[Mixtape]C-Riz - Serious C-Riz

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propz for this review killa
hmm...sorry i disappointed you....i guess you'r right that i rushed it in the end a bit...
and thought the word "remix" would be enuff...but yeah..credit goes to killa for that hook...

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[SajN]

Front Of The Line

I didn't understand much in the beginning, but later I understood more. Did you copy an Eminem line at 1.00 (there will never be another me). Oh well, lyrics sounded cool, and the flow was aight.


Trapped

I can only judge Profaz on the flow and delivery, and both of them were good.

I don't know why, I just didn't feel the hook.

C-Riz, you had a nice verse, lyrics were good, and so was the flow.
Spizzy kills this shit though


Evil Absinth

I loved how you flowed on this
Delivery is amazing!
Your lyrics were a little better than good.
the flow on 3rd verse weren't as good as in the 1st verse.
The hook is decent


Skit

I remember this lol... You showed me this on msn right?


Life

The hook was very good
And the verses were decent. A little off here and there, but it was aight.


Child Memories

Already fed..


Psycho Remix

The verses were very good, nice lyrics. And the hook was well performed. Nice lyrics Killa


Plastic Man

One of the best track in this mixtape. You flow very good. Lyrics were better than average, even though your pronounciation does it hard to undertand sometimes, but meh...
Really nice track



Every beat in this mixtape were VERY good

And this little mixtape is aight. I see some improvement, and look forward for more (where I will be featured )







To the other people: Come on, why ain't many people feeding this? He leaves a lot of feed. He deserves to get something back

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nice one SajN... really appreciate the time you took
...and well..up to the members ....

ps: i don't see how it's bitten..i mean maybe he used it aswell but...well its not like a whole rhyme or shit...

[Xray]

I'll download and leave a full review soon bro, congrats on the tape.

[Tash8]

Front Of THe line:
tight beat. vocals should be a bit louder at the beginning... flow is decent but kinda weird cause ur flowing but i'm not sure if it's to the beat.. lyrics are pretty decent.. delivery is pretty cool.. i understood most of everything you said, so big improvement there..

Trapped: I like the transition from the first song to the second, you get a lot more serious. the beat is great, the first person is decent but i dunt understand anything. chorus is ok it can be good, but mixing isn't great on it. your verse is pretty good man, flow is good, delivery is ur best.. who's on third verse, he sounds like eminem with part of his flow, but it was TIGHT... i think that's spizzy right?

Evil Absinth: def one of ur better tracks, first verse and hook were awesome, you slipped up a bit on the second verse, flow was pretty damn repetitive on that second verse.

Skit: lol wtf????

Life: wow great beat, chorus is real nice, but i felt it could be bit louder and ther needed to be vocals dead center. verse 1 was awkward with the flow, lyrics were good, meaning was good.. verse 2 was a lot better.

Child Memories: sweet beat... great concept.. verse 2 was my fav... flow needs to be tighter overall, but its your better flow on this album.

Pyscho Remix: tight beat, same feed as I've said before, your flow is somewhat catchy though, not bad..

Plastic Man: beat is great, and i feel this is going to be a great ending to a tape. flow is GREAT.. i love the lyrics and meaning on this, i can relate to it quite a bit man... my fav track and i'm glad it was the last one i listned to man.. good job. also i'm a good listener as well!

Overall: this is an improvement, my fav tracks were plastic man BY Far and then trapped, and life... the only track i felt had replay value was plastic man though, so you gotta try to keep the listener more interested, by that i mean by making a tighter flow, more interesting lyrics... anyways man, this is an improvement from what i've recently heard you and if you keep doing tracks like plastic man, i can see you becoming one of the better rappers on tr... keep it up.

[DelinQuent]

wow chris, my fucking bad. didnt even see this. DLing now, full feed to come hopefully within 2-3 days or less

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mega propz tash
i appreciate it big time yeah i should try to do a "center" hook for upcoming tracks...
thank again

[DelinQuent]

1-cant understand the intro but it sounds cool lol. delivery is sick, good shit. flow doesnt match the beat very well tho. rhyming is good tho. flow comes and goes throughout the rest.

whoa, thought it was over lol. flow is much better on this part but it still pops off in some spots.

overall 6/10, couldnt really get into it. good for a mixtape tho.

