just want some opinions....

[spitz2]

go to my dude xplisit page..... [url]myspace.com/xplisit129[/url] and check out the songs "Sweet dreams". its the song we get most of our props on. xplisit 1st, rip 2nd, and me, pq, 3rd. if u listen to my, u can tell i drew from biggie for my verse from suicidal thoughts.

[Ka0t1c]

it's a great track, awesome concept, great beat, it feels right, even tho your rhyming was simple, it leaves a deep message that everyone should listen to, i definitely feel this track and wouldn't mind playing it over and over in my car because it makes me think about what is real and also i could smoke & ride to this and freestyle.

great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[spitz2]

thanks man. i try to make as much syllables as i can in my shit....thats why some shit kinda runs together. we dont use time to get our shit down perfect....i completely fucked up a rhyme though. where i say "tried to do my best life is hard/ to my friends blah blah/' i mean to say live life its hard, give my regards. dont really notice, jus pisses me off and i wish i could do it better.