never said that he just said it was an overused excuse :unsure:

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J roc wrote:& @ dude above .... cause this site got tha stupidest votes lol ... ah dude gave away tha punch cat cause mine were too complex.. he said he had to think about them ... n tha other dude didnt have 1 punch ..... sooo i aint gonna waste my bars on this site lol

your not gunna waste your bars on this site...you posted up like 3 or 4 pieces already havent you?


lol... recycled concepts i made worse... or light shit i woudnt post anywhere else .... nothing i post is my best .... forum shit isn't my style lol ..... u tryina argue with shit u dont understand smh

And your on a fourm why?

"u tryina argue with shit u dont understand smh" So you say you wont waste bars here, but you have posted up some of your stuff but its not your best stuff (another excuse). And i dont understand this how?
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:54

shadymademe wrote:
J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.


lollll.... its hard to beleive someone can have ah girl over tha net?? ... me = more of ah life then you .... i aint been on this site for soooooooooo long until recently .... its been like, 19 months ... n i aint got 500 posts .... what about u? ..... & u lame as hell if u can't beleive guys cant talk to girls girls loll ... says sumit about ur relationship status :o

He never said that he just said it was an overused excuse :unsure:


he's saying people fake it over the net...
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 22:54

J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.


lollll.... its hard to beleive someone can have ah girl over tha net?? ... me = more of ah life then you .... i aint been on this site for soooooooooo long until recently .... its been like, 19 months ... n i aint got 500 posts .... what about u? ..... & u lame as hell if u can't beleive guys cant talk to girls girls loll ... says sumit about ur relationship status :o

& i learned in school .... "text" only has like 10% or so of ah conversation .... theres tha pitch, & body motions you aint gettin ..... your basing me being mad on 10% of ah conversation

& you take this shit more serios then i do ..... if u think im pounding tha keyboard of ah WACK diss at me .... go to another non biased site n post it... serios lmao

Text is the substance, if the text sucks, no matter how you say it, it still sucks.
I'm single yes, so? Now you are attacking me through your anger, go ahead and write a diss back at me. Next time I wont go so easy, and, I'll copy your style completely.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 22:58

MC Anonymous wrote:
J roc wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Exhibit A; The familiar 'girl' excuse.
Exhibit B; Arrogant ramblings.
I could go on and on, you are mad, if you weren't you wouldn't waste your time responding.


lollll.... its hard to beleive someone can have ah girl over tha net?? ... me = more of ah life then you .... i aint been on this site for soooooooooo long until recently .... its been like, 19 months ... n i aint got 500 posts .... what about u? ..... & u lame as hell if u can't beleive guys cant talk to girls girls loll ... says sumit about ur relationship status :o

& i learned in school .... "text" only has like 10% or so of ah conversation .... theres tha pitch, & body motions you aint gettin ..... your basing me being mad on 10% of ah conversation

& you take this shit more serios then i do ..... if u think im pounding tha keyboard of ah WACK diss at me .... go to another non biased site n post it... serios lmao

Text is the substance, if the text sucks, no matter how you say it, it still sucks.
I'm single yes, so? Now you are attacking me through your anger, go ahead and write a diss back at me. Next time I wont go so easy, and, I'll copy your style completely.


lmfaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

ur dumb as hell lmao

GRRRRRRRRRRRR im so pissed haha ur ah faggit lmfaoo u actually beleive tha shit ur typing?? lmao .... i was talking about what were saying now when i said text ..... = u saying im mad based on 10% of this convo .... why would i reply?... ur not on my level ... AT ALLLL ...... refer to the first post .... you wont go light??... & go try doing what i do .... you dont understand what i do anyways lol ... MAYBE tha multies right ... maybe .... but tha wordplay?? nope .... punches aint either ....

hop off rain's dick!! haha
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 23:01

252 posts in ah month?? lmaoo ... wowww .... i see why u so defensive lol ..... haha
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 9th, '08, 23:02

I dissed you because you suck, no other reason. Stop glorifying yourself like you some rapping god, cause' you are not fooling anyone. If I'm not on your 'level' then prove it. Dumb fuck.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Solace » Dec 9th, '08, 23:09

MC Anonymous wrote:I dissed you because you suck, no other reason. Stop glorifying yourself like you some rapping god, cause' you are not fooling anyone. If I'm not on your 'level' then prove it. Dumb fuck.

he has a point^^
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 23:20

MC Anonymous wrote:I dissed you because you suck, no other reason. Stop glorifying yourself like you some rapping god, cause' you are not fooling anyone. If I'm not on your 'level' then prove it. Dumb fuck.


lol... pick ah site .... not this bad voting 1 ..... i aint gotta prove to any 1 ..... cause i'm 1 of tha best on sites that would ether this 1 .... ya'll dont have ah fuckin clue what punches are but have it as ah cat?? lol lame asses ..... ANYONE CAN MAKE AM MULTIE RHYME ..... that's all u did ... n i did it better then you did .... that vote about having to think on my Keystyled punchline is PROOF this site's weak .... point blank .....

yall back each other up... but, what site respects this 1??.. umm ... ??? .... haha ... mobbfiggaz didnt ... n people on other sites respect that 1 .... i went there n i got respect ..... what good is respect from people nobody real respects?? lol .... make ah punchline .... make someone say WOW .... do something ... n i'll reply ..... that wack 1 .... isnt gonna get these golden bars ..... Rain's probably the only decent 1 i seen on this site ..... seriosly ... & your on his dick like crazy ...... battle me on ah respected site & i'll catsweep it ..... pick 1 haha & i'll post tha link here exposing ah bitch ... that goes for anyone on this site too ;)

but i aint into forum arguin as much as ur no life ass... imma go watch ah movie with that girl lol ... peeaacceee fagboy
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '08, 23:22

shadymademe wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:I dissed you because you suck, no other reason. Stop glorifying yourself like you some rapping god, cause' you are not fooling anyone. If I'm not on your 'level' then prove it. Dumb fuck.

he has a point^^


lol.... that i suck??.. this site sucks ..... this site's tha ONLY people that think this sites good lol ....

somebody said

"your either wack to tha good people... or wack to tha wack people"

im wack to tha wack people .....

im off though .... if yall aint beleive me hit ah admin & ask if im online lol ... yall can stay on all day riding each other's dick with lame lines though

buh bye :wave:
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Dec 10th, '08, 00:05

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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby James R. » Dec 10th, '08, 00:07

Well I'd say it was a pretty well written diss. Nothing to get all pissy about. He didn't even get that personal, but there were some nice punches.

And J Roc... come on homie... Don't say NO ONE can do what you do. You can't leave me outta the equation.

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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Boston » Dec 10th, '08, 00:39

to be honest this wasn't any good because there were no good punchlines and personals
- on your defense i don' t know if J Roc is better than you, or vice versa

he is light years better than you at punchlines, (and other people), thats all he really proved.

but yeah, ill let yall have fun with this.
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Dec 10th, '08, 01:18

Oh lawd I love internet fighting.
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 10th, '08, 02:41

LOL to be honest I did this for laughs.
I wanted to see his reaction is all, nothing more. :y:
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Re: Stand Down (J Roc Diss)

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 02:57

shadymademe wrote:DAMN :-#


Yeah, I'm on no ones side, I just agree it was sick.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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