Smack A Model

[Requiem]

PROPZ to Epiphany for the Album Cover
Smack A Model
Ice Killa (feat. Chet Starr & MC Anonymous)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/554182857038014d/

also, shoutouts to Anonymous and Chet for doing this with me

[MC Anonymous]

YEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

[Robbie G]

haha the intro was funny...

The chorus started off good with "smack a model, let your johnny wobble" but it fell off after that. Icekilla's verse was pretty good, not much to say about it. Chet sounded like he did a good job but the quality ruined it. Mc had a really good verse but I felt like it sounded a little forced at parts.

the beat is HOT, did you produce it ice?

Overall pretty decent song for you guys.

oh, and whats up with your mic chet?

[<Stiiccy>]

mc anon...urs was preety good..some of the emotion is a bit forced...try smoothing that out...lyrics were ok ..shit didnt make sence ...but thats fine
the quality sucked hard on all 3 verses...
chet i loved ur lyrics for some odd reason lol...but the flow wasn't that smooth...try smoothing out all your words...
ice killa wow dude where do i start...you have no fucking flow at all...and try not to sound like such a fucking geek...smooth out your words so tho flow better...make sure everything rhymes...PUT SOME GOD DAMN EMOTION INTO IT...stop lettin the beat beat you...you got to beat the fuck out of the beat man (this goes for all three of you guys) make the fuckin beat your bitch...just rip the mother fucker apart with emotion...the flow will come eventually...but if you start outwith emotion you can bring people into the song...

[gutawafang]

Hey, I suggest you adjust the fonts for the names. DESIGN instead of using default fonts. Just an opinion.

[Solace]

Hey, I suggest you adjust the fonts for the names. DESIGN instead of using default fonts. Just an opinion.

Its cause Crack A Bottles cover has a default font too so yeah.

[gutawafang]

Hey, I suggest you adjust the fonts for the names. DESIGN instead of using default fonts. Just an opinion.

Its cause Crack A Bottles cover has a default font too so yeah.

LOL. Why must you follow it? I'm just giving a suggestion though. But yeah it's a good one you made man.

[Requiem]

haha the intro was funny...

The chorus started off good with "smack a model, let your johnny wobble" but it fell off after that. Icekilla's verse was pretty good, not much to say about it. Chet sounded like he did a good job but the quality ruined it. Mc had a really good verse but I felt like it sounded a little forced at parts.

the beat is HOT, did you produce it ice?

Overall pretty decent song for you guys.

oh, and whats up with your mic chet?

thx for the feed man. lmao, chet doesn't have a mic. he has a phone!!! didn't u listen to his lyrics "doin this shit on a phone, so excuse my tone"

@ sticcy z, thx for the feed man. love ur honesty, but i have to ask. around the parts where i'm like "leave ur brain shell shocked" how does that not have emotion i'm screaming anger into the mic. i thought i was making the beat my bitch at that moment

@ gutawafang, it's a standard font, but he did make it narrow

keep the feed comin u guys

[gutawafang]

Goddamn great cover. Chorus hooks me!

Second verse bad audio quality. Too loud.

First verse was cool.

Third verse full of energy.

Indeed you three sounded happy while making this song!

[Requiem]

Goddamn great cover. Chorus hooks me!

Second verse bad audio quality. Too loud.

First verse was cool.

Third verse full of energy.

Indeed you three sounded happy while making this song!

hey, thx for the feed.
lol, yes, so happy in fact, that we had to stop in the middle of recording multiple times for a little love makin

[Robbie G]

yeah but didn't he used to a have mic?

[Requiem]

yeah but didn't he used to a have mic?

broke it so i called his ass up, and made him record over the phone

[Robbie G]

wait....so you called him and talked through the phone into the computer..?

That's ghetto

[James R.]

Lmfaoo @ the most white collar villain in the world

The beginning chorus was ok but the end went COMPLETELY off flow

1st verse- Lyrics were ok. Nothing special. Flow was on the beat until the end where it went off. Everything just sounded so forced. It sounded like you were splitting your lines in the middle to make it stay on beat like you started writing to the middle of a bar on the instrumental or something so it sounds forced as hell. The emotion, probably because of the flow, sounds forced as hell also. That honestly ruined your verse or else it would have been a decent, solid verse, but it dropped to below average because of delivery.

2nd verse- The flow was on and off. But I couldn't hear half of it because the quality was so shit, so I can't really review this.

3rd verse- Flow goes off at the earholes line. And at the miracle line. The Ice Killa and Starr line. A bunch of other times. It just strays off and slips back on. The delivery was very angry and made it hard to understand some of the words, so work on that. Also I know it's your delivery style, but you need to bring it down just a notch or two because a delivery that intense sounds weird on an instrumental this up beat.

Overall the song has potential but quality and delivery fuck it over. Chet's verse can't really be counted because I can't hear it worth shit, but yeah I'd give it a 6/10. If this was studio quality, and Ice you worked on your flow. This would be a re-listenable track no doubt.

[<Stiiccy>]

@ sticcy z, thx for the feed man. love ur honesty, but i have to ask. around the parts where i'm like "leave ur brain shell shocked" how does that not have emotion i'm screaming anger into the mic. i thought i was making the beat my bitch at that moment

wanna know what emotion is?
listen to my album...and copy everything i do...then you'll have emotion...you had zero emotion