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FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Dec 24th, '08, 12:34

http://www.myspace.com/pikpocket

lyrics are on the page
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 24th, '08, 21:26

daymnz, this is sometin I could hear bumpin on parties

the bridge was my favourite part, the hook is... hmm ok I guess

the flow is great, the lyrics are simple but do the work fine

great track, has defo a big first single value, great job

one of the best uses of autotune I've hurd from you (on the bridge)

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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 21:52

This would be a pretty good club/radio single. Flow was good. Bridge was probably the best part. Verses were very simple and not usually my type of thing, but they did the job. Had a real Akon or Kardinal Offishall type of vibe. Could definitely hear this in a house party for sure man. Good job.
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Dec 25th, '08, 17:34

thnks for yall input i appreciate it

it was hard rappin dat fast lmao
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Dec 25th, '08, 22:57

1000 plays overnight on my myspace thanks for yall contribution
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 26th, '08, 13:31

Really good party-track!

Love the autotune and the hook is really catchy! Good job on that man!
The flow is almost flawless, en the delivery fits this kind of beat perfect.

Awesome job man! :y:
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 26th, '08, 14:10

sounds professional... :y:
from a objective view its really good no doubt...very commercial
verses were nice....good simple flow
bridge...very very catchy.....hook....eh not appealing to me but oh well whoever likes it
....breakdown sounded pro aswell....could imagine this joint on the radio

but personally not my type....
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Dec 27th, '08, 15:06

im glad yall liked it ..def means alot with ya sayin u could hear it on the radio thnks
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 31st, '08, 00:47

Call Me Pik wrote:im glad yall liked it ..def means alot with ya sayin u could hear it on the radio thnks

well it's to be on the radio all you need is 2 things...1) you have to be black (1 point for you)....2) you have to have gay ass club songs (2 points for you) yaaaaaaaaay!!!

ehh didnt like it very much...to mainstream...
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 01:01

that is very good, i like how u pieced the song together so i know that u are very serious about music, i'll definitely check out more from you, peace :worship:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Dec 31st, '08, 13:20

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
Call Me Pik wrote:im glad yall liked it ..def means alot with ya sayin u could hear it on the radio thnks

well it's to be on the radio all you need is 2 things...1) you have to be black (1 point for you)....2) you have to have gay ass club songs (2 points for you) yaaaaaaaaay!!!

ehh didnt like it very much...to mainstream...


im not black 1 :zipped: and this song is for jacking off purposes only ...so 0 points for me :angry:





Kaotic wrote:that is very good, i like how u pieced the song together so i know that u are very serious about music, i'll definitely check out more from you, peace :worship:


thanks man glad to see that u were feelin it thnks
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby randomghost » Dec 31st, '08, 13:32

this is the shit...nice vibe in the music :y: decent flow :y: nice lyrics and an ok beat i guess :8) enjoed listening :8) gud stuff bro :)
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Call Me Pik » Jan 2nd, '09, 02:24

randomghost wrote:this is the shit...nice vibe in the music :y: decent flow :y: nice lyrics and an ok beat i guess :8) enjoed listening :8) gud stuff bro :)


thnks homie thnks for checkin it out
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Slimm » Jan 2nd, '09, 02:56

ur not black? not that it matters but i always thought u was lol. but anyways, nice track, i still bump that why? song. :b:
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Re: FLY AWAY

Postby Emadyville » Jan 2nd, '09, 03:50

I'm sure dq told you my thoughts but I def enjoyed this shit, basically everything positive said about the song before me is how I feel too, so :y:
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