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Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 5th, '05, 18:38

yall be trippin of this shit when iam finshed it,
but yall niggas got nothing so get rid of it,
dont mess with the master of this rappin shit,
i was born with it,
i speak and sleep with it,
if i cant then i cry with it,
but thats old ,not now but fortold,
so as long as you know who runs the show then just forget it,
the masters no what happing so dont forget it,
they call me casper cause down on jane and finch niggas get at me,
holla and chat wit me,
so when iam gone dont carry on and celebrate,
cause my 12 gauge shottie gots you locked up and casterate,
one two three you cant see me cause iam casper and a ghost is what you see,
boo,
ha ha ha ,
my love for this shit gets high ah ah ah,
but for the platinum i go buck rah rah rah,
no more fucking around lets get down,
and finish or discussion,
about how much blood you will be gushin,
iam done ill be back but watch your back,
cause the last thing youll need is,
A GAT ON THIS TRACK
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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Postby Trigger » Dec 5th, '05, 22:57

it was alright, no complaintes, but ummm try using more words then "it" but all in all not bad
stay active :D
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ya its just i was high and couldnt fix my word stright still

Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 6th, '05, 19:36

ya iam better when iam not on drugs so ill post a next one soon time to let yall no whats good with jane and finch
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 6th, '05, 20:32

this isnt a rap battle so this belongs in creative writiing mate
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Re: ya its just i was high and couldnt fix my word stright s

Postby Trigger » Dec 8th, '05, 04:36

Casper_1111 wrote:ya iam better when iam not on drugs so ill post a next one soon time to let yall no whats good with jane and finch


ight yo, oh and u shouldnt do drungs :whistle: :smoking:
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Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 8th, '05, 18:02

what drugs keep me from faling down man neways ~1~
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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