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"FREESTYLE AUDIO"

Postby xariuss » Dec 2nd, '05, 05:06

Just a freestyle i recorded... my voice is a abit cracky at the moment... but yeah comments will be appreciated :)

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Re: "FREESTYLE AUDIO"

Postby Nu Syd » Dec 2nd, '05, 16:21

lol whats with the name of the freestyle man

on point,that was good man,flowed,i like this one

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Postby xariuss » Dec 2nd, '05, 16:32

ummm... lol.. my friend wanted me to spit on somethin when he came over.. after he heard one of my audios so i did that :whistle: named it that coz umm.. had nothing else to name it? lol.. and i hated my voice in it so its gay .. my voice went hell plain , like i was whispering so yeah, but meh:P freestyle's do that
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:18

well i kinda think it sucked. u didn't go with the beat of the music u should listen to 1 of EMINEMz songz he goes with the beat of the music.
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:20

shadyz_babee3 wrote:well i kinda think it sucked. u didn't go with the beat of the music u should listen to 1 of EMINEMz songz he goes with the beat of the music.


the GROUPIEST review ever



Y DID U COMPARE HIM TO EM
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:22

ok fine then i was just using him as an example god! ok fine u should listen to one of LUDAz songz he goes with the beat!!!!

there u happy!
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:22

Lmao. Lmao Lmao Lmao.

On the other hand Xarius working on freestyle instead of working on SONGS!!!
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:22

shadyz_babee3 wrote:well i kinda think it sucked. u didn't go with the beat of the music u should listen to 1 of EMINEMz songz he goes with the beat of the music.



u shud listen to hip hop other than eminem
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:24

ok it seemz like saying it kinda sucked waz to harsh on him so ill give u the fact that ur freestyle was goo u shoud just go with the beat of the music more. but it waz ok :happy:
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:25

HAYZI wrote:
shadyz_babee3 wrote:well i kinda think it sucked. u didn't go with the beat of the music u should listen to 1 of EMINEMz songz he goes with the beat of the music.



u shud listen to hip hop other than eminem


I DO! : :tounge2: :boxing:
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:26

put your gloves down woman! :tounge2: lol
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:29

i do listen to other hip- hop other than EMINEM! for example LUDACRIS, 50 CENT, D12, DR. DRE, TONY YAYO, TRICK- DADDY, LIL JON, OUTKAST, YOUNG BUCK, CIARA, OLIVIA AND MORE
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:33

wtf? did i say i was gangsta??!!!

NO! i aint no gangsta but id still kick the shit out of you but i dont go round coverin my face wit a bandana and callinn everycunt nigga
you dont fukin know me for fuks sake i reckon ive been thru more shit in my life than u have keep your bullshit to yourself
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:33

w/e im tired of yall dissin em
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:35

Em who?
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