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My 15th of December Gift

Postby Requiem » Dec 15th, '08, 05:38

i told ya'll i had something planned. and seeing as it's almost the 15th, i think it's time i unleashed my suprise to the world.

The first: A freestyle; may or may not be seen on the Ice Killa EP. i produced, and mixed.
Sick Freestyle: http://www.zshare.net/audio/52751758dc792adc/

The Second: My First Single for my upcoming album, The Ice Killa EP. also produced and mixed. it features Alysha, someone who is not a member of TR, but a good friend i know.
Not What It Use To Be (feat. Alysha): http://www.zshare.net/audio/52751901c02fd157/


as of now, my album is well under way, and is just over 1/3 the way completed. i plan it to have 16 tracks, all of them new. except for these two. i will keep you up to date on my album as it nears completetion. and once i'm 3/4ths the way done, i will release the cover and track list :8)
hint: u will be seeing more of Alysha on my album.
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Tash8 » Dec 15th, '08, 05:52

i call bullshit on the freestyle being an actual freestyle, its written isn't it?

the single, the hook is horribly mixed and sang or whatever... it can pretty sick but it's mixed pretty awful, alysha sounds like a 12 year old... ur verse on that isn't good..you flow is soo choppy, it got better near the end... beat is real empty, it need a lot more..
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Requiem » Dec 15th, '08, 05:57

^i keystyled it, then did vocal.

also, i can redo hook. and alysha's 17, lmao, me and her are just cursed with sounding young :sweating: i'll rerecord my verse, i mean. i want it to be basically perfect for my album. thx for checking it tho :y:
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Xray » Dec 15th, '08, 06:07

What Tash said, but except I thought this beat was an improvement from all your other beats I've heard. So good job on that man, and your quality sounds slightly better now so good job on that too. Alysha has a cool flow but her slang is corny to the motherfucken max. Alright lyrics to, no disrespect but your voices sound a like. It's a pretty weak song but definitely better than all your other songs. I'm not a fan of your sound but your still improving so stay up man. :b:

As for the freestyle, in my opinion you made a mistake posting it. Because the beat is trash, and so is the vocals/flow/lyrics.
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '08, 22:17

I already emailed my feed to you on Not What It Used To Be. Xray & Tash gave solid advice, use it. For the freestyle, the beat was horrid, im sure i heard that beat before but you did something to it. The lyrics were okay, but i thought your flow was choppy.
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Requiem » Dec 16th, '08, 01:57

^hey, thx for the feed. every bit helps. i'm glad u liked the track with alysha, lmao we both sound young.
and thx for the advice, and stuff. i'ma definitely use it for all future tracks, so my album turns out best possible.
lmao at the at the freestyle. i thought it was decent, worth a listen. and the beat isn't thaat bad for it, just something messed up in the drums when i rendered it. not sure why, cuz it does not have that reverb effect on the main drum, messed up some of the vocals. :8)
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Robbie G » Dec 17th, '08, 01:56

The chorus was oddly catchy. :p

The girls verse was pretty good, she does sound young but she wasn't that bad. Your verse started out pretty slow but towards the end I really liked some of your lines.

MAJOR improvement. :worship:
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Re: My 15th of December Gift

Postby Requiem » Dec 17th, '08, 02:19

^thx man. glad u all thought it was an improvement. i will keep ya'll posted on the album :happy:
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