by Boston » Feb 13th, '09, 18:04
feeding while i listen.
1) This Is The End: the beat is nice, good choice. the first verse is nice, but so far while listening i prefer the second verse. the flow seems more steady. (the hook is a good fit. good there). the delivery is good through out the track, but i love how you start the 3rd verse. its kind of hard to understand some things in the third verse, but overall a good track. 7/10
2) Close My Eyes ft. PK: first thing about this beat, i heard it before, very familiar. its a pretty good beat. first verse, flow is off at some points, but i guess you can say its on for the most part. in a way so far the first two songs sound like similar concepts. (in a way) lyrics are decent, same delivery in a way.
second verse, flow is good, rhyme scheme is pretty school, weird mixing but its cool. but the verses seem to different. but not a bad verse, just not similar to each other really. this songs iight, nothing special to me. 6/10
3) My Demon My Angel Ft. Big Ax-D: the singing thing you did in the begining whatever the affect you did i actually like. (unless that was ax, either way dope) its pretty dope. then you changed up your whole delivery. kind of sounds like you need to say something/desperate. dont know how to explain it. but its a good verse, good lyrics. hook fits in nice. well done. autotune hahaa. it actually fits in a way. so no complaints from there, nice song. has some replay value. 8/10 (dont over do the autotune!) lol
4) Jokes On You: the title and the beat seems not to fit, haha dont know, i just expected something else. flow seems to fall off at some points. some funny lines in there, but i think you could of done better with the flow and putting some of the bars together. the second verse seems kind of rushed the first few bars. delivery is meh to me, i mean dont get me wrong emotions there, but i dont know, could of been different.third verse didnt like at all really either, just seemed to rushed overall. don't really like this track that much overall. 5/10
5) Hate Me: hhaha when i heard this beat, reminds me of some old school white boy shit. 1950's. i dont like the quality, but whatever, fuck quality. flow is there,cool and unique at times, some funny lines. the clothes you got are rotten lol. noise with no sound? double zero? huh wtf. lol its not a bad track. ill give it a 7/10 because some lines were good and comical and on topic, some just seem to be random.
6) Trippin Out My Mind ft. PK: haha, the song i was supposed to be on. sticcy im fuckin trippin dude, are you with me dude? nah but i told you how i felt about your first verse already. i think the hook is really gay. came out of nowhere. i thought it was one of those things that your friends send you, and you try to find something wrong with the room and then that fucking thing pops up and scares you. second verse is nice, this dude is pretty good. liked both verses i heard from him so far, but i would of done better. both fit the topic. but alright song, i think he had the better verse. 6/10
7) I Will Fullfly: its a nice beat and all but like other people said maybe a bit to angry. flow is on point for the most part but maybe off a bit at some points. the lyrics are simple but good. but i think the screaming is uneccessary. dont know what to say about this track really. 7/10
8) Where Did You Sleep Last Night ft. Mark Nichols: didnt play for me (windows media player)
9) 1 Mic: i think i fed this, because i know i definitly heard this. buts its a good track 7/10
10) Sticcy Planes: lol i laughed at the title. hit em wit some chapstick? haha. flow is there, nothing crazy but the lyrics are good, but it seems like your just rhyming words a lot of the times. delivery is there, but to me you have the same delivery often. the second verse seems much lower.(volume) seems like your hurrying up at some points. you should have other people mix your tracks if possible. and do what they got to do, probably someone more experienced, no offense. just would probably help. its an alright track. 6.5/10
11) I Need Some Head ft. E-ternal: the beat is nice, the beginning is meh. his verse, his lyrics are straight, dont like the quality but once again fuck the quality. he got some decent lines in there. i dont like how you mixed it. i thought it was talking about needing some head and your talking about drugs a lot and shit. i mean your delivery is good and shit, and the verse isnt bad but the concept? so much for the title. he stuck to the topic better, but in a way i like your verse more. but since it doesnt fit the concept of the song and not really a lot of chemistry between yall ill give it a 6/10, i mean your verse is pretty good but doesnt fit this song, if it was about that shit i would of gave your verse around 7.5-8/10
12) Self Sacrifice: i heard this beat before n i think my boi was going to do it, but now to the feed. delivery is good for the track i guess. i dont like the beginning though how you stretch the words out though. flow is choppy a bit overall. its a straight song (6.5) but overall for your album:
i think when you write your songs you need to put more concept into your lines and maybe just take it writing 4 bars at a time and make sure they all make sense and go together, and if your going to do an album make sure everything is as perfect as possible. i mean this 'album' is still better that what some people drop on here but you still need to make improvement. now im going to give this an overall grade of the average of each track i did. haha so hang on..
since i couldnt hear one song..
73.5/110 (11 songs, 1-10, 10 being the best)
which is: 67. hah. i don't want to make it seem that bad, but its a decent album. looking forward to your next one