[Mixtape]C-Riz - Serious C-Riz

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oh c'mon...164 views and 4 reviews.....
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[B.A.D.]

alrite here it goes

1.Front Of The Line
the beat is hot, the volume of your voice is too low, can't hear your intro... oh, verse 1, better now hahaha, hmm youre pronunciation doesn't work on a fast rapping like you did here, just giving a tip here , the beat is not your style at all thats why I'm surprised that you managed to do it good, hook is ok, but not catchy at all hahaha, anyways, not my fav. from you, but you did it good, I like how you start verse 2, nice track. 7/10

2.Trapped (feat. Profaz & Spizzy)
hmm I thought you wasn't gonna have collabs on this tape, profaz flow doesn't work on this type of beats, he needs to rhyme faster, I don't understand anything, but I like your fast flow better, the hook is amazing, I like it a lot, the flow you put on it is unique, great job here, you ride better on the beat, I like that, also your new delivery makes it great, definitively a big improved on this, hook again I'm loving it, Spizzy!!!, daymnnnnzzzzz, this is some flawless flow, whoa!!, holy shit man, this is prolly one of the best verses I've hurd from you, I love how you rode the beat here, amazing flow, great track, amazing work on this. 10/10

3.Evil Absinth
lol at the title, great intro, hahaha, damn, great choice of beat, nice flow you got there, good verse, still gotta work a bit on pronunciation cuz I don't understand some, the hook is good, verse 2 has a better emotion, flow is good, I like the rhyme scheme you used on the second part of the verse, good thing, verse 3, same as verse 2, good. you did improved, but still need to fix your pronunciation for better enjoyment, good track anyways, 8/10

4.Skit
that you????? LOL

5.Life
whoa, where you got this beat, you defo have a great taste for beats, nice starting with the hook, should've had the volume a bit higher, but nice nice hook, verse 1, yeah!!! you have better pronunciation here, I love the concept and the lyrics, deep stuff, great methaphors also man, hook is great, good to make it catchy on a sad track, I like this one a lot, this could be a great choice for your myspace, amazing track, and the lyrics picture real stuff 10/10

6.Child Memories
I love this track, already fed it (just a note here: the mixing of this track is better than the others, dunno why, but I can listen to it that way, so u can keep it real good like this track)

7.Psycho Remix
Mart = Genious, nuff said hahaha, you switched up the flow a bit on here, didn't love it, but it works good, hahaha DAYMN!!! your lyrics are fya!!, hahaha, the hook.. hmm didn't like it, volume problem again, but hmm, it grows on me, hahaha, damn, I fucking love the lyrics of this track. one of my favourites, only flaw was the hook. 9.5/10

8.Plastic Man
I like the title, but I had something 100% diferent pictured in my mind... anyways, good sample for the hook, and your flow is great, I love the structure youre using here, and the hook works really good. verse 2 is amazing, I love the lyrics, deep stuff, but for a short album 3 deep tracks, hmm dunno, maybe you could've add more topics, still this is an excelent track and I love how you ride the beat, amazing work 9/10. (lyrics )

Overall: I loved it, but shame its very short, you could've add more stuff to this, it is a great job, I liked "The C-Riz Project" more, but this is not behind, amazing album, amazing way to end it with "platic man", so, defo a BIG improvement from you, only things to work on are:
-a bit of the flow
-pronunciation
-volumes

other than that, pure genious, I'd give this album a 10/10, but next time please put more tracks.

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thanks man... yeah i gotta admit its a bit short
and for everyone...i was goin for this "talkin" kind of hook....
but yeah really good review

[Call Me Pik]

i'll be leaving feed in a lil bit

EDIT meaning in a day or so

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aite be waiting

[SajN]

I won't feed a shit

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh thx cuz this is definitly not a shit ...did i make sense?
anywayz...aite feel free....wont force anybody (as i even could lol)

[SajN]

lol j/k, you knew that ofc.

I'll feed any day soon. I am in class right now lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lol..yeah i knew it i can count on you..
aite..have fun in class...

[Kez]

Downloaded this to my phone because C-Riz leaves a lot of feed for people and i don't want to see his thread die.

Front of the Line:
Beat sounds different, but it's sick.
Intro is a bit hard to hear.
Got a good flow, lyrics are some typical shit for this track but i like it.
Pronunciation and delivery has a definate improvement, it's clearer and more emotive.
Hook i like but it could have used an effect to seperate it from the verses.
Again though your talking parts are too quiet, very hard to hear.

Trapped (feat. Profaz and Spizzy)
I've heard this beat before.
First guy i can only judge on flow and delivery, which were sick.
Hook has inklings of sick flow at points
C-Riz your flow here is some good stuff, lyrics i liked
Delivery is decent but could be a bit more angry for the beat.
Spizzy, you absolutely kill this. Enough said

Evil Absinth:
I like the spoken intro
Nice beat
Flow is decent, slips off a few times
Lyrics work okay, i think they could have been more sadistic though considering
"Eat you up like Pacman"
Delivery sounds decent at most points
Hook is nice, your voice on it reminds me of Sticcy

Skit:
Ehhh i thought it was decent but it was basically you saying how good you are for 24 seconds.
I was kind of still waiting for the joke.

Life:
Ah, people, i was gonna be on this Didn't know that did you?
Hook is much improved from when you sent me the rough mix Still think it could have used more effects to distinguish it though.
Delivery has also much improved, sounds much more sombre
Lyrics i like

Child Memories:
I love the beat
This song reminds me of Those Were the Days by Lady Sovereign, one of my all time favourites.
Lyrics i'm loving, concept's good.
You did a good job flowing on this beat it's got a kinda skip every 4 bars hasn't it? I noticed that.
Who's the singer? Nice hook.

Psycho Remix:
Crazy beat, Mart outdoes himself once again
A bit short for my liking i was a bit surprised at the quick ending
Flow is alright, lyrics are more of the similiar fare
Delivery is okay
Hook works
At the end it sounds a bit quiet

Plastic Man:
Beat is insane!!
Sample goddamn!!
You must reserve me this beat for when i get my sound back
Flow is great
Lyrics are deep, i like it
Delivery is perfect for this song
Easily my favourite song by far from the tape

Overall:
Beat choice is top-notch.
I liked the lack of features, cause it needs mostly you. Your few features did great though.
I saw several different concepts, which was good, although a couple got repeated. But i was loving the last few songs most. Flow you're improving with, you slipped off a bit at times but certainly better than the C-Riz Project. Pronunciation too is becoming clearer. Your delivery has improved too; still some way to go, but much better. Quality sounded fine to me i heard no problems.

tl;dr: big improvement, better than the C-Riz Project, still some way to go but can see improvement and can guess it will continue in the next tape.

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mad propz kez.... for evne listenin via phone..hehe..
im really glad u could enjoy most of the tracks

and for everyone....on Front of the Line i mixed the intro and hook like that on purpose....and the skit was basicly me actin like a professional news reporter..i was messin around

thx again kez

[Tash8]

i'll hit this up soon, been busy with shit.

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guess imma put this on top again

[SajN]

Bumping this!!


COME ON PEOPLE, FEED THIS!!



(mine will be here soon )

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im waitin sajn....thx