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Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 03:51

http://www.zshare.net/audio/536981069f7b1785/
http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquent

after a slight hiatus lol.

basically this is kinda like a FUCK YOU to people who think i can't do what i do. especially the second verse, thats a major FUCK YOU, because regardless, wether you like it or not, i'm going to do whatever i god damn well choose to do.

feedback is wonderful :y:

sorry no lyrics since i veered off of them in a lot of parts.
some explanations:
"im holdin down on all accounts, i'm ya stock broker" stock broker's control stock accounts.

when i mention "come on girl i got a pantie trick/ dye my hair silver so scandelous" that's a play on sisco's thong song.

"i gotta move or i will lose worse than a Detroit Lion" 0-16 this season.

"call me Royce i Glow" royce 5'9 has a song called Glow

"i'm spittin ill on tracks like a model" me and pik had a song called "Like A Model" which was quite a local hit.

"i bust rhymes cause im Back On My Bullshit" busta rhymes's new cd is called B.O.M.B. (Back On My Bullshit)

"stay in denial like Barry Bonds... I'm Juiced Up"... steroid allegations.

thanks for listening, feedback appreciated.

LYRICS (some may be off):
if you want it i do anything, flow real fast, till i'm goin/
mad, slow it down, no right now, im holdin down, on all/
accounts, i'm ya stock broker, so homie stop hold up/
cause ya know he's not flowin, quite like me not nice/
like me, cause ya mans best shit couldnt handle this, come on girl i got a pantie trick/
die my hair silver so scandelous, scan ya list, i got random/
twist, to keep the plot going, and keep, you not knowin, keep ya mind blown and blow/
on mine so come on ma you know, you want, it's nonchalaunt, so un/
dun twa, eins zwei drei, come, and ride one two three come fly/
with me fly to the top i'd die, for the spot, you ridin or not? cause i/
gotta hop, i gotta move, or i, will lose, worse than a detroit lion/
every verse keeps me so high and, why in the world/
would ya try to challenge that, you wont see me counter act/
like ya eyes got cataracts, i aint into battle raps/
rather i just smack ya mad, smack ya back to/
the future, which is me, bitch, you'll see
no way to stop me no, where to run, roll with the fun, cause i'll make/
you my son, never pack lunch just packin, a punch, and im back in the bunch, actin/
a fuck, so fuck you, i, dont care, spit that shit, would you/
just quit, now move it bitch, outta my way cause i came for the game, and i/
mean business, i get vicious, i can rip shit, this is not, what you thought/
it was, sober as fuck but it's like, i'm on drugs, steroided flow, call me royce/
i glow, on these nuclear beats, it too clear to me, your stupidity, has/
you at the bottom, bottomin the bottle, im spittin ill on tracks like a model, come/
and get it, you dont want it, i, i im so fresh, i i
i flow like death, i i bust rhymes cause i'm back, on my bullshit, and i rhyme, like my lifes/
on the line, cause my lifes in these lines, so my lifes in the rhyme, forever i'm indebted to/
this pen, forever and ever till the end, so i spill that ink, like the tatts/
on my skin, go against me, you fags, never win,


rock out on a cluub track, come back with a loove track/
how you not loove that?, A&R loooves that/
underground you stuuuck at, i say mother fuuuck that/
bitch i'm on my run now, dont give a fuck about what/
you say, just watch ya mouth i'm all, about a problem now, /
bitch i got my mind right, step into the lime light/
i'm like a million, dollars rolled up into one/
man, watch meee, cause i'm on that shit you was never/
on, stay in denial like barry, bonds, i'm juiced up/
and you suck... and i dont give a fuck no more/
fuck it dog, cause i'm mooovin/
while you looosin, and i dooo this/
all day aww yeah, im done here/
there's no way to clean this up/
if i said it than i mean it bruh/
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Tash8 » Jan 5th, '09, 04:13

ur quality is awful, and ur pronounciation isnt that great

but it's a lot better than Fuck You, flow is nice but it goes off here and there.. everything else is decent

not bad, i liked the fast rap..

second verse was awful i mean
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jan 5th, '09, 04:13

Alright based on what you posted and what I could hear, you had some clever lines and shit that were pretty cool. However I must complain that listening to it...I had a hard time hearing any of them, you didn't enunciate enough and I could barely understand if you were even speaking english at times. I think you need to make it a little more clear because undeniably--you're a good writer, and that was a tight beat. So work on it some more.

