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New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

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New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby soperman005 » Jan 5th, '09, 19:29

http://www.zshare.net/audio/53728837e532f074/

I need some feedback on this before we go in and finish the track.. thanks
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '09, 19:31

post the lyric man ..
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby soperman005 » Jan 5th, '09, 19:40

i'll post the lyrics when i post the finished track..

feedback?
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '09, 19:42

soperman005 wrote:i'll post the lyrics when i post the finished track..

feedback?



okay dude . got no problem i'm downloading it right know .. .
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Jens14 » Jan 5th, '09, 19:43

Sounds hot man :y:
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Kez » Jan 5th, '09, 19:59

soperman005 wrote:feat. Eminem


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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Jumbo » Jan 5th, '09, 20:04

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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Boston » Jan 5th, '09, 20:33

why would you say feature eminem? if this is the actual business song with eminem i lost all respect for you. well im not even going to bother looking. i have no respect for you!
NO FEED FOR YOU.

edit: actually i lied, i was curious and ended up checking. its straight
flow was on point for the most time, lyrics are elementary. and don't say feat. eminem. but yeah.

w/e idk

practice.

check my track asylum!
Last edited by Boston on Jan 5th, '09, 20:35, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby soperman005 » Jan 5th, '09, 20:34

wtf i sample him in for the chorus. chill out.. damn..
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Boston » Jan 5th, '09, 20:35

dont worry, edited it ^^^^^
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby soperman005 » Jan 5th, '09, 20:38

k yeah not trying to disrespect eminem or anything. i just thought it sounded dope with him in the chorus. lol dont lose respect for me
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '09, 21:52

man it can't download it ,, i hve tryed many times .. so put it on any other site so i could feed you in this ,
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Brandon S » Jan 6th, '09, 00:20

Boston wrote:why would you say feature eminem? if this is the actual business song with eminem i lost all respect for you. well im not even going to bother looking. i have no respect for you!
NO FEED FOR YOU.

edit: actually i lied, i was curious and ended up checking. its straight
flow was on point for the most time, lyrics are elementary. and don't say feat. eminem. but yeah.

w/e idk

practice.

check my track asylum!



Damn son its not that big of a fuckin deal he said featuring em
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Jay-19 » Jan 6th, '09, 02:06

I really really like the beat. Catchy as hell!
Flow is pretty much on point throughout the track, but the rhymes isn't anything special.
I think the sampled Eminem chorus ruined the track, you really should do something on your own instead because it didn't fit at all. Not saying it was bad or anything, but it just didn't suit this track man.

Overall, pretty good track. :y:
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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby D-Smith01 » Jan 6th, '09, 20:00

em is the shit but u suck
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