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So Be It

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 17th, '08, 22:55

if you're an artist come join me and be a part of a story
where we work hard for our glory cuz we always keep going

don't be restarted, destroying your march worth enjoying
cuz now your target's avoiding the martyrdom growing

cuz there's a power employing when you're smart, not annoying
to get farther deploying in this market that's spoiling

how are you not knowing, your marbles stay boiling?
while my spark remains glowing since the start of my showing...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: So Be It

Postby Xray » Dec 18th, '08, 01:46

This is weak man, nothing special in it. I've seen you do a lot better.
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: So Be It

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 18th, '08, 14:48

i know what u mean, for this piece i'm just trying to get other artists to start flowing so i can be motivated more to write something deep... this is just a shallow call out to everyone
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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