MORE NEW STEVE SPAG - Rap's Benoit (MUST HEAR)

[Steve Spag]

This was my track for the Audio Tourny. Since nobody got to compete against their opponent, I'm leaking this track now. Props to Mart for the beat, I actually had it on my comp. for awhile before and had forgot about it, so glad that was brought back up, lol.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/545248742ad8c593/

Enjoy, and please leave some feedback!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

flow is very nice man...delievery okay too....mart beats
hook got a slick catchy rhyming....good track.. like the 2nd verse more...flow-wise and lyrics-wise...nice track man

[Tash8]

great song bro.

[DelinQuent]

first verse is dope, good shit man.

hook is great too, grilled cheese line was funny.

second verse, same as the first. good flow so far on both.

third verse, rhyming got weaker here, but still not bad.

overall 7/10, basic shit talking but still a good track.

[mart85]

cool song man not much else to say, it's all good... I thought the chorus after the first verse was mixed a little early, like maybe you could "move" it to the right just a little bit (in a mixing program I mean) but it might just be me

nice song again

[gladimnotsoluble]

Chorus was definitely dope, second verse was the best, first and third need some more work--but overall...7.5/10 Nice job man

[Solace]

Good beat Mart Nice stuff Steve, as usual I liked your chorus, really sick the way you rapped it. Lyrics are nice too, delivery is good in all points. Keep it up (i know you will, haha)

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you like the track.
@Mart: Yeah, I think you're right, I'll change it when I go to the studio next.

Keep the feed comin' please.

[Robbie G]

I loved it. It's too bad Boston couldn't record because it would have been a good battle.

I love this beat, I used it awhile back.

[Solace]

"I should cross the river and start stalking Em,
but I joke with that raunchy thread,
If i called him up I'd get a false address"

Is that an Eminem diss? Or did I get the lyrics wrong for that part.

[Steve Spag]

It's not a diss, it's just expressing how bad I want to make it. But knowing Eminem's past with people wanting to get in contact with him (Spratt), it wouldn't work out right, is all I was saying.

[Solace]

It's not a diss, it's just expressing how bad I want to make it. But knowing Eminem's past with people wanting to get in contact with him (Spratt), it wouldn't work out right, is all I was saying.

Ah okay, that's what I thought at first you meant . Anyways this track is so dope:



29 plays haha

[Boston]

feeding as im listening.

1st verse:
the trash punchline in the begining was pretty cool
delivery is on spot, and its cool how you adressed the eminem thing, i know what ya mean man
its cool how you make words rhyme when they really dont in a way, but you make them

the chorus is okay, gets the point across
dope fiend line was nice

the 2nd verse is cool, wasnt feeling the first 2 bars, the kids buying presents shit etc.
but the rest is really nice

the third verse is cool, i like the ending a lot, trying to be the best on the map, no ones messing with you and all thats. good shit

overall i think its a decent track and i heard better from you, but you are one of my favorite artist on this website.

sorry that we couldn't do this battle, ive been tight with money and i guess this kid recorded a diss track towards me so im going to have to work on that soon haha. but w/e that kid doesnt bother me. but hey maybe we can do a collab or something so these people can here us ona track, what yall think people?!

but yeah man, good job.
keep it up

[Rain Matrix]

damn hook was pretty badass... 2nd verse was my favorite although you had some catchy lines all throughout I liked the last rhyme "protected by the feds"

DOPE - keep it up bro

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for all the positive feedback guys, it's all greatly appreciated as I'm sure you already know.
@Boston: Anytime you wanna collab, I'm deffinetly down. I think we could do some damage on a track together. All you have to do is send your part over to me and I'll bring it to the studio.