NEW 09 - SaJJad - Time Ticks (featuring Jay-19)

[Xray]

Title: Time Ticks (featuring Jay-19)
Performed & Written By: SaJJad & Jay-19
Produced By: Psychopathik Beatz
Mixed & Mastered By: SaJJad

Verse One [SaJJad]
Life's like liquor, only there to get you drunk
than when you sober up, your already looking to get hung
the neck can only take much, so death is certain
my throat's gone shatter when the doors below me open
my last screams echoing, there goes my dream
so much for hoping for a rescue team
this is why I head alone to destinations
walk by my self with earphones to places
"be careful where you go, be cautious" what is said
I couldn't be alive cause apart of me is dead
and when I get punched why the fuck should I block?
take a free swing, and just favour my thought
I leave my curtains closed, cause I'm sick of seeing light
fuck waking up to a morning that is bright
in a war with the world, still alive un-slayed
the beats my shield, and the lyric's my faith (yo)

Chorus [SaJJad]
Time ticks, life sinks
you lose, death wins
fall in the hole, no where to go
nothing to choose so you drown and sink

Time ticks, life sinks
never enough, time to think
fall in the hole, no where to go
deep in the sea, left to drown and sink

Verse Two [SaJJad]
I was captured and dragged, the minute I was given
Time was ticking as I was picking, I made a precise decision
I was in a bad condition, so the struggles kept me written
Hip Hop ain't just a moment, it's a 24/7 feeling
And now I'm replying back to the verdicts that I've had
all you motherfuckers that judged me in the past
to the ones that are still continuously talking shit
I will always let you down, one hundred percent
I think I'm about to peak, explode, leak, and proceed
times ticking quick, yo! here I come, wait and see
As I cast through the music, flow through the wind of night
blast through your speakers, and take my time to write my life
Always occupied in another world recording
multitasking at times through the times of the modern
The present is no surprise unless its presented right
my life was just a loss, but now I've put on a fight (yeah)

Chorus [SaJJad]

Verse Three [Jay-19]
why can't I go on, chase my dreams and
do what I want to do, face my demons
try to look happy, this face is deceiving
took my confidence, placed it beneath me
you look at me with disgust in your eyes
all of my life I've been trusting your lies
crushed and denied, you'd hate to be me
I'm trapped in a cell in a state of defeat
I pray to the lord for an instant respond
he never answers, my wisdom is gone
everyday I fight with missiles and guns
trying to receive some kisses and hugs
people close up if they meet a stranger
and looking at me like a freak of nature
open my eyes but got weighted eyelids
look in my soul and see the hate inside it

Chorus [SaJJad]
Time ticks, life sinks
you lose, death wins
fall in the hole, no where to go
nothing to choose so you drown and sink

Time ticks, life sinks
never enough, time to think
fall in the hole, no where to go
deep in the sea, so swimming ain't a thought (echoed)
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This track is a part II to Jay-19's track called "Try Not To Sleep", I heard that track and I just had to make a track on that same beat. Please listen and feed if you can, any feedback is appreciated for real. Thanks.

Download/Listen Link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/5353524012228244/

Enjoy.

[Robbie G]

That was sick man.

flow was good through the whole song, and the lyrics were solid. Did you use all that new stuff you got? Because the quality sounds a lot better.

[Xray]

That was sick man.

flow was good through the whole song, and the lyrics were solid. Did you use all that new stuff you got? Because the quality sounds a lot better.

Wow thanks for the quick reply bro, glad you liked the track and yep I used all that new stuff. Thanks again.

[gladimnotsoluble]

Just reading the lyrics, I was sorta about it


After hearing it--i totally dig it

Amazing flow SaJJad, and the song was pretty solid, beat was bumpin




Nice job man i like the song

[Steve Spag]

Damn man, that's a pretty tight track. Really liking the delievery on it, the flow was nice. I thought the hook was pretty dope aswell. Lyrics were pretty sick, deep emotion mixed in with some clever rhymes, works out fine:y:.

[<Stiiccy>]

it was preety good..i loved the hook...

everything was preety good on your verses sajjad

didnt like jay 19 's verse...didnt have much flow...

1 complaint i have with this sajjad...is, this shit sounds just like everything else you do..nothing is different...you don't change,...there is no versitility...I wanna hear some other type shit man...be versitile...you can't do underground shit on everone of your tracks man...you gotta change it up...

[Solace]

Man i really like this track, i really like the lyrics, and the chorus was dope. I liked your flow and delivery man. I also really liked that Jay-19 track myself Quality was really nice too. It seems that you changed delivery in your 2nd verse, SaJJad, but it sounded good either way. Jay-19 sounded bored, it wasnt that good delivery but it wasnt horrible. Both of you did good though. 8.5/10 man, keep it up

[Xray]

Just reading the lyrics, I was sorta about it


After hearing it--i totally dig it

Amazing flow SaJJad, and the song was pretty solid, beat was bumpin




Nice job man i like the song

That's exactly how I look at lyrics, I always have to hear the audio to appreciate, so I see where your coming from. Appreciate the feed, good looking man.

