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C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 5th, '09, 00:42

ehh i wasn't feelin this track

The beat was great ..and the topic was preety good

C-riz..again bro you have flow issues if you would smoothin your words out and have a bit more word play you would be better...and delivery, you seem like your strugleling to speak English which is somthing your going to HAVE to fix...lyrics were ok...but i would sugest to fix ur flow write simple rhymes...

Big Ax-D...Just and average verse from you...the lyrics were preety good..your flow was just ok..it's been waaay better...And you sound high as fuck and as if you dont care...i didn't feel this verse much man...

Pik...your lyrics were dope as fuck and your flow was even better...only problem i seen was when you basically lost your breath which didn't sound that cool...try to just do a cut in if you lose your breath...Again though i don't like your delivery ..it's not my style...and i don't like it at all

Hook was preety damn good ...i liked it alot

overall id give this like 5/10

c-riz and ax should have stepped up ...
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby Call Me Pik » Feb 5th, '09, 09:32

thanks for the love yall...my favorite verse was def axd's verse shyt was sick "the movement..etc." verse was perfect idk what happen wit my quality yall my bad for that but its all good ...nice ass remix props random n criz

oh yeah and at the end of my verse i did start losing my breath .....fuck yall notice everything lmao
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby randomghost » Feb 5th, '09, 11:20

no worries pik :8) track is hot :smoking: :smoking:
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby enjinn » Feb 8th, '09, 13:26

all mc's on this brought some fire...this that hot shit...very nice track...something id put on my mp3 player
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby randomghost » Feb 8th, '09, 18:12

enjinn wrote:all mc's on this brought some fire...this that hot shit...very nice track...something id put on my mp3 player
thanx alot bro..appreciated :flower: :flower:
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby Xray » Feb 14th, '09, 10:50

C-riz's verse wasn't that good I felt it was lacking like it was rushed you can tell. Ax-d's verse cool, but it was mixed in a weird ass way. Beat was hot though for real, big step up from last I heard a beat from you. Pik Pocket sounds alright, lyrics were cool and so was the flow, verse wasn't mixed bad either. Your verse was good too, your verse is probably my fav on this one, cause you flowed to your beat best, and your overlays made the verse sound cooler. Mixing on this song was messy, cause each verse had different mixing/quality which takes alot of the song, makes it sound amateur you know? But it was a good collab between the 4 of you, but next time don't try to rush your verses, work on them more to perfect the shit.

This was alot better than the original btw, so good step up on that too.
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Re: C-Riz Ft. R.G, Big Axd & Call Me Pik-Hip Hop Soldiers Remix

Postby randomghost » Feb 14th, '09, 16:36

Xray wrote:C-riz's verse wasn't that good I felt it was lacking like it was rushed you can tell. Ax-d's verse cool, but it was mixed in a weird ass way. Beat was hot though for real, big step up from last I heard a beat from you. Pik Pocket sounds alright, lyrics were cool and so was the flow, verse wasn't mixed bad either. Your verse was good too, your verse is probably my fav on this one, cause you flowed to your beat best, and your overlays made the verse sound cooler. Mixing on this song was messy, cause each verse had different mixing/quality which takes alot of the song, makes it sound amateur you know? But it was a good collab between the 4 of you, but next time don't try to rush your verses, work on them more to perfect the shit.

This was alot better than the original btw, so good step up on that too.
thanx alot bro..appreciated :worship: :worship: :worship: :flower:
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