NEW Ice Killa- Out of Control

[Requiem]

Happy New Years ya'll thought i'd share a track off my upcoming EP

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=009a ... 98c7413f81

produced by edik amin btw

[Solace]

Happy New Year homie

I seriously lol'd when you went "run run im the gingerbread man". I remember that from something...I wasnt feeling the track much. You were just talking, not many punchlines or anything. Liking the overlays Actually i loved that line about the mother lol. The beat didnt fit that well imo. 7/10 man keep it up, your definitely improving Thought this song would have been great on a hard hitting beat.

[Requiem]

^thx man. just trying out new things. experimenting with flows. never actually tried a long verse, and verse 3 i tried switching up the flow a little.
thx for the feed. all feed is appreciated. hopefully my EP will achieve a new level for me. so i can leave shit like "guns come out" behind

[Requiem]

^thx man happy to see some feed on this thing. my last post got 2 damn responses
hopefully i'll get more

[Boston]

feed on my track good since im feeding yours!!!

lol @ the first bar, made me laugh, even though i dont know if you were trying to do that ha
the beat was alright nothing special, your flow is simple and seems to be on for the first part, but it does seem like your improving from your other tracks. and when you did do some doubles it sounded good to me. could have better quality. and you should fix that pause after the first verse, all that empty space.
rhymes are simple, you can work on that though. not a bad track, just work hard keep writing and practicing and youll improve

go check out asylum please.

[Requiem]

^thx for the feed man. glad people can see i'm still improving. i'll go and feed that track now

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

deff. better than that other track i listened too... i give it a 5 or 6 outta 10... your flow seems pretty good, im thinkin your deff. gonna get better with it cause its not bad at alllll... oh aand that beat was sweet.

[Requiem]

^thx man.
keep the feed comin

[Makaveli525]

Nice track.

I liked the beat.

The lyrics are decent... delivery is better than the last time I heard you.

You were off beat in a couple parts... but for the most part flow is on target.

Vocals seemed a little low at parts... but that might be my junk headphones.

Overall... good job.

[Requiem]

^thx for the feed man. we need to get crackin on a track. only problem is i don't got a beat i'm sure u could find something dope we can collab on tho

glad to see positive feed on the track. my album's looking up so far as i can tell the track averages out around 7/10.

[Robbie G]

^ wait, what?

Your getting better man. You have the right idea now just practice practice practice.

[Requiem]

^thx man, i'm glad i'm improving. i hope my album will turn out sick. and i'm getting really close to finishing it

[Tornado]

your vocals are quite low for starts, needs more ad-libs and EQ.lyrics are a bit simple and some lines have not enough syllables ...voice sounds squeaky..how old are you btw.........i dont know if youre improving but just some advicecos i didnt like the track

[Requiem]

what's ad libs and eq's?

also thx for the feed man. i'm 17, bout to graduate high school. LMAO i know my voice is high pitched, if i don't hear enough of it from tash and sajjad.
thx for the feed

[Slim Zaddy]

ya nice song man, i liked it
the beat is pretty nice and cathcy lyrics and rhymes are decent,

gd job ice killa .