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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 15:37

Boston wrote:straight up, i dont even like you mc anonymous, im just telling you now

i don't think you suck but i also don't think your good. you do use big words for no reason, some people really cant comprehend what you are trying to say so they can't enjoy what you write, if you record, they wont like what you record. people will call you wannabe cannibus. you DO need to dumb down your shit whether you like it or not. i dont know if your doing it to try to be dope or w/e the reason is, but its like rhyming words in a way.

I understand that some people wont like the way I write because they wont be able to understand what I am saying. Well that's tough for them, I write the way I write because I enjoy writing that way. If people don't understand then that's to bad, but there are a lot of people out there that will. I appreciate your opinion on the matter, and I am not trying to do it to be 'dope', I just happen to have a vocabulary. Is it wrong that I use it to my advantage?
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Boston » Dec 14th, '08, 15:42

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Boston wrote:straight up, i dont even like you mc anonymous, im just telling you now

i don't think you suck but i also don't think your good. you do use big words for no reason, some people really cant comprehend what you are trying to say so they can't enjoy what you write, if you record, they wont like what you record. people will call you wannabe cannibus. you DO need to dumb down your shit whether you like it or not. i dont know if your doing it to try to be dope or w/e the reason is, but its like rhyming words in a way.

I understand that some people wont like the way I write because they wont be able to understand what I am saying. Well that's tough for them, I write the way I write because I enjoy writing that way. If people don't understand then that's to bad, but there are a lot of people out there that will. I appreciate your opinion on the matter, and I am not trying to do it to be 'dope', I just happen to have a vocabulary. Is it wrong that I use it to my advantage?


well if your doing it for yourself, you kind of shouldn't post here for the feed back. you should try to do your best at it if you enjoy writing, so why not show off if you have a talent. that is good that you have a vocabulary but you have to learn to use it in the right way if you want to use it for your advantage.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 15:44

Boston wrote:
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Boston wrote:straight up, i dont even like you mc anonymous, im just telling you now

i don't think you suck but i also don't think your good. you do use big words for no reason, some people really cant comprehend what you are trying to say so they can't enjoy what you write, if you record, they wont like what you record. people will call you wannabe cannibus. you DO need to dumb down your shit whether you like it or not. i dont know if your doing it to try to be dope or w/e the reason is, but its like rhyming words in a way.

I understand that some people wont like the way I write because they wont be able to understand what I am saying. Well that's tough for them, I write the way I write because I enjoy writing that way. If people don't understand then that's to bad, but there are a lot of people out there that will. I appreciate your opinion on the matter, and I am not trying to do it to be 'dope', I just happen to have a vocabulary. Is it wrong that I use it to my advantage?


well if your doing it for yourself, you kind of shouldn't post here for the feed back. you should try to do your best at it if you enjoy writing, so why not show off if you have a talent. that is good that you have a vocabulary but you have to learn to use it in the right way if you want to use it for your advantage.

It seems like only 2 people think I don't know how to use it, because they all said it was sick besides you and neb121. Even McMaybe who is usually critical said it's sick. So I don't know why you think I just throw random words together, if you actually got a dictionary and looked up the words they'll make perfect sense.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 15:48

lilrossy wrote:nice work guys. best shit i've read in ages. :worship:

McMaybe wrote:Fucking sick guys. Real nice cypher, real nice. :y:

thanks bros :b:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Boston » Dec 14th, '08, 23:34

your missing the whole point, and i don't care what other people say, they can be saying it just to be nice.. some people do tend to say that. some people say shit to be assholes to. i wouldn't listen to neb though, she thinks her stuff is sick. i have no reason to lie to you. you dont have to take my advice, i don't think its sick though (i dont think it sucks either)
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 14th, '08, 23:50

Boston wrote:your missing the whole point, and i don't care what other people say, they can be saying it just to be nice.. some people do tend to say that. some people say shit to be assholes to. i wouldn't listen to neb though, she thinks her stuff is sick. i have no reason to lie to you. you dont have to take my advice, i don't think its sick though (i dont think it sucks either)

Ok. :wave:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby James R. » Dec 14th, '08, 23:59

As long as we can come to the conclusion that I'm the fucking man I think we'll all be good. Boston, thanks for the post. Anon keep doing what you do. Now lets move on.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Boston » Dec 15th, '08, 00:00

James R. wrote:As long as we can come to the conclusion that I'm the fucking man I think we'll all be good. Boston, thanks for the post. Anon keep doing what you do. Now lets move on.


yeah. YOUR the fucking man. thats it (out of that rap)

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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby neb121 » Dec 15th, '08, 02:39

It seems like only 2 people think I don't know how to use it, because they all said it was sick besides you and neb121. Even McMaybe who is usually critical said it's sick. So I don't know why you think I just throw random words together, if you actually got a dictionary and looked up the words they'll make perfect sense.[/quote]

i didnt say you wasnt good. so dont get me involved in this.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Kez » Dec 15th, '08, 02:58

Boston wrote:i don't care what other people say, they can be saying it just to be nice..


Believe me, both me and Maybe just say straight what we think, regardless.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Xray » Dec 15th, '08, 03:31

James R. wrote:Because you said it like Rhymefest was a person. Just a lame ass joke lol

Word my bad. :sweating:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 15th, '08, 17:19

its like sayin einstein is too smart for everybody- OFCOURSE he is!! thats why he's the best,lol
its just a way of puttin things, the cypher was dope guys, had everything you look for in sumthing that long, flow,easy structure,fun(funny lines...)class
shits was dope man
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 15th, '08, 18:16

that's just was an awesome collab , everything is sick in it . lyrics nd rhymes were decent .. flow was nice . great job guys .. do it again :y: :y: :y:
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby 4D » Dec 15th, '08, 18:31

Awesome stuff. Loving the vocabulary and the punches. Great back and forth, it was like Canibus doing a collab with Jay-Z or something, brilliant.
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Re: MC Anonymous, James R, Rhymefest (lol)

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 15th, '08, 21:10

Thanks dudes. =]
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