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Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 01:44

thanks for the feed people! and no offense, thanks for your feed back. but i dont think my lyrics are cliche. but thanks for the feedback man
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Xray » Jan 1st, '09, 02:17

Sorry bro I didn't check this yesterday cause I wasn't at home. But checking now.

Beat - I'm feeling those guitars, and drums made the beat what it is. INSANE beat. Flow - WOAH! That's wassup man shit is fire bro, love the delivery, killah. Lyrics - IN FUCKING SANE! Perfect shit for this type of song and perfect for your flow, already told you that Apollo Creed line is the shit. It's crazy how you started it out, straight up fire. Intro - Fits perfect.

10/10 No doubt about that, quality is dope too, only problem is the track is too short, you should consider making this a full track cause its insane.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby James R. » Jan 1st, '09, 02:41

You didn't disappoint homie. At all. Delivered it perfect. Flowed it perfect. Lyrics were dope imo, but you already knew I thought that. Sickness at its illest.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 05:21

thanks a lot for the feed sajjad, good looks on all that, and yeah i guess ill probably finish it now since people want me to. just need to think of a good hook for this shit. and write a few verses. props on ya song to, MOTHER FUCKERS WHO FED ME HERE BETTER CHECK HIS SHIT OUT TO.

and james, thanks! glad i didnt let you down!

feels good to have the top mother fuckers loving my shit woo!!

come on people keep this shit coming
dont be shy!
ANY feed will be GREATLY appreciated.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Kez » Jan 1st, '09, 06:20

I can't listen yet, but i read the lyrics and damn, some of em actually made me laugh out loud.

Impressive. You might annoy me, but you've got something for sure.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 14:11

thank you sir ^^ its all good.

just lemme know what you think when you listen, if you do.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 1st, '09, 17:59

it was good, short as fuck but on point at that... why you need my feedback I have no clue I guess it's my huge ego deflating into oblivion right in front of your eyes you can take away the gun but you can't stop me from pulling the trigger... I am what I was before I could be it :y: :y:
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 19:55

^ thanks

keep it coming people, come on
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 1st, '09, 19:58

intro is nice, feeling it.

delivery is different but i'm into it. flow is sick. dope ass rhyming. honestly, sick fucking flow and rhymes. lyrics are also pretty dope.

9/10... fucking dope man. keep that shit up
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby mcZu » Jan 1st, '09, 20:03

Pretty impresive, the lyrics are great. Your flow is nice, you delivered this great. A solid drop man.
Just the intro was abit meh imo, but nontheless it's a great track.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Requiem » Jan 1st, '09, 20:22

the beat sounds familiar. oh, it's a ka beat. ha ha, i was surfing his beats yesterday.
verse 1 is plain insane, flow is sick, lyrics are great. especially the rocky line.

oh that's it? damn, nice track, waaaay too short. :8) 8/10
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 22:43

thank yall for the feed, glad yall enjoy it

ima try to stay active as much as possible in this forum (along with others)
just give you guys time to breathe! so ill go back to the studio soon
thank you for peeping it

keep the feed coming people!
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Makaveli525 » Jan 2nd, '09, 01:08

Nice track overall...

Flow was on point, delivery was all good, and lyrics were nice... so I'd say you're set.

Get to work on some full tracks yo... that was a tight verse...
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 2nd, '09, 01:31

^^ thanksss

appreciate all this.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 2nd, '09, 21:46

im bumpin this
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