Exclusive Rain Matrix - Beef Remix

[Rain Matrix]

I would appreciate it if you checked it out... it's on my myspace and it's the first song on the list

[neversnooze]

the beat and your lyrics were good,:y: but you need to work on your voice. you sound bored and emotionless

[The GameKeeper]

The beat was nice.... your lyrics are always tight man. When it comes to battling on here, there are not many who can touch you. I have to agree with the post above me though... and I mean this in no disrespectful way as I have alot of respect for you as an artist... your flow is very choppy man... and you do sound like your not interested in what your saying bro. If you got your flow down pact and you put some emotion into it, it would be very tight my man... keep bangin out them tracks bro...
Peace.

[Rain Matrix]

well the message in the song was deep...
I'm sorry I don't sound like some hopped up mc telling the world to bow down to my swagger

my lyrics come naturally and my intro was emotional in case you missed that
anyway none of you know me personally besides this was a mellow beat to begin with

and everything I said was true

thanks for checking it out

[Rain Matrix]

well chet why don't you set up an audio battle

if you can't beat a retard than that makes you a braindead fuck

set it up and get destroyed bitch!

actually anyone of you can call me out... if you fucking dare

[DelinQuent]

well the message in the song was deep...
I'm sorry I don't sound like some hopped up mc telling the world to bow down to my swagger

my lyrics come naturally and my intro was emotional in case you missed that
anyway none of you know me personally besides this was a mellow beat to begin with

and everything I said was true

thanks for checking it out

this is EXACTLY why nobody gives you feed.

someone gives you advice saying you need to show more emotion and you throw it away. grow the fuck up and accept criticism.

[Robbie G]

well chet why don't you set up an audio battle

if you can't beat a retard than that makes you a braindead fuck

set it up and get destroyed bitch!

actually anyone of you can call me out... if you fucking dare

[Rain Matrix]

well the message in the song was deep...
I'm sorry I don't sound like some hopped up mc telling the world to bow down to my swagger

my lyrics come naturally and my intro was emotional in case you missed that
anyway none of you know me personally besides this was a mellow beat to begin with

and everything I said was true

thanks for checking it out

this is EXACTLY why nobody gives you feed.

someone gives you advice saying you need to show more emotion and you throw it away. grow the fuck up and accept criticism.

I'm thankful that you guys even listened to my song, by the way look at the post you quoted me as saying it really wasn't that bad, I was merely defending myself from being labeled as emotionless obviously if I'm willing to go this in depth into my situation I have some kind of sense of reality

my emotion is the same thing everyone tells me I lack but what I'm trying to say is you don't know how I sound excited or sad, yeah my tracks are mellow but that's me I'm an easy going type of dude...

honestly you need to get your shit straight, your telling me to grow the fuck up and I'm spitting about the current economic crisis, loss of liberty and my life, on the other hand people like chet post a discriminating photo to the mentally handicapped, if a retard is this lyrical than you all have no fucking hope

anyway thanks for the feedback why doesn't someone tell me some pointers on expressing emotion on the mic I'm open to that a lot more than meaningless pictures of sterotypes and cheap shots