**NEW**Lil M - Bye Bye Swag

[Rapsoldier101]

Lil M - Bye-Bye Swag.mp3 - 7.54MB

This is my song I did especially for 2009, talking about how its time ti put 2008 fads to rest. Im NOT being a hipocrit, I did participate in some 08 fads but their played out now, so the song is saying that its 2009 now, so to all those who are still participating to the played out fads, its done.


thanks in advance for any feedback

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

this is soooo a mainstream attempt haha...
but actually its a kool song...flow is kool...delievery is aite man...kool laid back..lyrics above decent
hook is as i said mainstream to the fullest....lol...some pro engineer/mixer could make it a big hit
beat works lol...oh...you and autotune = no no...dont advice it....glad u passe that then lol
u black? wutchu mean wit that..
mixing could be a bit better...especially the vocal volume...
still 7.85/10

[Rapsoldier101]

this is soooo a mainstream attempt haha...
but actually its a kool song...flow is kool...delievery is aite man...kool laid back..lyrics above decent
hook is as i said mainstream to the fullest....lol...some pro engineer/mixer could make it a big hit
beat works lol...oh...you and autotune = no no...dont advice it....glad u passe that then lol
u black? wutchu mean wit that..
mixing could be a bit better...especially the vocal volume...
still 7.85/10

THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK

not a mainstream attemp, but i was trying to make a song with a message so that people who mainly listen to mainstream could like it too. I was trying to reach out to different crowds, ya kno? and yea i kno me + autotune = never again lol but i was using it as an example,

[<Stiiccy>]

Ok what the fuck was that...

the chorus was so bad it was somewhat comical...dude this kind of topic is played out...no one cares about this shit no more...

You didn't sound like you cared, so the delivery was slacking alot...

Flow was horrible through out...

the beat was ehh...i didnt like it to much...

don't do this shit man...ive heard better stuff from you...

[Nick419]

blah hater, but like i said on myspace i thought it was tight n i'm feeling the message the song puts out. I can see where people wouldnt be fans of the chorus but the verses were riight

[Boston]

Ok what the fuck was that...

the chorus was so bad it was somewhat comical...dude this kind of topic is played out...no one cares about this shit no more...

You didn't sound like you cared, so the delivery was slacking alot...

Flow was horrible through out...

the beat was ehh...i didnt like it to much...

don't do this shit man...ive heard better stuff from you...

haha its not THAT bad, flow wasnt HORRIBLE, it was straight, you sound like you havent reached puberty (no offense) and it sounds like you from the south. and the delivery was straight. need better mixing. autotune is a no no. your not that bad though, keep it up

peep the asylum track a few threads below!!

[Nick419]

y do u guys keep pointing out he used autotune when the whole point of using it was the songs about 2008 fads. and autotune was deff. a huge 2008 fad, n its only for like 2 lines

[Boston]

^^ okay thats not the point, the point is he used it horribly (sounds horrible) if it sounded decent we wouldn't be complaining (well i wouldnt be) all because he made a decent topic that doesnt mean its a good song. why are you questioning OUR feedback? he posted it in here. so were leaving our feedback.

[Tash8]

how are u saying good bye to it when ur using the same things, u should have done something original to say, enough with that shit, time for some original shit.

[Nick419]

^^ okay thats not the point, the point is he used it horribly (sounds horrible) if it sounded decent we wouldn't be complaining (well i wouldnt be) all because he made a decent topic that doesnt mean its a good song. why are you questioning OUR feedback? he posted it in here. so were leaving our feedback.

i wasn't questioning your feedback in particular just sticky's cuz he was tottally trashing the song, feedback is usually advice,tips, n opinions not a full blown diss : /. I'll give anyone's music a chance but even if i dont like it i aint goin 2 dwell on it n say O EVERYTHING ABOUT IT SUCKED unless all your music released prior 2 this was wack as well. plus i dont see how using 2 lines of autotune means he used it horribly, its not like its used periodically through out the song or it could of sounded better, ive downloaded autotune on my computer myself n theres not much u can do with it to make it sound better since it doesnt matter if u hit the notes

[<Stiiccy>]

Ok what the fuck was that...

the chorus was so bad it was somewhat comical...dude this kind of topic is played out...no one cares about this shit no more...

You didn't sound like you cared, so the delivery was slacking alot...

Flow was horrible through out...

the beat was ehh...i didnt like it to much...

don't do this shit man...ive heard better stuff from you...

haha its not THAT bad, flow wasnt HORRIBLE, it was straight, you sound like you havent reached puberty (no offense) and it sounds like you from the south. and the delivery was straight. need better mixing. autotune is a no no. your not that bad though, keep it up

peep the asylum track a few threads below!!

Ahem mother fucker I am from the south lol...

And the reason I said it was THAT BAD is because I know this kid is capable of better shit than this...Ive heard him spit shit 1000 times better...

and how the fuck do I sound like I havent hit puberty? god damn I thought we were talkin about this kids shit not mine...fuck you dude

[Boston]

lol retard ^^^^ we cleared this up on msn but obviously i was talking about him when i was talking about the flow delivery and all that haha

so fuck you

[<Stiiccy>]

lol retard ^^^^ we cleared this up on msn but obviously i was talking about him when i was talking about the flow delivery and all that haha

so fuck you

yeah fuck me for thinkin that lol hahahaha