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C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 23rd, '08, 17:55

Exclusive Myspace Leak
track off my coming tape.... :y:



C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

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[verse1]
Back in the days everything was so simple
Leave the response away and do wut kids do
I always saw me on the field with my football
Now I see me in skool engaged by a youth law
Then comes the rude job and makes me revert
As a kid i had the feeling it was a free earth
But as I grew up the knowledge changed so much
I watched the news with the violence and such
I don’t complain about the current state order
But as a human I got my own opinion to offer
So I state it in front of y’all and open eyez
The old memories too worthy to walkin by
I keep them tight right there in my mind
And never letting them slide … no that wouldn’t be right
The everday life challenge us to quit
but the memories are wut keeps us from it

[chorus]child memories they keep comin back
when i close my eyes i see the good and bad
child memories i embrace them
no matter good or bad i just gotta praise them

[verse2]
As we transform to a grown individual
Facing all the issue which are flashin thru
The bright life of our treasured childhood
Castin a shadow when did we comin to
This point in our life perceiving all these lies
Handin out everytime our deeper side
People eatin u up with their masked faked smile
Look at the social order only dressed paid guyz
Can make it so we try our best to make it
money rules everything to earn we have to take it
Take life by the hand goin along the railway
It’s a requirement u need every day HEY
But look at the bright page of our book
Wrote chapters with every breath that we took
Forever they will stay never go out
Readin back to see wut it was all about

written by C-Riz
Last edited by °[~CHR!$~]° on Dec 23rd, '08, 20:20, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby DelinQuent » Dec 23rd, '08, 18:01

i like the beat. good pick :y:

first verse flows well. rhyming is also good.

i also liked the hook, but it wasnt catchy enough.

second verse... same feed as the first one.

an enjoyable track, but more emotion and better pronunciation would make this track a lot better. keep working :y:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 23rd, '08, 19:00

wow, the beat is amazing, great choice :worship:

verses great, I love the mixing, lyrics I can't understand some bcuz of the pronunciation, but from what I can understand is amazing, I love the feel you put into them, second verse is my favourite, if you can please post the lyrics so I can listen to it again, also a zshare link will come good cuz I want to download it for my mp3.

hook is great, love how she sings, is she a friend of yourse or came with the beat??, anyways, excelent choice

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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 23rd, '08, 20:07

thank you both
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lyrics will be edit in a minit....
...and sorry ax u gotta wait till my tape drops to download it :D

and yeah i know her... someone introduced me to her :y: so we hooked up and baam :)
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 24th, '08, 21:26

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:thank you both
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lyrics will be edit in a minit....
...and sorry ax u gotta wait till my tape drops to download it :D

and yeah i know her... someone introduced me to her :y: so we hooked up and baam :)


nice nice, great job

can't wait 4 d tape
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 25th, '08, 14:00

wont disappoint you man :y:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 27th, '08, 12:54

more feed would be appreciated?
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby randomghost » Dec 28th, '08, 11:25

mm..so far this is the best track...from whata heard from ya before...to be honest man..ur getting better and better and thats good..coz it seems like u practice alot :8) pronouncation is much much better :o ..good job :y: THE BEAT IS FUCKIN GOOD :o :o :o FROM WHERE DID U GET IT :o ;) hook is fuckin nice...nice voice from the lady :y: made it work...ma fav. is verse 2 :y: :y: :y: ur delivery is good ( but could be better...like if u put more power in ur voice...to make it more energitic and shit...overall nice stuff man :y: enjoyed listening :8)
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 28th, '08, 19:50

:worship: thank you man
beat is from some finish producer....he makes sick joints...
umm about the delievery..well i could go more harder but felt like its more an emotional one...hmm
thx for lettin me know im progressin :worship: :worship:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby Robbie G » Dec 28th, '08, 19:57

I thought the emotion in your voice matched the beat perfectly. It was more laid back. The hook was really, good the singing really made the mood of the track.

Good job. :smoking:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 28th, '08, 20:42

:worship: thanks shady babie for checkin and likin it :worship:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 31st, '08, 02:27

Sorry for the delayed feed bro.

But here it goes.

Not really feeling it, don't know why really. But there's something i can't put my finger on. :unsure:
Your flow seems on point and your delivery suits the beat and this kind of track.
The girl on the hook sings pretty nice, it's all good.
Mixing is cool, sounds clear and dope as well as the quality on your raps.

But there's, as I said, something that's bugging me about this track... :confusion:

Anyways, great job man! :y:
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 3rd, '09, 04:28

ehh it fuckin sucked...your accent annoys the fuck out of me...

the beat is iight thats about all this shit has...

your flow lacks like a mother fucker,...

horible shit :n:
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby Vettori » Jan 3rd, '09, 05:00

Great concept Ive thought of doin that Myself man. You spoke clear even with your accent..Actually it attributed to The song.. Thats some real feeling man...Keep it up..Hope to hear more

PS: Sticcy Thats some Ignorant shit. Maybe you should listen to the second verse of fearless huh :D...
Don't downplay people especially if there tryin hard. And your definatly not on a pedestal high enough to be doin it. Youve got work to do as well as I. As far as the accent thing too...Gimme a break You force an accent. PS: Girls wont find that voice attractive..
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Re: C-Riz ft Sofia - Child Memories

Postby Vettori » Jan 3rd, '09, 05:00

damn comps laggin it posted twice srry
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