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Painter

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 20th, '08, 18:12

aint i the painter of my portrait
or's it a force that creates this aura i take?
well, what's important, i'm far from the snake
so for the forum my bars are not fake
i got a heart that won't break but scars they can make
still my part's really great, who's startin to hate?
i'm sorta now large in the ranks
more than a sergeant, armed like a tank
and towards a war i am marchin, alarm 'em, i'll flank
you're unfortunate, i'm smart and i'm frank
plus my performance goes harder, not quaint (means obsolete)
any more author complaints?
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Dec 20th, '08, 23:07, edited 2 times in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Painter (Short Piece)

Postby mcZu » Dec 20th, '08, 18:53

Enjoyed it, even though it was short.
This would make a great second verse.
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