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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:42

not u eminem. but oh well ill deal with it 4 now.
The ADHD Poem:
roses are red,
violets are blue,
i have ADHD,
... hey look there is a butterfly!
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Postby Trigger » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:43

Lmfao Alyssa outta all the things u coulda said :p . lol im pretty shur it was...not shur but atleast i can agree wit u on that one :D oh and yayo that spit was pretty decent :happy:
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:48

Only a small problem with his punchlines. Other than that he is cool.
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 22:53

^ i agreeith u 100%
The ADHD Poem:
roses are red,
violets are blue,
i have ADHD,
... hey look there is a butterfly!
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:08

Bang bang. He a good freestyler and that's his problem. He cant write shit down to a paper. Everything he spits goes free. But if you dont write the shit down you dont get it well done.
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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:16

exactly!
The ADHD Poem:
roses are red,
violets are blue,
i have ADHD,
... hey look there is a butterfly!
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:20

U know him personally? You got all this from juss listening to him? U juss playing wit me?

I cant figure it out :p
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Postby xariuss » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:21

Lmfao... i didnt go to the beat??.. have u heard eminem spit over that beat?... btw.. i agree my flow started going off at the end, but the begining in my prespective was correct
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:23

Get over it. You good at freestyling but ur punchlines suck!!!! :tounge2: :tounge2: :tounge2:
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Postby xariuss » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:26

i think u shud gimme a lesson on punch lines then :D
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:27

Go listen to Banks and Jadakiss, you'll learn.
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Postby xariuss » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:27

affirmative :flower:
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 2nd, '05, 23:32

If you get on Msn anytime, we gon talk about it.
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