Big Ax-D - Step Your Game Up

[B.A.D.]

yoooo!!! I made a new track to test out my new quality, bought myself a new condenser mic, and got a lot of help from various artists to improve the quality of it, special thanks to Hybrid Purity on it
PLEASE feed mostly on the quality, like what can I add/remove etc...

TITLE: Step Your Game Up
ARTIST: Big Ax-D
BEAT PRODUCED BY: Big Ax-D (also feed the beat if you want)
ALBUM: no album, just a random track
LINK:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/547557526617118a/

LYRICS:

Step Your Game Up
Big Ax-D
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(Intro)
yeah... New Millenium!!

(Verse 1)
Define a King, just look at me
All this people like me, Its crazy
I'm fortunate, like reading cristals balls
I saw a mad man, I'm looking forward
I'm a pricelss fucker but I'm worht a while
just listen closely and close your eyes
I got you hating me from the start
I wish I could produce a beat like Mart
I know the chapter, I know the book
I know the rules, and I know the hook
I memorized the lines, I flamed the ice
do you understand??, I give supplies
who do you think was the first to invade?
your rapping utopia, shit, thats a shame
K-K-K-K-Kill The name
Only thing I tell you, improve ya game

(Hook)x2
We're arriving from the zone
catch our breaths before we're gone
Step your game up, you ain't done
look at me and see who's wrong

(Verse 2)
I'm the one who said "I AM KING"
I'm the one you hate to hear sing
I'm the love of the robot voice
I'm the king nigga, I made my choice
briefly feed with some short hate thought
my middle finger can whip the flop
I'm remorseless, Basically I don't give a fuck
throw me in jail and keep me locked
I'm a pacifist but I could panic pals
I'm a terrorist, so I make tragic calls
I'm rightful, righteous, a right hand man
I'm a riot, a rumble, a one man band
I returned, revamped, revealed the best
I'm scared of my word when its put to test
Big is spectacular, Big is immaculate
Ax is like Dracula, Ax-Dizzie battle like...

(Hook) x4
We're arriving from the zone
catch our breaths before we're gone
Step your game up, you ain't done
look at me and see who's wrong

[Steve Spag]

Pretty sick track man, good track to throw out there and keep your name out. The hook is pretty catchy, it flows pretty nice. The beat is iight, I think it fits the song pretty nice actually. Overall a pretty decent track bro, keep it up!


Check out my new track "Rap's Benoit" when you get a chance and let me know what you think man.

[Nu Syd]

damn nice one, i like the beat, vocal quality sounds crazy, EQ you did sounds nice , tiny de essing needed, but its very minor, reverb is subtle, which I like, good job!!

[B.A.D.]

damn nice one, i like the beat, vocal quality sounds crazy, EQ you did sounds nice , tiny de essing needed, but its very minor, reverb is subtle, which I like, good job!!

I actually did a de-esser, but I had to keep a very simple one so I don't mess up the whole effect list lol, also I edited the salvdor reverb to keep it better, thanks a lot for the feed bro, appreciated

thanks a lot Steve also, glad you liked it, much appreciated, give me a link to youre track so I can listen to it

[Steve Spag]

thanks a lot Steve also, glad you liked it, much appreciated, give me a link to youre track so I can listen to it

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=55369

[<Stiiccy>]

I liked it...loved you delivery and flow...the beat kinda annoyed me,,,and the hook was complete shit...minus those 2 and i thouhg it was a nice track,.,
not the best mixing...
but a solid 7/10

[Boston]

the beat is catchy and nice in my opinion but not quite my style

the hook is unbelievably catchy and is very dope.

the first verse is okay, can be better on some pronunciation but i want to get right to the second verse.
i think the 2nd verse itself is on a whole different level than the first one. the way you switched up the rhyming and flow at some points. very nice. and i know earlier i said something about your pronunciation, but its also a very positive thing because you make things rhyme that shouldn't haha.
seems like a tendency on this site.


keep it up man
collab!

[Slim Zaddy]

that's fucking hot bro, i really love your thug voice ,, really nice ,, the beat was sick and the hook was also great ,, i love the way you changed your flow it's pretty sick ,,, dope track ,, 9.5/10 ,, gd here

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

sick flow man..i agree with steve on the hook...catchy as hell haha typical ax-d beat what can i say hehe
hmm..quality was very good man...did you add reverb to your vocals?

[Almostlity]

Hook is too great nice quality and catchy beat

9/10 ( I lost 1 star, cant find it anywhere)

[Kez]

To avoid questions, i listened on my phone. It's Ax-D, i have to check it. C'mon.

Beat sounded unpromising at the start but i loved it when it kicked in

I can't be exact on quality but it sounds fucking sick from what i hear

I thought the flow on the verses was fuckin crazy and complimented the fast beat really well. Lyrics are typical Ax-D fare, but i enjoyed it. Some multis here and there though, which is rare for you. I liked it.
The hook is a hit or miss thing i think, it was okay but i just didn't personally love it.

"All The Way To Sydney Mixtape" eh? Something going on here?

Sick little mini-track though For what it is it works perfect

[randomghost]

WOOOOOOW AMAZING BEAT FUCKIN NICE QUALITY HOT ASS FLOW NICE LYRICS HOT HOOK HOT ASS TRACK good job

[DelinQuent]

damn ax, didnt even see this.

beat sounds kinda like techno lol but it's not bad

fortunate like crystal balls, dope line. flow is solid, rhyming is also good.

hook-no, dont like it. has a good melody, but you dont pull it off well.

second verse, same feed as the first basically, dope shit. end of the verse was fucking sick.

overall-6/0, bad hooks can completely ruin songs, and it did this one. verse wise, you're definately getting better so keep it up.

[B.A.D.]

wow, a lot of feed, thanks people

@ Boston.- thanks a lot for cheking man, pronunciation has always been my major issue, its really hard for me to focus on that, but I'll keep trying thanks a lot bro

@ Z-em.- thanks a million bro, glad you liked it, my voice is not like this when I normally speak (well sometimes it is) but I dunno why when I speak louder or when I rap it turns to this Xzibit like shit hahaha,

@ C-Riz.- word man, thanks a lot for the feed, really glad you liked it , I tried not to add too much reverb, but I added a little

@ Lyrical.- word bro, thanks a lot for cheking, greatly appreciated!!!, glad u liked hook n beat

@ Kez.- damn, thanks a lot for takin the time to put it into your phone and listen man!!!!, if it sounds good on your cellphone it mean I got good quality so I defo appreciate that!!, also about the All The Way To Sydney Mixtape is a failed project, I started it a couple months ago but I decided to focus more on my upcoming album , thanks a lot for cheking man

@ Random Ghost.- , thanks a million man, glad you liked it!!!, thanks for the coment on quality

@ DQ.- word man, thanks a lot for the feed, apreciate you for listenin and giving honest feed, I agree my hook could be better done lol, but word up, thanks for sharing your thoughts

[Jay-19]

Wow man!
Quality is much better not than before bro!

Here we go:

Beat is insanely catchy, it should be criminal to have that catchy beats. It's been stuck on my mind all day man!
Flow on it is almost as good as the beat! Really well done on that part, although I think verse 1 had better flow to be honest. Seems like you were rushing some lines in the second verse. But nothing to bitch about man, good job!
Hook is awesome! In my opinion on of your best hooks!
Lyrics aren't great, but not crap either. A good way to say that you're still alive and rapping.

Overall, a really good track which I'm probably going to listen a lot more in the future because of that catchy fucking melody in the beat and the catchy hook!