2-beat is sick. different language, cant understand it. can't feed this.

hook is eh, has a good flow, but didnt really enjoy it.

flow is nice on this verse, rhyming is also good off the emergency line.

spizzy, kills this. good shit. flow is sick, rhyming is also good. and holy shit, flow switches, god damnnnn.

overall 7/10, first verse ruined it lol. spizzy murked this track

3- flow is good. rhyming is also steady. delivery is lacking

hook-eh, again, not enjoyable.

delivery is much better on 2nd verse, good shit. flow is same as first verse which is decent. rhyming seems a little down on this verse tho.

mixing on 3rd verse is weird. sounds different. oh, that was an intro lol. not into this verse.

overall 5/10, personally i didnt like this track.

4-wack lol.

5-beat sounds good.
i'm assuming it starts with the hook, i like this one better than the rest. a little more enjoyable.

flow is jerky, sound like your struggling with pronunciation which is ruining the flow. rhyming sounds forced in some spots. not a bad verse tho

you sound way diff on the second verse lol. flow is off most of this verse. rhyming is hardly there. didnt seem to be much rhyming going on at all.

overall 6/10, track had potential with the subject. flow and rhyming messed it up.

6-like the acoustic guitar beat. rhyming is much better on this track. flow is also much better. but syllables mess it up in some spots.

hate the hook. i honestly think you could have done a better hook.

flow again has some syllable issues on this, but it's not bad. rhymes seem a little down again.

overall 6/10, flow messing up keeps ruining your verses. but it wasnt a bad track.

7-beat is okay. sounded like a mart production. and as you say, it is.

flow is much better here. i didnt hear it mess up at all on the first verse. rhyming was decent at best.

hook/outro was eh, not into it. the actual outro was good tho. loved it.

8-Emadyville/D.Dubs did a song to this lol.

initial rhymes were great off the initial stress line. then it comes back down. eyes close, might go, slide show, nice home. nice rhyming there. good verse here, perhaps the best on this mixtape.

rhyming on this verse was hardly there at the start. loved how you ended the verse, the words were nice, good ideas behind them. good shit.

love the inspirational words on this verse. flow stays on. rhyming is decent.

overall 8/10, by far the best track on this tape.

OVERALL FOR THE ENTIRE TAPE, not at average, 5/10. i know English isn't your first language, but you should work on pronunciation and vocab. learning a better vocab will help with your rhyming and help you work on your syllables. working on pronunciation will allow people to listen naturally without having to try to understand what you're saying, which will in turn make your songs FAR more enjoyable.

dont take all this feed as a negative. you've progressed VERY quickly. with more work, better vocab, and better pronunciation, your flow and rhyming will become more advanced and you will progress MUCH faster. so with this tape it shows just how far you've came. keep up the hard work and it will pay off

EDIT- another thing i wanted to point out was flow. it seems as tho the flow on each of these tracks is extremely similar. so if i was you i'd work on my flow hardcore. you wanna try to have a more catchy flow to keep the listened entertained

[Le Tunisien]

all ur songs are really great , especially evil absinth and Psycho rmx it rock

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thanks for the breakdown DQ .....i will keep my hard work..and hey nobody is perfect im still progressing...sry you couldnt enjoy it as much
thx tunisien

[Le Tunisien]

thanks for the breakdown DQ .....i will keep my hard work..and hey nobody is perfect im still progressing...sry you couldnt enjoy it as much
thx tunisien

dont forget me about posting the lyrics of Psycho remix

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the breakdown DQ .....i will keep my hard work..and hey nobody is perfect im still progressing...sry you couldnt enjoy it as much
thx tunisien

i'll be keeping my eye on you, as i have been. you've came a verrrrry long way from when you first started out

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aww stop it... no homo

[Xray]

Front Of The Line: Intro wasn't too good, too much reverb on the bridge chorus and intro. Beat wasn't too good but it was alright, I didn't hate it. Lyrics were cool, lotta rhymes in each line which is always good to hear. "I can smell the jealousy from far behind the screen" haha nice line. When you start a fresh take at 1:20 your voice sounds much better, has more emotion in it, plus it sounds more gangsta. Delivery wasn't great, but it was good. Mixing was too basic, you should compress your vocals more aka add more dynamic or compressor, same thing, it would make you sound better IMO. Good song.