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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 04:17

tash, how was the quality awful? im not disputing you, i know i popped the mic a few times but was there anything else?

thanks glad :y:
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 5th, '09, 04:20

I kinna like the fast rap...but i cant understand a word you said...the autotune didnt belong anywhere...the flow wasnt that good either...

is this a diss to someone? cuzz i know you were pissed at me...lol...

4/10 :unsure:
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 04:23

nah not a diss to anyone lol :y:

it's weird how when i listen it's like i can hear every word so clear lol. but i did stumble through a couple words... orrr a bunch of words lmfao. thanks for the feed :y:
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Tash8 » Jan 5th, '09, 04:32

DelinQuent wrote:tash, how was the quality awful? im not disputing you, i know i popped the mic a few times but was there anything else?

thanks glad :y:


that's what i mean, the awful parts were the pops, and it seemed like it going over 0db sometimes...
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 04:35

ahh yes it was, but since my wave hammer doesnt work to level the volume thru the verse i have to turn the volume up so that the entire verse can be heard and then some parts go over 0.

thanks for clearing it up, i'll make sure to check for that next time around. some spots hurt my ears in the car cause they get so loud.
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Boston » Jan 5th, '09, 05:49

i wasnt feeling this at all to be honest.
like i dont like the quality, it was hard to understand, and just stay away from the auto tune all together. if you took more time i think the 'good' lines you had could of been much better. but just keep working
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Emadyville » Jan 5th, '09, 07:50

Ok I know I fed you on aim. But after reading everyones posts and listening again, I agree with some points where words are not clear at all. And to whoever said it's like you were speaking another language he was at one point lol. But when I first got this I had the lyrics with it, so I knew what you were saying. And I am not a fan of autotone, but I really didn't mind it in this track, I know Sticcy you said it didn't belong, but would you want to hear a full song of how he was spitting? I think the switch was good into the second verse by using it, and at the same, was because the lyrics were tight. Overall I think the fact that for someone w/o lyrics to read, which would be everyone on songs, this could be better, but I enjoyed the rhymes and the quality of your content. Good to hear you switch it up and flow fast :y:
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 5th, '09, 08:23

i heard some decent lines, some good speed at one part, autotune = horrible especially on a poorly rapped track, this just turned out to be garbage, like you said, i'll use it against you, "you suck!" and there's "no way to clean this up" :n: :n:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 16:35

the autotune is me saying fuck off, i'll do what i want.

lyrics are now posted, take another listen while reading, it may help clear a lot of it up.

and kaotic... no need to be a dick about it, if you didnt like it just say so, no need to tell me i suck. but thanks for taking the time to listen :y:
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby Kez » Jan 5th, '09, 16:40

DelinQuent wrote:the autotune is me saying fuck off, i'll do what i want.


Oh back away, quick

Seriously don't ask for feed and then have a go at people if they don't like it. :whistle: You don't have to argue and give points explaining every thing they point out they dislike.

I haven't been able to check this yet but i'll give it a download and get back to you. But ^
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby DelinQuent » Jan 5th, '09, 16:43

no no, i'm not saying fuck off to anyone specific kez. if people dont like it thats their choice but it's just me saying i'm going to do what i choose to, wether you enjoy it or not.
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Re: Watch Me... Back on the Rap shit

Postby James R. » Jan 6th, '09, 01:32

Well I listened to it and I didn't like it. I could understand you fine, but the quality was eh and the autotune was subpar. You can do it if you want, but if you're going to then A.) Do it well and B.) Don't be pissed when an entire board of people who bitch about autotune on a regular basis. It also didn't help that this track was just average lyrically. There were a few good lines, but nothing to save it from mediocrity. Keep tryin man, I'd suggest staying away from autotune just becuase it's so played the fuck out, but do what you do.
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