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TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

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1
3
15%
2
5
25%
3
7
35%
4
1
5%
5
4
20%
 
Total votes : 20

Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby James R. » Dec 11th, '08, 16:41

SajN wrote:It was a suprise that James won :whistle:

You should expect the unexpected more often :smoking: ;)

z_em wrote::b: :b: :b: :b: :b: that's for james .. Congratulations man , u deserve it

Thanks man I appreciate it



I really don't know who was involved. But congrats to everyone. All were pretty sick verses.
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby Robbie G » Dec 12th, '08, 02:59

Do 2nd and 3rd get trophies to put in there sig? :)
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '08, 16:55

James your verse was sick bro, if i came online during the voting time i would have probably voted for verse 3,most enjoyable out of all
i'm guessin 1st verse was by Mc anonymous,dude you have to tone that complexity thing down sometimes man, when your in a competition, ppl tend to pay more attention to things that they relate to easily,like flow for example, your shit is sick at time, but timing is crucial as well. just advice
last verse deserves applause as well, very well written
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P.S:i wish i wrote for the competition as well :(
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 12th, '08, 22:31

no, actually the 1st verse is mine but i'll consider your criticism, i just wanted to prove something different but i got something better coming where most of us are on the same page with... just my computer crashed last night so hopefully i can restore it cuz i didnt save the lyrics, i remember most of it tho to fix it if i can't recover em...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 13th, '08, 17:34

hmm, well that gives me a different perspective, i based my opinion/criticism keepin Mc in mind but if that verse was from you, then it was a pretty good one, i mean i aint hatin on Mc but your style is WAYYY different than what you posted, it ACTUALLY shows creative ability, it shows you put some real energy,
none the less both ya'll rock this bitch up, so all in all: a well versed competition,lol
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby James R. » Dec 13th, '08, 19:36

Thanks Arabian Shady I appreciate it man. I pretty much just went for the punchline type of thing. Focused on flow. Hoped for the best. All of the verses were good imo. Hopefully we'll get more people involved next month and we can have a more diverse cast of lyrics.
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Re: TEXT Competition - VOTE NOW

Postby 4D » Dec 15th, '08, 18:37

I didn't reply to the topic, but one of those 7 votes were mine. Congratz James R! :y:

I was kinda sorry I missed it, and then remembered how I got totally cheated out of the last one I entered, so fuck it, lol. :D
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