NEW - Burn You Down (Feat. Ice Killa) *Modified Verse*

[-[Zach]-]

damn. that was some nice lines there. i especially liked the "write lyrics or bite trying" line. it made me chuckle a little bit. this definately needs to be recorded pronto. can't wait to check it out.

[Requiem]

thx for feeding in our topics man. i know everyone seen them, but they're too damn lazy to post like 3 words
hopefully it won't sound like death

[Solace]

Yeah thanks man, i appreciate it

[Solace]

Bump

[Solace]

bump, only 2 people fed.

[Robbie G]

Much better than the first one. Which was terrible btw.

[Solace]

Much better than the first one. Which was terrible btw.

Thanks, glad its better The audio track aint sounding bad either, but you know that i rap with a camera right? So my qual dumbs it down. And yeah, the old one was fail but im glad it was released so i could come to my senses

[Jay-19]

here it is, ressurected http://www.zshare.net/audio/53377326b9050870/

beat SUCKS let me tell u. chorus is ok, verse 1 needs work. and quality on both is

That gave me a good laugh.

But serious though, this track could turn out pretty dope I think.

[Robbie G]

Much better than the first one. Which was terrible btw.

Thanks, glad its better The audio track aint sounding bad either, but you know that i rap with a camera right? So my qual dumbs it down. And yeah, the old one was fail but im glad it was released so i could come to my senses

I found a mic that came with a webcam lol. They can't be too expensive, and are at least good enough to practice with.

[Xray]

I'm feeling this, I thought what I read was pretty damn dope.

[mcZu]

I thought I already gave you feed on this??
But nvm, it's great. Lyrics are nice, rhymes were nice. The flow was on spot.
It's overall a nice drop bro

[Requiem]

^thx for the feed guys. the audio version should be coming out soon
if shadymademe will check his email

[Solace]

here it is, ressurected http://www.zshare.net/audio/53377326b9050870/

beat SUCKS let me tell u. chorus is ok, verse 1 needs work. and quality on both is

That gave me a good laugh.

But serious though, this track could turn out pretty dope I think.

LOL well at least its useful for SOMETHING.

i posted the track in the audio section, its not that good tho But we did our bests.

And thanks all

[Solace]

I redid a couple lines in my verse and bump

[Requiem]

looking at the redone lines, i didn't like em very much just doesn't flow with the original ones, and they weren't that impressive.
tho the way u ended it was cool