Damn man, that's a pretty tight track. Really liking the delievery on it, the flow was nice. I thought the hook was pretty dope aswell. Lyrics were pretty sick, deep emotion mixed in with some clever rhymes, works out fine:y:.

Thank you bro, glad you felt the message.

it was preety good..i loved the hook...

everything was preety good on your verses sajjad

didnt like jay 19 's verse...didnt have much flow...

1 complaint i have with this sajjad...is, this shit sounds just like everything else you do..nothing is different...you don't change,...there is no versitility...I wanna hear some other type shit man...be versitile...you can't do underground shit on everone of your tracks man...you gotta change it up...

Thanks for the long review appreciate that. As for being versatile I'll only work in underground regions, so sorry that you feel like that, but that's how I want my music to be, underground.

Man i really like this track, i really like the lyrics, and the chorus was dope. I liked your flow and delivery man. I also really liked that Jay-19 track myself Quality was really nice too. It seems that you changed delivery in your 2nd verse, SaJJad, but it sounded good either way. Jay-19 sounded bored, it wasnt that good delivery but it wasnt horrible. Both of you did good though. 8.5/10 man, keep it up

Thanks bro, and yeah that Jay track was dope as fuck. Thanks again for the review and checking. (its halal)

[Xray]

Damn I just noticed the beat cuts up at the end, my bad. I fixed it, weird how no body noticed it haha.

[Boston]

this shits sick, crazy man..real talk..in my opinion i think you stepped your game up 100 percent in the second verse. my favorite verse on the whole song. the flow, delivery and the picture you paint with the lyrics are sick. real personal stuff it feels like and i respect that. its good to see people bringing this audio section back to life with music like this.

don't get me wrong, first verse was good as well. its a good way to open up to the second verse i think. really enjoyed the chorus and you can tell it sums up the songs in those few lines and how it seems like you built your verses around it. good shit man. keep it up.

[MC Anonymous]

Ahhh Sajjad you are such a sick artist.
Everything about with this track was fire with the exception of Jay-19's delivery.
Idk if my input would be even accountable seeing how I suck in audio myself, but I felt like I needed to comment on such a great track. Good job both of you guys.

[Nu Syd]

beat = nice
verses = killah
quality = nuts
chorus - catchy like the fucken flu

nothing to fault, amazing song

[Xray]

this shits sick, crazy man..real talk..in my opinion i think you stepped your game up 100 percent in the second verse. my favorite verse on the whole song. the flow, delivery and the picture you paint with the lyrics are sick. real personal stuff it feels like and i respect that. its good to see people bringing this audio section back to life with music like this.

don't get me wrong, first verse was good as well. its a good way to open up to the second verse i think. really enjoyed the chorus and you can tell it sums up the songs in those few lines and how it seems like you built your verses around it. good shit man. keep it up.

Thanks fam, I agree second verse is better than first. Props again.

Ahhh Sajjad you are such a sick artist.
Everything about with this track was fire with the exception of Jay-19's delivery.
Idk if my input would be even accountable seeing how I suck in audio myself, but I felt like I needed to comment on such a great track. Good job both of you guys.

Damn thanks alot bro, I'm really glad you liked the song and didn't mention the lyrics to averageish, cause your lyrics be complex for reeeeeeeeal. Your wrong man I always appreciate any feed, I'm not a hard headed fuck that feels like fuck the rest, hell no.

beat = nice
verses = killah
quality = nuts
chorus - catchy like the fucken flu

nothing to fault, amazing song

Chhchchc cheaaaa thanks for feeding man.

[Requiem]

yea, gave u my feed over msn. but great track man. SICK AS HELL
lyrics look wierd in text, but the audio flow is insane. 10/10 great job.
wow, my first 10/10 in audio stage. congrats on that sajjad

can't wait for ur album

[James R.]

Verse 1- It was ok. The delivery and flow were good, but lyrically it was eh in some spots. Like "I can't be alive cuz part of me's dead" it goes with the song, but it was just like "Eh.. ok" because the rest of the verse was a lot more hard hitting. The emotion was cool. Your accent didn't cause any problems. I could understand what you were saying. All good. Someone said above that as they read they lyrics they were and I agree, although while the flow and delivery were spot on it didn't make up for it totally. 7/10

Chorus- The chorus was pretty decent. Wish it could have had a more fluent delivery instead of the "word....word...word...word..." But it's all good. Not bad man. 8/10

Verse 2- Better verse. still solid delivery and flow, but better lyrics. 8/10

Verse 3- I don't know if the last guy is actually on TR or not cuz I don't remember him dropping anything recently but this verse was whack. I mean the lyrics were subpar, the delivery was dead, the flow was on and off, and compared to the first 2 verses it shouldn't be on the song. Verse needs serious work to keep up with the demands of the track imo. The whole seemed so emotional until the 3rd verse where it sounds like dude is either high as fuck or bored out his mind. 5/10

Ok so I just realized that jay19 is killahgoat... dude wtf... you're way better than that.

Overall I give this track a 7/10 largely due to the slacking of the last verse. Without it this is easily an 8 or 8.5. Maybe even a 9 if you really came hard on the 3rd verse. Keep it up man. Good job.