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Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 16:35

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Such a nice day to be alive wouldn’t you agree,
These words are my voice or I couldn’t be free,
So I’m here to let it all out the hopes and dreams,
Of everything I am, what I’m supposed to be,
The past few months some people close to me,
That didn’t look closely, never chose to see,
Everything that has happened and arose in me,
Supposedly, we all just grow and be,
But I refuse to let go of it unknowingly,
And I refuse to be everything I’m told to be,
What happened to the term, individuality,
If you’re not yourself, I call that dual-reality,
Why settle for the same when you all can be,
One of a kind, get your smile on and be friendly,
I see friends become victims of regularity,
Like we’re all okay, when we should beg-for-clarity,
I won’t settle for drunk, live for a keg-to-carry me,
And I’m too young to ask on one leg-to-marry-me,
I’m not about to throw myself at just any female,
Look what happened to me, no need for details,
I set myself up for that, so when I derailed,
I put it all into this art, so in fact I prevailed,
But at times this outlet, just has me jailed,
Always surrounded by bars, so no chance he bails,
If I was looking for love I don’t think I could find,
So it’s for good times, and of course that would rhyme,
And I might say girls play me but I’ve played it to,
So what I say to you, ladies is stay true,
Find the guy that treats you, like you are a queen,
If you respect yourself, and leave no in betweens,
I know love and lust are far from victim-less,
But when he starts saying you are the prettiest,
Maybe he’s being real saying you’re the wittiest,
And smartest girl in this world so isn’t-this,
Everything you wanted, do you see or didn’t-this,
Click in your head cause inside you’re hideous,
See this my point, at this point you can’t fix-this,
I’ve been apart of this, and I’ve been one to witness,
These girls getting stupid when a guys in their business,
It just drives me insane, I don’t know what the trick-is,
So in turn every guy just lists her with the bitches,
And maybe that’s why we all end up on their shit-list,
I guess it’s twisted, but mostly just hard to explain,
I was just picked myself up so it’s onto the next frame,
Onto the next day, I’m looking at the future,
Trying to stay level and make the right maneuver,
What to do, where to go, nothings landing instead,
The whole world’s on my mind like I’m standing on my head,
I’m trying to find the light when the sun won’t shine,
I’m trying to be right when what I write don’t rhyme,
I’m just living this life the best I can each day,
Sometimes I put out my hand and just reach away,
For anyone to grasp, and I know it needs to stop,
My life, my pain, my smiles, my thoughts…

Feedback please :y:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 10th, '08, 22:23

This track was very good, whistle got annoying after a while, as always lyrics were on point. Flow was alright, kinda choppy at points. 8/10. Good job!
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '08, 22:24

MC Anonymous wrote:This track was very good, whistle got annoying after a while, as always lyrics were on point. Flow was alright, kinda choppy at points. 8/10. Good job!


Thanks again for feeding :y:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 11th, '08, 02:44

This shit is fire man! :y:
Awesome job on this track!
Love everything about it!

Your flow is great, lyrics are great, beat is really really good!

I don't know how to feed this, so I'll just go ahead and say:

Awesome!

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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby M-Pyre » Dec 11th, '08, 03:09

look, I'm not gonna comment on how your mix is or how corny those kind of beats are in this time of year/state of hiphop (I'm beginning to fucking HATE those dirty south beats!!!)

but dude, your lyrics are pure fucking awesome. the only time when your flow got off was when you we're speeding up just to make the snare cause your bar was running up to long, but that was just a few times so I forgive you for that. your voice isn't annoying and thats a huge plus! although at some point you did get a bit weird voice wise, when you was rhyming with faster hate or something.......LOL

I just saw that I was listening to the wrong song cause your lyrics doesn't correspond with the one's I heard, srry man :whistle: aah well, atleast I gave you some feed on that song, though now it's up to you to find out which one :y:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 03:25

Thanks Goat and pyre what song was it lol?
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 08:53

Lyrics I'm feeling. Beat is good, whole song is good but the mixing is poor as fuck man. This song could of been much better if you bothered to even mix it a little. I mean setting the volumes and shit that's nothing, I'm talking about adding compressor, Equalize it a bit.
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 08:54

Xray wrote:Lyrics I'm feeling. Beat is good, whole song is good but the mixing is poor as fuck man. This song could of been much better if you bothered to even mix it a little. I mean setting the volumes and shit that's nothing, I'm talking about adding compressor, Equalize it a bit.


Thanks or feeding, just so you know tho, I don't mix anything, I don't have programs, I don't know how to mix. Other people do it for me, and that's the best I have right now.
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 09:03

Emadyville wrote:
Xray wrote:Lyrics I'm feeling. Beat is good, whole song is good but the mixing is poor as fuck man. This song could of been much better if you bothered to even mix it a little. I mean setting the volumes and shit that's nothing, I'm talking about adding compressor, Equalize it a bit.


Thanks or feeding, just so you know tho, I don't mix anything, I don't have programs, I don't know how to mix. Other people do it for me, and that's the best I have right now.


Download a program than. Cool Edit Pro, Adobe Audition, Sony Acid Pro those are programs you can download, and are pretty easy going. It's easy really if you don't want to add much stuff all you have to do is add compressor or dynamics there both the same thing, and some reverb and maybe equilize it abit, you don't even have to make the equilizer you can just select whatever effect that rocks your boat and just go with it. Any type of mixing is better than what you have right now, cause the ppl that mix your stuff don't know what the fuck there doing.
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 09:06

Yeah but I'd no one to show me but them ya know. Plus, I can't download all that shit on my comp cause my laptops kinda shitty and for school, I can't fuck with it anymore cause I'd be buying a new one. But believe me, I'm just trying my best to get the songs to sound good, most of the people that hear my shit don't hear it like you do anyway, which isn't really an excuse, but like I said it's the best I can do right now, and it's all I have, I'm just going to keep recording and hope in time I'll find better ways to get it mixed.
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 09:09

I feel you man, your in a rough time at the moment to mix it yourself. But when you have a new pc you can fuck with let me know man I'd be more than glad to help you with mixing. :b:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 09:10

Xray wrote:I feel you man, your in a rough time at the moment to mix it yourself. But when you have a new pc you can fuck with let me know man I'd be more than glad to help you with mixing. :b:


Thank you. Well, would I be able to send a song that you could mix? Just a thought.
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '08, 09:14

Matter fact I can man, Hit me up with the acapella (verses seperate, overlays seperate, adlibs seperate) and the beat. And whenever I find time I will mix it. :y:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Emadyville » Dec 11th, '08, 09:25

Xray wrote:Matter fact I can man, Hit me up with the acapella (verses seperate, overlays seperate, adlibs seperate) and the beat. And whenever I find time I will mix it. :y:


I will try my best on that shit, believe that, can't guarentee it i'm on a little deadline, but i will remember that. thanks a ton :y:
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Re: Emadyville "My Thoughts"

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 11th, '08, 15:29

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