Jay-19 - Never Got To Be The Man

[Jay-19]

This is supposed to be on my upcoming EP which I'm hoping to drop somewhere around Mars or April if everything goes the way I planned.
The EP is going to be kind of a sad one. With dark lyrics and beats.
But it might have some happy tracks also.


It's actually sort of a remake of an old song I did when I just started out rapping.
The only things different are I changed beat and with that flow, and added a third verse to it.

Detailed feedback is appreciated, not just "whack shit!" or "hot shit!".
I want to know what I can do better.

Jay-19 - Never Got To Be The Man.mp3 - 3.51MB

[Jay-19]

C'mon now... 21 views and not a single opinion?

[Tash8]

great song! you need to work on your pronunciation, it's understandable but it can be better. I noticed in the past 3 songs, you've had the exact rhyme scheme and flow, i suggest switching up.

Not really liking the hook all that much, just doesn't seem catchy or make want to repeat the song.

beat is great!

basically: verses were great, hook not so much.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

already told ya.....man this is a sick track...love your pronouncationa and rhymes on it..
flow was VERY decent ....great song

[Jay-19]

Thanks for the feedback guys.

[dbeauluvswomen]

I love dark/piano type beats. This is dope track. Great flow and lyrics, but I especially love the chorus. Though simple, I really think it's excellent with words. This is the type of shit that goes through my mind..something I'd write. I love the feel as if you're ending it all..or the feel that you had already. Flawless. I can't wait for the EP! One of the best tracks I've heard on this board.

[Jay-19]

I love dark/piano type beats. This is dope track. Great flow and lyrics, but I especially love the chorus. Though simple, I really think it's excellent with words. This is the type of shit that goes through my mind..something I'd write. I love the feel as if you're ending it all..or the feel that you had already. Flawless. I can't wait for the EP! One of the best tracks I've heard on this board.

Damn!
Really, really glad you like it that much man!
I just hope you'll the other tracks on the EP as much as this one!

Feels fucking good to hear!

[Slim Zaddy]

man file is not found , where is the song ,, can you upload it

[Slim Zaddy]

man file is not found , where is the song ,, can you upload it

try not to bump 4 month old topics lol

i just try to feed him ,, nothinless , cuz i like jay songs ,,

[Solace]

man file is not found , where is the song ,, can you upload it

try not to bump 4 month old topics lol

i just try to feed him ,, nothinless , cuz i like jay songs ,,

So then its not suprising that the link is dead if its 4 months, right? Could have just PM'd him or something

[Slim Zaddy]

man file is not found , where is the
try not to bump 4 month old topics lol

i just try to feed him ,, nothinless , cuz i like jay songs ,,

So then its not suprising that the link is dead if its 4 months, right? Could have just PM'd him or something

could just mind in your business bitch ,,




kidden man ,,

[Solace]

Rofl

Anyways, you wanted to track, you got the track:
Sendspace Download Link
Youtube Link

[Slim Zaddy]

Rofl

Anyways, you wanted to track, you got the track:
Sendspace Download Link
Youtube Link

thanks bro ,,

EDit : it's sick Jay ,, i actually a fan of your music , i like them ,, beat is sick ,, flow and delivery are sick ,, lyrics are nice , they are full of emotions ,, it's a good track ,, good job man ,, keep it up

[Emadyville]

Wasn't up when I clicked on the link, pm me it and I'll feed it