NEW 09 - SaJJad - Time Ticks (featuring Jay-19)

[Xray]

Verse 1- It was ok. The delivery and flow were good, but lyrically it was eh in some spots. Like "I can't be alive cuz part of me's dead" it goes with the song, but it was just like "Eh.. ok" because the rest of the verse was a lot more hard hitting. The emotion was cool. Your accent didn't cause any problems. I could understand what you were saying. All good. Someone said above that as they read they lyrics they were and I agree, although while the flow and delivery were spot on it didn't make up for it totally. 7/10

Chorus- The chorus was pretty decent. Wish it could have had a more fluent delivery instead of the "word....word...word...word..." But it's all good. Not bad man. 8/10

Verse 2- Better verse. still solid delivery and flow, but better lyrics. 8/10

Verse 3- I don't know if the last guy is actually on TR or not cuz I don't remember him dropping anything recently but this verse was whack. I mean the lyrics were subpar, the delivery was dead, the flow was on and off, and compared to the first 2 verses it shouldn't be on the song. Verse needs serious work to keep up with the demands of the track imo. The whole seemed so emotional until the 3rd verse where it sounds like dude is either high as fuck or bored out his mind. 5/10

Ok so I just realized that jay19 is killahgoat... dude wtf... you're way better than that.

Overall I give this track a 7/10 largely due to the slacking of the last verse. Without it this is easily an 8 or 8.5. Maybe even a 9 if you really came hard on the 3rd verse. Keep it up man. Good job.

GOD DAMN! That's what I wanna see man. I think I was to much in the moment that I didn't realize the lyrics needed working on, but good to know now. Jay-19 was actually going for a I don't give a fuck type delivery so maybe that's why some didn't enjoy it as much. Once again I appreciate the fuck out of that feed, good lucking bro.

first verse was really nice, love the emotions near the end

Chorus is meh, not nearly as catchy as some of your other songs.

2nd verse is strong as fuck, you got these great man, don't dislike anything about it

Great verse Killah, nice to hear a different voice. You two guys sound well together. I really like your verse. I don't know who had the better verse, but you two were neck to neck.

Good song, bad chorus

Aight cool man, the overall from the majority is all over the place so I guess this track isn't 100%. Good to see real feedback shit keeps me busy. Thanks again bro.

[James R.]

No probz homie

[mcZu]

First verse, flow was great on spot and such. Delivery was there, emotions were there
Lyrics were above average but your flow and delivery make up for it.
8/10

Chorus was nice, you did a great job on the chorus.
9/10

Second verse, flow was again great, you sorta switched up your delivery on the
second verse ( atleast it sounded like that ). Lyrics seem better then the first verse.
Emotions were again present.
8.5/10

Third verse, Lyrics were ok, but the flow was way of. And he sounded like he was
bored. It didn't suck, but still if that last verse had a better delivery and a better flow
this track would have been perfect.
7/10

Overall I give this track 32/40
which is equivalant to 8/10

A nice track

[DelinQuent]

damn man, first verse is amazing, loving the depressed lyrics. flow is great as well

chorus is eh, not the best but it does a great job.

verse 2. I will always let you down, one hundred percent... sick shit. dope ass verses from you.

verse 3 is a downer, i was used to sajjad's high enery delivery and then this was more down tempo. but, if the rest of the song was like this it'd be great. the flow was decent, rhyming was solid and it was a great verse.

overall 9/10, loved the topic since i can relate to it. good shit

[Jay-19]

it was preety good..i loved the hook...

everything was preety good on your verses sajjad

didnt like jay 19 's verse...didnt have much flow...

1 complaint i have with this sajjad...is, this shit sounds just like everything else you do..nothing is different...you don't change,...there is no versitility...I wanna hear some other type shit man...be versitile...you can't do underground shit on everone of your tracks man...you gotta change it up...

Ok, I can understand when people say they didn't liked my delivery and whatnot, but to say I had no flow isn't fair I think. Just because I don't have the same flow as Sajjad on the track, doesn't mean I have no flow, just a different one. Me, myself, think I did a really great job on the flow part. But yeah, everybody has their own taste I suppose.

But anyways, thanks for the feed everyone. Now I at least know I shouldn't go with that I-don't-give-a-fuck-delivery anymore.

[Tash8]

I disagree, I LOVED the emotion on jay-19's verse, it made him feel like unimportant and shit. I love this song, and beat, great job!

[Jay-19]

I disagree, I LOVED the emotion on jay-19's verse, it made him feel like unimportant and shit. I love this song, and beat, great job!

Thanks man!

[Ka0t1c]

pretty good both of you, overall it kicked ass, 8/10

[Jay-19]

pretty good both of you, overall it kicked ass, 8/10

Thanks to you to man!

[neversnooze]

damn xray i loved the flow of your chorus, i dont know what else to say your verse was well written and jay 19 showed expression time ticks

[Xray]

First verse, flow was great on spot and such. Delivery was there, emotions were there
Lyrics were above average but your flow and delivery make up for it.
8/10

Chorus was nice, you did a great job on the chorus.
9/10

Second verse, flow was again great, you sorta switched up your delivery on the
second verse ( atleast it sounded like that ). Lyrics seem better then the first verse.
Emotions were again present.
8.5/10

Third verse, Lyrics were ok, but the flow was way of. And he sounded like he was
bored. It didn't suck, but still if that last verse had a better delivery and a better flow
this track would have been perfect.
7/10

Overall I give this track 32/40
which is equivalant to 8/10

A nice track

I appreciate you taking your time and reviewing this bro thanks alot.

damn man, first verse is amazing, loving the depressed lyrics. flow is great as well

chorus is eh, not the best but it does a great job.

verse 2. I will always let you down, one hundred percent... sick shit. dope ass verses from you.

verse 3 is a downer, i was used to sajjad's high enery delivery and then this was more down tempo. but, if the rest of the song was like this it'd be great. the flow was decent, rhyming was solid and it was a great verse.

overall 9/10, loved the topic since i can relate to it. good shit

Damn thanks man, and finally someone mentiones "depressed lyrics" cause that's what the song is. Thanks again man.

I disagree, I LOVED the emotion on jay-19's verse, it made him feel like unimportant and shit. I love this song, and beat, great job!

I agree about Jay-19's verse, thanks for the feed bro.

pretty good both of you, overall it kicked ass, 8/10

Kick ass feed Thanks man.

damn xray i loved the flow of your chorus, i dont know what else to say your verse was well written and jay 19 showed expression time ticks

CHEAA glad you liked the flow on the chorus man, appreciate your feed, thanks.

[Xray]

Bump

[Slimm]

Xray you know i dont give a fuck about deep feedback cause i never come here, but i liked this song. I NEVER check shit out round here, but i didnt knew u guys were quite good. Didnt really look at the lyrics well but from an outsider of this TR rap shit this sounds good. I liked all the verses, and the hook was fucking dope.

[Jay-19]

^ Glad you liked it!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

good lyrics overall.....
1st verse was dope all the way thru.....idk if its just me..but u stumbled on some words
2nd verse starteed great but then it kept on being dope....
jay 19 stands out with his crazy multies.....good flow aswell
....i liked the 2nd part of the hook better....thought it flowed better

overall its a strong track.....8.89/10 peace