
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Tash8 wrote:yo bro, i didn't make this beat, why does it say it's prod by me? i just mixed it...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
DelinQuent wrote:not hating, but you critisized me for using simple rhymes... first verse, extremely simple.
BUT unlike you, i LOVE simple lyrics, so i thougth the first verse was fire, flow and delivery were great.
second verse, "impearlistic communism, goverment mentally impared" too many syllables in that line made it sound weird, other than that, another great verse
3rd verse, again, good shit.
hook-loved it, catchy, meaningful, great/
10/10 first track from you that i can honestly listen to and enjoy more than one time, DLed.
you've finally tuned your voice down a bit to sound more natural and it sounded great. keep up the good work
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