Trapped: Beat is gangsta shit. Profaz verse is nice, his emotion was dope as fuck, the flow for a change is PERFECT! finally you slow your fast ass. So yeah flow and delivery was good, mixed very well, matches beat 100%, solid verse. Chorus was cool, I liked the idea of the flow on it. But the way you mixed the overlays was pretty bad, the timing wasn't good, with better timing it woulda sounded much better. Plus man the vocals sound empty, need 2 add more in your effect chain. And because the mixing sounded empty, the verse sounds empty, its desperately needing to be compressed. Your voice changed a bit on here, which was good for a change, suited the beat, and the flow was good to. Nice verse with better mixing it woulda been a lot better. Damn spizzy's flow when he switched it up was the shit, crazy stuff. Loved his verse, delivery was outrageous just how I like it, that pissed off shit. Great collab, all 3 did good.

Evil Absinth: HOLY FUCKING SHIT! Can't believe this beat is that good, love the fuck out of it. I thought this day wouldn't come, you on a hardcore underground beat damn, crazy combination. Pronunciation on this track is dope as hell, I understood every line without hesitation. The chorus is the best part of the song, love how you sound dark as fuck on this. Lyrics are evil, delivery one the first verse wasn't too good, but on the second verse its better. Flow was good too, you always flow on beats so that's good. Actually everything on the second verse is better than the first, its darker, more on topic, flow is genius, delivery is dope too. Verse 3 is nice too, love the part how you made it sound like your talking to yourself, good shit. Loving this song, definitely one of your better tracks.

Skit: Lmao, funny voice you put on, sounded like your on stage or something while talking.

Life: HOLY SHIT STAINS! this beat is fucking great, I love it. I feel the lyrics, real talk shit, but you didn't deliver them good, the flow didn't match this beat, like I said the delivery put me down on this. It sounded too boring, chorus wasn't bad but I didn't like the panning thing you did on the mixing, it sounds weird on this beat. Not much else to say about this song except it needs to be worked on.

Child Memories: LMFAO at the "Remember the times" in the intro hahahahah, you sounded Asian on that lmaooooooooo. Beat is laid back as hell, and so is your delivery. Flow was good, lyrics were good, but the mixing was poor. Empty as hell, if I was to mix this song I would of added a compressor and a multiband just to make it more full. Cause atm it sounds like you barely added anything. Didn't like this song, it was too boring for me.

Psycho Remix: I love this beat, but Killas version of this song is too good to be topped. Verses were mixed nice, flow and being on topic was good too. Delivery was good I liked it, laid back shit. Chorus was a rip, you stole his lyrics/flow, which made you seem lazy to think of a new hook. Plus the delivery on the hook was fucked up, it wasn't good at all, hook is bad. Minus the intro and chorus and this song would of been great. Good song but next time don't get lazy on the hook.

Plastic Man: The beat and the hook sample is fucking crazy. Good verse from you man, mixed great to, didn't bother me so it was good. It was a good song man, verses had a good feel towards them. Giving advice and shit, I like that, and the flow was really good on it man. Your voice sounds mature and so does the concept so it was a good look. Seriously that hook is incredible, it brought a lot to the song, reading the title I kind of giggled, but when I heard the song it was real and something real isn't something I laugh at. One of your better songs. Good shit.

Overall: Your pronunciation has improved, I can understand 90% of the shit you say, the areas where I can't understand you is either if the track was mixed poorly, or either you didn't deliver it good. Your flow has come a long way man, your flowing on every track now. Your mixing isn't perfect, so you should definitely try improve on that area, cause it would bring a lot more to your songs than you think. You don't add much to your vocals I can tell, which is why it sounds empty on some tracks, so you should work on that man. Your delivery is improving, but you still need some work, a few verses where delivery is lacking needs working. But overall your delivery is nice. This tape was good, not sure if its better than your previous but some songs were very good which I'll listen to more in the future. "Evil Absinth" was the first time you ever use a underground beat that hardcore, which was great to see cause you did dope on it. "Plastic Man" was another favorite. Nice mixtape, great work, looking forward to your next homie.