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Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby Kez » Dec 12th, '08, 00:30

Since i've lost my sound, i've been writing WAY MORE lyrics down. Most of it's just randomisity, but why not post some eh?

Here's some.

I manipulate and flip and take the fucking english language/
Hate between layers of beats, till it's like a friggin' sandwhich/
I don't go for connotations, there is no singing, dancing/
Just give me instrumentals and i'll give you instant classics

Songwriters unite, and what i would incite/
Is that we hunt down, attack, and crush biters tonight

Fuck must, i do this cause i want to, you dumb fucks/
I like fucking up your ears, so i can leave you concussed/
Whatever you might think, i am not fussed/
I've enough skill to fend you off and then get you pumped up/
Have you come back looking for a punch up/
But i dodge, you look like you're punching worse than a drunk fuck/
By this point, you're in the road, dumbstruck/
As i speed at you, honking in a 120-ton truck/
Then i do a barrel roll and scoop your scattering guts up/
In a cup, sold in butchers and there is no refund, duck/
When you find bits of his hair in the pie that you cooked up/
I know it's fucking ginger but it still tastes good, but/
I'm kidding Ron, the guy i'm on about is just some/
Random idiot who thought he'd say my raps were not good (cunt)/
And by the way, i'm bored, can you tell?/
Why am i saying all this shit, cause i might as well, just 'cause i'm fucked up


The "i know it's fucking ginger" is a reference to my later mentioned mate Ron, who is ginger ;)
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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 12th, '08, 11:54

i think this is wicked .. Rhymes were decent , lyrically it's great ,, i like your multies 2 .. and i could flow through it easly .. so keep it up bro nd keep droppin ,,, hot stafff .. :y:
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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '08, 05:15

Thats just fucking sick :worship:
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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby mcZu » Dec 13th, '08, 18:36

Great job, nice rhymes, nice structure.
Enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby James R. » Dec 14th, '08, 00:50

McMaybe wrote:Pretty sick man. The concept is really fun and entertaining. :y: Lyrics were great, flow and writing is great. 10/10

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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby Kez » Dec 14th, '08, 03:05

Thanks to all, haha honestly these are just little bored writings

When i get sound back they'll be built around actual concepts

But cheers all the same :b:
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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 03:31

Very good... you may be a dickhead, but a gifted one.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Some New Shit I've Been Writing

Postby neb121 » Dec 14th, '08, 03:37

great job. flowed well. loved the first one :y:
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im cantankerous when i step to the mic
mean streaked and eat emcees when i write
-Bodacious-

I will never put down the mic

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