first off, you spelled *sacrifice* wrong lol
1-flow is great here. good shit thus far. rhyming is good. im really into this song, it's great.
second verse, upside down 9's, good shit. great verse, loved it. flow was great, lyrics were also good.
third verse, fumbled some words, but i don't care, i still love this. great verse again.
10/10, way to start off. fucking great track here. defo will be my favorite.
2-loving the acoustic guitar on the beat, overall beat is dope. good pick. great sample
delivery doesn't match the laid back beat. flow comes and goes on the first verse, but the rhyming keeps it going. decent verse
pk does not go along with this song at all, he's talking about something completely different. horrible feature, good rhyming and flow, but it doesnt fit this song at all
overall minus PK 8/10, good shit so far.
3-already fed this, dope track.
4-cool intro lmfao. flow is great in the start, good shit. then the flow comes off when you mention the ouiji board (did i spell ouiji right? lmfao).
second verse is eh, flow sounds off, doesnt match the tempo of the beat, sounds like youre going a bit too fast on a slow beat.
third, flow is off again, it just makes it sound bad in my opinion.
overall 5/10 due to flow issues, no hate
5-already fed. a good track
6-wasnt this track on your myspace a while ago? or maybe it was just the intro.
first verse, flow is great here, matches the beat well, along with the weird delivery. good shit. good rhymes, sounds comical lol.
holy shit, volumes on hook, hurt my fucking ears, ouch. makes me want to turn it off, i do not like this hook.
second verse, who is this?, sounds a bit like McMaybe, either way this verse was amazing, flow was sick as fuck. very smooth. defo got your ass jay-zed on this lol.
overall, 6/10 due to the hook which i feel is the most important part of a song since it's what people hear most, verses were both done very well tho.
7-rhyming is solid on the first verse, but again the flow problems arise, not terribly tho, still a decent flow, but it definately sounds a bit off, especially toward the end of the verse.
hook again, volumes, hurting my ears. again, not a good hook.
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second verse, flow again is messing the verse up. lyrics were good tho. rhyming was also decent.
third verse, i hear you stuffing sylablles in to hit the snare on time, gotta work on that. flow is again a problem. it just doesnt match this beat. rhyming was decent tho.
overall 5/10, bad hook, bad flow,
8-hmm, this song wouldnt play for me... not sure why, came up with an error.
9-sajjad diss, already fed.
10-lmfao at the beat, MIA. flow is great, sounds similar to hers. kill her with some chapstick? wtf? random ass line lol. after the disasterous flow on the previous songs, this shit is bonkers, love it.
enough of the kurt kobain shit lol. second verse is solid, flow is again good. rhyming is solid.
overall 9/10 another classic track here. should have cut the song before she started talking.
11-beat sounds familiar. hook is funny lol. good shit.
first verse is dope, solid flow, solid rhymes. doesnt sound like you tho... lol.
second verse, starts off weird, mixing sounds awkward. flow is good, rhymes are good as well. funny story. what the fuck what the fuck lmfao but that shit hurt my ears again.
overall 8/10 a great track here.
12-YOU STOLE THE BEAT I USED, YOU PIECE OF SHIT lmfao.
my song was called fuck youself, if you didnt check it, it's on my myspace at
http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquentflow is solid, rhymes are good. too much energy in the delivery for this type of track.
hook is eh, didnt do much for me.
second verse, flow comes off at the start but returns. great lyrics, good message.
third verse, rhyming is eh on this verse, but still not bad. flow was decent as well
overall 7/10 MINE'S BETTER lmfao, i'm playin. a decent effort.
OVERALL for the entire album 6/10, it sounds like youre not listening to the beats when you write and that may be the cause for your flow issues, because on some tracks the flow was great, then other tracks it seemed there was no flow that matched the beat. so in essence, you had a steady flow, but that steady flow didnt match the beat and therefore sounded bad. had a few enjoyable tracks on it. the first song was BY FAR my favorite. looking forward to you improving on the flow

keep it up sticcy, you've come a loooooong way from when you first posted an audio.
ALSO, if i sounded harsh or offensive in anyway, i didnt mean to be and i do apollogize, i just want to give you the most honest feedback so that you can hear my opinion, which it is my OPINION, not a fact. so if you feel i was wrong, no big deal, brush it off and do what you do, but i'm not just saying shit to bring you down, im trying to tell you the flaws to help you improve.