8 bars feat Joshua (all feedback will be returned)

[enjinn]

there were suppose to be more mc's on this but i didnt want to wait any longer...i go first, Joshua is second...feedback is much appreciated and will be returned... http://www.zshare.net/audio/556027142c113fb6/ ...thanks

[Requiem]

that was really good man. i really don't know who was who, so i'm just gonna feed it verse by verse.

first verse was really good, flow was on and off, but the lyrics were great, and emotion was there. just need to work on pronunciation i guess.

second verse was sick as hell, great flow and emotion. only one stumble as far as i could see. the "eyelid" part u kinda hesitated

if u needed more MC's u kno where i'm at Lol

[MC Anonymous]

First verse flowed pretty good, enuciation needs to be worked on a bit, lyrical content was good, Solid verse.

Second verse impressed me with his lyrical content and flow, so big ups to him. Everything else was solid.

Not much to critique. Great drop man

[enjinn]

Ice Killa, Anonymous...thanks a lot fofr the feedback...its really appreciated!

[slimsoxshady]

i think the second guy cheated

wasn't it suppose to be 8 bars? that shit was not no 8 bars haha

both ur flows really impressed me tho, solid drops

[Xray]

WOAH! That dude Joshua is fucking sick! love his emotion and lyrics. Crazy verse from him, loving that shit. Your verse was pretty good too, alittle pronounciation problem but all good. Delivery wasn't perfect, maybe more energy and it would of sounded better. Hot collab though, you gotta give me that dude Joshua's myspace, his fucking ill. Oh btw the beat is HOT AS SHIT! *Downloads*

[enjinn]

shady, Xray...thanks so much for the feedback...yeah, Joshua cheated!...and Xray...ill hit you up with his myspace...thanks again!