Fuck Wack Lyrics

[DelinQuent]

ok, not hating whatsoever. the lyrics.... they are wack. you rhyme well. very well. BUT do the rhymes make sense? without making sense it's SIMPLE to rap. the craft of rap is to make sense and also have it flow and rhyme well. for example "I'll test your G's, erect, jerk off, and shoot you free".... WHAT? you want to cum on me? lol. so, try to make more sense, i'll be checking your other tracks as well. you have potential.

on the positive side, you demonstrate the ability to rhyme well. flow is also decent on this.

but, delivery sounds as if that wasnt your natural voice. i dont know you personally, but i dont think you talk with a voice that high, so why rap with a voice that high?

all in all, stick to it and do what you do.

[Xray]

First off I gotta say what the fuck is up with dissing the original song? that song is dope, and you acting like you can beat the original song is funny as hell since your one was wack.

Pronounciation was fucked up big time, like seriously your tongue was moving and twirling in all areas, made it sound like you on a disability or something. Delivery was fucked up cause your voice sounded like a bitch like that, I personally would of liked the delivery more if you kept it more calm, cause your voice sounds like shit when you rap like that.

Flow was weak due to you screaming your ass off and running out of breath. I agree with DQ about the lyrics, cause your getting the wrong idea in being "lyrical" it doesn't mean you gotta use big words to sound like your lyrical, it's how you use them. And using big word after word in raps is pointless, cause it doesn't sound good. Take Lloyd Banks for example, his lyrical and does he use big words? no.

Take it how you wanna man, you can hate or you can say thanks and work on your raps.

[MC Anonymous]

First off I gotta say what the fuck is up with dissing the original song? that song is dope, and you acting like you can beat the original song is funny as hell since your one was wack.

Pronounciation was fucked up big time, like seriously your tongue was moving and twirling in all areas, made it sound like you on a disability or something. Delivery was fucked up cause your voice sounded like a bitch like that, I personally would of liked the delivery more if you kept it more calm, cause your voice sounds like shit when you rap like that.

Flow was weak due to you screaming your ass off and running out of breath. I agree with DQ about the lyrics, cause your getting the wrong idea in being "lyrical" it doesn't mean you gotta use big words to sound like your lyrical, it's how you use them. And using big word after word in raps is pointless, cause it doesn't sound good. Take Lloyd Banks for example, his lyrical and does he use big words? no.

Take it how you wanna man, you can hate or you can say thanks and work on your raps.

Great feed dude, nah I don't take it as hate at all, just constructive criticism. I'll make sure my next drop is better then this one. . Lyrics wise I did it as a text style hence the fucked up structure, so next drop I do I'll take my time to make the lyrics 100% accurate seeing how I fucked up on this one. Thanks for the feed dude

[gutawafang]

Well, I guess you rapped the wrong song. You should rap out "BATTLE MY ENEMIES".
Cuz that's the REAL you.

I hope I'm correct.

[Slim Zaddy]

okay ,,
well first i did'nt like the beat , and it was not clear , your voice was higher than the beat and making it annoying .. flow was on and off . at some points .. i did'nt like the concept and lyrics .. last once were much better . and as other members said . you need to slow down ,, the tone of the song is ruined cuz of your voice on the mic .. why not singing slowly , just calm down , and sing from your heart , it will be much better it's 6/10 .. , that's my real feed man ,, if you want one .. gd luck .. keep doing your thing ,,

[Solace]

Well, I guess you rapped the wrong song. You should rap out "BATTLE MY ENEMIES".
Cuz that's the REAL you.

I hope I'm correct.

Yeah I would enjoy that, hearing Battle My Enemies

[Jay-19]

Damn bro!
You're really improving on flow and delivery!
Still needs a little work though.

But this is hot man, as always, you're lyrics pretty much beat the shit out of most rappers these days.
Delivery was cool, love that angry style you got going there.
Flow is the best so far from you in my opinion, but as said, could be better.

But just keep practicing man, you're definitely improving dude!

[Xray]

First off I gotta say what the fuck is up with dissing the original song? that song is dope, and you acting like you can beat the original song is funny as hell since your one was wack.

Pronounciation was fucked up big time, like seriously your tongue was moving and twirling in all areas, made it sound like you on a disability or something. Delivery was fucked up cause your voice sounded like a bitch like that, I personally would of liked the delivery more if you kept it more calm, cause your voice sounds like shit when you rap like that.

Flow was weak due to you screaming your ass off and running out of breath. I agree with DQ about the lyrics, cause your getting the wrong idea in being "lyrical" it doesn't mean you gotta use big words to sound like your lyrical, it's how you use them. And using big word after word in raps is pointless, cause it doesn't sound good. Take Lloyd Banks for example, his lyrical and does he use big words? no.

Take it how you wanna man, you can hate or you can say thanks and work on your raps.

Great feed dude, nah I don't take it as hate at all, just constructive criticism. I'll make sure my next drop is better then this one. . Lyrics wise I did it as a text style hence the fucked up structure, so next drop I do I'll take my time to make the lyrics 100% accurate seeing how I fucked up on this one. Thanks for the feed dude

Wow I'm actually surprised you didn't take it the wrong way, glad you can take criticism man, good looks on that.

[Solace]

First off I gotta say what the fuck is up with dissing the original song? that song is dope, and you acting like you can beat the original song is funny as hell since your one was wack.

Pronounciation was fucked up big time, like seriously your tongue was moving and twirling in all areas, made it sound like you on a disability or something. Delivery was fucked up cause your voice sounded like a bitch like that, I personally would of liked the delivery more if you kept it more calm, cause your voice sounds like shit when you rap like that.

Flow was weak due to you screaming your ass off and running out of breath. I agree with DQ about the lyrics, cause your getting the wrong idea in being "lyrical" it doesn't mean you gotta use big words to sound like your lyrical, it's how you use them. And using big word after word in raps is pointless, cause it doesn't sound good. Take Lloyd Banks for example, his lyrical and does he use big words? no.

Take it how you wanna man, you can hate or you can say thanks and work on your raps.

Great feed dude, nah I don't take it as hate at all, just constructive criticism. I'll make sure my next drop is better then this one. . Lyrics wise I did it as a text style hence the fucked up structure, so next drop I do I'll take my time to make the lyrics 100% accurate seeing how I fucked up on this one. Thanks for the feed dude

Wow I'm actually surprised you didn't take it the wrong way, glad you can take criticism man, good looks on that.

lol i remember when i was being a pussy when you said my track was shit (which it was less than shit)