2 completely different things (final)

by **AspirinE** » Feb 18th, '09, 17:44

2 completely different things - A.S.P from "The big Deal" (see noizemaker thread)

Unfortunately its not yet a mixtape-mastered version, but its very quality... And yes this is the 3rd time i redid this song but still worth a listen.

2 dif things.mp3 - 4.12MB

by **Speech** » Feb 18th, '09, 18:31

deep one...i like it
you have this really nice underground flow that makes your trax enjoyable as fuck
and since your chilled out delivery doesn sound like you lack in power, it sounds pro
nice one on the beat too...matches your aura man
you made it?
this is a straight 10/10 to me cuz the lyrics really made me listen
peace

by **neversnooze** » Feb 18th, '09, 19:07

yo aspirine,

nice lyrics your flow was sick and delivery was political. as for the beat i thought it didnt fit as well as the one before this.

mixtape is looking good :worship:

by **Tash8** » Feb 18th, '09, 19:08

sup bro, did u make the beat, cause that's amazing!

i think maybe raise ur volume of acapella just a bit (but u said it hasn't been mastered yet so ..) I'd feel like you should change up ur voice throughout the song, sounds a bit monotone, you know what i mean? lyrics are nice, meaning is there, flow starts out great, but gets really boring by like halfway through, i feel like you either need to change the speed, or change the rhyme scheme. on second thought, the beat is kinda annoying me, the the little double kick is really annoying... but everything else is good. oh and another thing, why is it that sometimes the volume is loud then goes low and goes loud again? (well that be fixed when mastering??? )

anyways, decent song... my main issues were mainly with beat and mixing... the rapping was pretty good man, i liked it.